> Darkness > by Secondchancer > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Darkness (Redone) > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Running through the forest Ray burst through thorn bushes breathing in the frozen air of norhtern New York (State not city) looking around the forest Ray breathed in heavily gasping as he felt his ribs move back into place. Looking down he saw blood slowly seep throught the shrinking hole grunting he muttered "Damn Gentek when i get my hands on Grant i'll use his fucking spine as a jump rope." standing up Ray hissed in pain moving through the forest slowly. Ray is a 22 year old white male he has raven black hair streaked with silver he had 5 o'clock shadow his eyes were a deep golden color void of humanity his right eye has a scar that reaches down to his jaw line with more under his black jacket that had the COD Ghost symbol on both shoulders underneath that is a light grey long sleaved shoulder, with faded jeans covering black boots. The snow crunches under his boots pushing past some tree branches he came across the instalation smiling he lifted up a bandana with a smiling sharks mouth putting on some Riddick goggles he crouched walking by were some Black Watch soldiers jumping forward he stabbed on with his sword grabbing the other in a Armored Claw he crushed his skull consuming both he took on their forms and moved toward the base thinking back to the last time he was in the instalation. (17 years ago) Being thrown onto the floor of a cell Ray cried out in pain curling into a ball he began to cry "Quiet you little shit or I WILL give you something to cry about !!" shouted one of the Black Watch soldier turning Ray heard him mutter "Back here instead of hunting down Mercer and Heller stupid ass motherfuckers." Ray was quiet after that outburst he remembered what the Black Watch men did to his father and mother. Shaking Ray looked around he noticed three more kids all girls looking around he saw nothing no bed, no toilet, no blankets, just nothing shivering he heard on of the girls say "They won't give you anything until they make you an evolved." Turning Ray saw a girl that was a little older then him maybe 7 or 8 years old looking at her she was slightly tanned with deep velvet red hair turning she stared into his eyes she had deep emerald eyes "A-a what ?" Ray asked stuttering "An evolved they don't tell us but the three of us turned apparantly cuz we have these." she said motioning around her room he saw a bed, toilet and blankets looking around he sighed and went to lay on his side "My name is Lucy by the way whats your name ?" "Lucy can i go to sleep please ?" "Ok night Ray." (2 days later) Ray stared at the straps two Black Watch men had come and taken him to the bleach whit room inside was a table with brown padded straps that they hooked him to. Looking around he saw a machine hooked to his heart he guessed since it was place above it then he heard the door open "Hello Ray my name is Dr.Grant ." trying to look at the doctor he was met with the sight of a elderly African American he had grey white hair he was wearing blue scrubs and a white lab coat Ray whimpered. Walking up Dr.Grant pulled out a syringe filled with red black liquid without a word he cleaned Rays arm and pressed the needle in and injecting the liquid Rays eyes shot open and he screamed thrashing around the table his screams echoed aroung the facility. Grant looked down at the child the heart monitor said he was dead but Grant knew better walking up he pulled out a scaple and drug it down Rays right eye fast and deep both eyes shot open and the screaming began again his eye color changed to gold and his right eye healed a scar forming above and below the eye. Ray looked around the room looking to his right he saw Grant smiling "Good your away now lets run some test can you feel this ?" he said before slaming a scapel into his right arm on a very sensitive part Ray screamed "Good good now lets try some acid." turning he picked up another syringe and stuck it into his arm Ray cried. (11 years later) Ray looked aroung his cell he turned 16 his powers have been expanding faster and faster looking around he was alone Lucy, Carla, Juvia, and Erza were gone taken somewhere long ago and disposed of "Hey kid time to go." Micheal said turning Ray saw the Black Watch soldier he only knew his name from when he tried his first escape three years ago with Lucy and Juvia smiling Ray said "Aww you still mad about three years ago Mickey boy ?" "Nope not after what i did with Lucy and Juvia." he sneered Ray snarled like a feral dog slaming into the wall cracking it slightly he wore white scurbs with white slip ons "I've waited a long time to get rid of you boy." Being led out of the cell he watched as three orion soldiers around him along with Micheal walking down the hallway they turned multiple times and came and after thirty minutes of walking and Ray trying to goad them into a fight he was placed into a small room with nothing inside turning he shouted "What is this you pussies to scared to fight me one on one gonna gas me HUH !!!!!" nothing nothing but the humming of the air conditioning unit. Looking around Ray saw nothing heard nothing and smelled nothing sighing he lied down and looked at the ceiling the shutting his eyes he sighed. After a few minutes the door opened looking at it he saw some workers step in just a couple of workers and what not standing up they didn't see him smiling he rushed forward killing four of them he consumed them all leaving no trace and taking the form of one Yuri Makarov walking out he made his way out of the instalation no fighting no killing just walked out after getting into Yuri's car he drove off to anywhere "Damn thought I could fight my way out." (Present day) "Damn thought I wouldn't have to fight my way in." Ray said tearing a Black Watch trooper in half taking his gun he opened up in the corridor killing thirteen more guard forcing his way into a room he was met with an odd machine going up to it he saw it had a platform going up to a ring with multiple dialects and pictures carved into it walking up to it he reached out to touch it "Now i wouldn't do that if i were you Ray." Whipping around he saw Grant and four evolved dress in Black Watch armor each having there weapons ready snarling Ray said "Grant just the person i wanted to see." Ray leapt into the air reverting to his old form and landing a few feet infront of them "So who wants to die first ?" Ray said spreading his arms equipping his sword and whip he lashed out. His whip catching the first in the chest bringing him close he cut the evolved in half and consumed him smiling he lunged forward only to be slamed by the other three. (Equestria) Walking through the Eveerfree Fluttershy, Applejack and Twilight walking along the path the three friends made their way to Zecoras hut looking for something Twilight needed for a spell. Walking through the forest they came across an open field that they had to cross to get to the hut walking through the ground shook half way "W-w-what was t-t-that ?" Fluttershy whispered loking around they felt the ground shake again this time part of the ground cracked a few feet away the ground opened up "What in the tarnation is going on here ?" Applejack said looking around trying to figure out what was going on. Stepping forward carefully they tried walking until a red portal opened up it pulsed a few times then three figures shot out of it slaming into the earth and skidding a few yards away. Pushing itself up one of the beings in a black jacket walked over to the others a sword formed out of its arm slaming it into an armored body then red and black tendrils connected to the figures body before disappearing looking over it started to laugh "DR.GRANT SO GOOD TO SEE YOU WHERE YOU ARE NOW LET ME HELP YOU UP !!" reaching down it picked up the other by its head and snarled "Time for you to die." and then it crushed its skull the same tendrils connected to his body then it fell to one knee breathing in heavily. Walking forward they got closer to the figure reaching out her hand Fluttershy said "A-are y-you okay ?" as soon as her hand touched the shoulder it grabbed her looking up it had a bandanna and goggles that were tinted black and reminded the three of them of sunglasses. Looking into the eyes of the three woman he could only say "Beautiful." before passing out and slumping to the ground. Fluttershy jumped behind Applejack and Twilight looking down at the creature "What d-d-did he mean b-b-by that ?" "Well 'Shy he was staring at you so maybe he meant that you were beautiful." Aj said staring at the creature before leaning down and slinging one of its arms over her shoulder "Come on Twi lets get it back to your house and contact thah princess." > Waking up > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ray began to come to from passing out grunting he sat up pain ripping across his body ignoring the signals he moved looked around the room standard hospistal room no windows solid doors. Swinging his legs off the bed Ray felt the cool tile touch his skin standing up straight to his full 6'' 7' height he cracked his neck feeling his muscles and bone shift slightly under the stress of waking up turning he cast his gaze to the door. Walking over he activated his predator sense the area was bathed in a red light spreading out far no one was around when the area faded to the original colors sighing he gripped the door and pulled it was locked. Ray grunted ripping the door off its hinges him moved it out first using it as a shield for down the hallway just in case seeing that no one was shooting him up or yelling about how he escaped. Slaming the door into a wall Ray moved on placing his usual suit back on goggles and bandanna hanging around his neck looking around he saw nobody pushing through another set of doors he was met with transparent glass opening up to a massive room. Cocking one of his eye brows Ray brought up his fist setting it near the glass he flicked the glass breaking it as if it were nothing as it the glass fell it tinkled on the ground jumping a good 100 feet to the ground he landed making no noise moving to one of the stained glass windows to see an open garden opening a window slowly he steping through he ended up behind some bushes. Looking around he began to change into a jet black armored form the armor slightly bulky the "collar" stood up covering Rays neck, the area on his head shoulders and chest was the thickest of the armor but it was as light as his normal clothes. Ray noticed eight women each was different what he could tell was they were not human they had slighlty pony attributes hooves for feet, ears were ontop of their heads, tails swished behind them but each was different they either had wings, horns, a combination, or none at all wanting to know what they were talking about Ray moved closer. Jumping up onto a low hanging branch above him he moved through the leaves and branches alerting no one Ray jumped to the tree above the eight women watching the closely remembering the three women from he thought "Wow thought i was dreamin may be a different but those three look beautiful in there own ways." watching them the discussion was about him and his rather violent arrival. (Below the tree) Applejack felt some leaves fall onto her shoulder not even looking up she brushed off the leaves today she was wearing Denim Jeans, and a plaid t-shirt tied above he belly but she wore a belt buckle with her Cutie Mark on the buckle. Sighing she kicked the ground with her boots and said "Look princess Twi is right the fight was one sided when they arrived but he passed out and was bleeding pretty bad and from what the doc said he was pretty bad off." nodding Celestia turned to her niece Candance and said "What did you get from him Candance?" "Well when i did the read him all i felt was darkness the stuff Sombra was made of but worse he had no feelings left he only had hatred, malice, and bloodlust he has a very dark soul it was empty when i peered into it." "You mean he is all saddy waddy maybe we can fix that with a party !!!!!" Pinkie said jumping up infront of the princesses sighing Twilight picked the mare up in her magic and teleported her behind the group with a tape around he mouth "But princess how could his soul be like this ?" "Twilight as much as i wanted to dig just doing the reading was scary and dangerous for me i did it only three minutes but in that time i felt as if something was hunting me." "R-really b-but how c-could that happen ?" Fluttershy whispered hiding behind Rainbow Dash who boasted "HA he didn't look so tough i could take him with both my wings tied behind my back." "Dash we told yah he had a sword for his right hand and it was SERRATED on the outside he would tear you in half !!" Applejack said Looking to Rarity and seeing her eyeing the tree they stood under. Applejack poked her trying to get her attention "Rares you've been staring at the tree for the past four minutes." "Its just that the leaves fell from this tree and its the middle of spring." Rarity said getting closer to the try and almost making something out. (Tree) Ray saw as the girl peered up the holding his breathe he hoped that she didn't see him backing up slowly and slightly until he bumped into something turning slowly he saw the bright pink one smiling if his armor showed his face he woul have been making the making the biggest WTF face ever but since it was basically a black plate looking thing "Soooo are you coming down now ?" Ray looked her over she wore a purple short sleaved shirt and black sweat pants her breast (Which he guessed were around a D size showed a little) what Ray failed to notced was the branch breaking. As the two fell Ray landed squarely on his back and in the middle of all the women even the pink one "How the hell did you ?" Staring at him the princess cocked an eyebrow and frown slightly confused stepping forward she said "How did you get out of the room ?" looking up Ray saw the princess she wore a white regal dress that seem to reach the ground but stopped mere inches from it the dress hugged her body generously. Grunting Ray slowly got up adressing the situation the three mares he saw the time before were dress great each matching their personality the yellow one wore a light lime green dress (she had a rather generous chest compared to the others even the pink one) the dress added a regal look to her one that rivaled the princesses she seemed to hide behind her hair that just mad Ray want to hug her, next was the purple one was in the a librarian. Grunting Ray looked to her and said "If that was your best holding cell get your money back." "So you broke out ?" "Ma'am i dislike being held captive no all i have to say is............ SMOKE BOMB !!!" Ray yelled the last part throwing his arm down turning he ran through the smoke dodging the group he turned to look slighly laughing at this until he felt wieghtless looking down he noticed he was at least thirteen feet off the ground. Luna walked to the group frowning with the creature in tow he was cross legged and frowning and mumbling how this was bull shit and that they cheated "Now if we may continue with this." Celestia said rubbing her eyes slightly "Fine and sorry i had one of those left and i figured what the hell why not use it now." "Okay now what is your name and what are you ?" "My name is Ray and i'm an evolved." "What is an evolved." "The next step i don't know the only thing i do know is that i'm very powerful so yeah can i be put down ?" "Yes you may Ray." Celestia said earning giggles from the others sighing Ray felt the ground looking around he noted how wonderful this world looked and felt looking at the three women again he blushed then looked back at the princess "Yes now where am i ?" "Your in equestria right now your at the canterlot castle where me and my sister rule together-" Celestia was interupted by a man or Ray could guess was a boy he was wearing the usual Douche Bag get up "Auntie someone has broken a window in the main hall........... What is that thing !!!!" the blonde horned thing said looking at Ray in disgust "Blueblood this is Ray he is the creature that i told you about." "Just keep it away from me !!!" He said moving behind his aunt Ray cracked his neck making the girls back away growling he dropped his armored look to have his clothes back. Looking into Bluebloods eyes he snarled "Call me a thing again and i'll use your horn as my personal back scratcher GET ME ?" Blueblood nodded and ran away smelling of fear sighing Ray turned to Celestia "Sorry about that but i dislike being call anything less than a person." "Understood now its time for you to catch the train." "Train ?" "Yes you will be going to Ponyville with these six mare please try and be nice." "Yes ma'am but i'm only as nice as people treat me so if these six are nice then i'll be extra nice." "Good have fun." turning the two saw the six woman awestruck by what happend Fluttershy was blushing for some reason Ray couldn't help but say "So you in the green dress your name is Fluttershy ?" she nodded "That is a very pretty name matching you perfectly." blushing she looked up at the man seeing his eyes full of kindness but it seemed false turning he began to talk to the others. > Arrival > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ray sat on a bench staring at the passing scenery his hood, bandana, and goggles were on and obscuring his features sighing he cast his gaze on the six mares discussing something picking up his ear buds and i pod he began to listen to a few songs but at the moment he listened to Through the Ghost by Shinedown. His eyes began to become heavy sighing he fell asleep outside the sun began to and the sky darkened falling into a deep slumber he began to dream. (Dream Realm Luna) As Luna walked through the dream realm she peered into various dream scapes each dream had a door but to her it was a mirror. Walking through the realm she came across a black door with red marking that looked like a wild animal had tried clawing its way in walking up she touched the door pulling back quickly the door seemed to leak massive amounts of dark energy. Luna looked to the door she had been through this world a thousand times over and never has she ever seen something like this but after the creature Twilight and her friends had brought to her and her sister she could tell whos door this was. Reaching out and opening the door luna was met with a massive city buildings had massive holes in them spaning either half way through the building or the just in the middle as if something had crashed through them on building that caught her eye was the massive one in the middle of everything is was broken half way up and leaned slightly it was held together by red tendrils that seemed to pulse as if they were alive. Walking through the city she heard the roar of an unknown creature she hid behind a pillar looking around the corner she saw four massive black things roll past spray painted on the side in big light grey letters was BLACK WATCH watching them pass by she was stunned by the world Ray came from. Walking out she saw the things stop and multiple men get out holding what she could guess were rifles she heard some of them yelling about something she only caught one word "Hades" cloaking her self she got closer then she saw the figures grabbing a family throwing them to the ground the young girl was crying being held by her mother. Yelling the lead figure began to point at the family then the building behind them and then pointed a rifle at their heads the woman was saying something as Luna got closer she heard the res of the conversation. "So you will keep this story up huh !?!?" the man snarled moving the rifle he shot the man in the head spraying blood on the pavement moving it back he pointed it at the daughter he asked "Where is the kid ?" showing her a picture of Ray his eyes were serious and full of hate devoid of any emotion that one would find comforting the woman crying and nearly losing her mind cried "I've never seen him before in my life please let us go !!!!" sighing the soldier shot both woman and child turning he said "Alright keep searching the bastard is here somewhere !!!" Luna stared at the bodies of the family memebers shocked by what she just saw walking up slowly she saw the look on the faces shocked as if they had hope of getting away turning she saw a soldier waver for a split second then turning he open fired on his own squad. Luna didn't know what to say about this she felt glad that he did it but uneasy at the same time because she felt as if he did it for his own agenda walking up to the soldier who gave the orders he grabbed him by his neck hoisting him in the ari thats when red tendrals shot out of his arms wrapping around man and with that the body disappeared and the soldier taking his shape. Turning she saw red tendrils go over his body thats when Ray showed up walking over to the bodies he said "Pathetic why do i even bother humans have no hope." then turning he was attacked by another being this one dressed in a black suit Ray slamed into one of the things the metal wrapping around him and trapping him inside his head bleeing slightly. Walking up to him the man looked Ray up and down chuckling he said "How good to see you again Ray my boss Mercer sent me to hunt you down and well get rid of you." looking up Ray spat into his face snarling like a wild animal wiping the spit he said "Uh that beast inside of you from what i've learned is each evolved has an unique skill and yours well no one knows what yours is but i figured it out you turn into a brawler like none have seen strong, fast, built like a tank and deadly but no one has seen this beast so i dispelled this idea then i remembered we evolved can take in and fuse the power with our own bodies." Ray simply growled it getting lower and more feral the man stepped back "What are you doing." Thats when Luna saw the beast she did something she hadn't done since she was a child she screamed and ran away tears falling from her eyes as she saw the creature tear apart the man and eating him. Running through the door and slaming it shot Luna was crying curling up into a ball she felt something on her leg looking down she saw blood coating her hooves and the lower half of her dress eyes going wide she exited the dream realm and ran to the showers.in her room. (Train) Twilight and the others stared at Ray he had fallen asleep once in awhile he would shift slightly Fluttershy was worried about him he seemed to be having a bad dream sighing she thought 'He seems nice but there is something about the way he moves and acts its as if he is always on alert.' standing up she moved to the seat across from him reaching out she was about to nudge his arm. Rays eyes shot open having a look of a wild animal in them his pupils were slitted and in his gold irises seemed to be black writing of an unkown dialect then they changed to the same gold they all saw the first time they met turning he saw Fluttershy her eyes full of worry chuckling he said "Just had a bad dream is all." "b-but your eyes were d-d-different." "Huh must have been these lights or just me opening my eyes." "O-oh well a-are you okay ?" "Well talking to you is making me feel better and little.......happier." Ray said flashing Fluttershy a grin her cheeks flared a bright red she then began to retreat behind her hair walking over next were Rainbow Dash and Applejack smiling Ray said "Hey girls whats going on ?" "Not much how about you ?" Rainbow said while crossing her arms Applejack wouldn't make eye contact with the man but instead was staring at Fluttershy who was still behind her mane muttering about something looking at them each on had different length of hair Fluttershys reached the small of her back, AJs went a little past her shoulders, and RDs was cut shortish barely touching her shoulders sighing Ray was about to start a conversation until the train stopped "We have arrived at the Ponyville station." standing up the three mares motioned for him to follow steping out of the train Ray looked at the six of them and then said "So where will i be staying ?" they all looked at eachother. "Sorry but the cakes don't know about you and Celestia will make you existence know in two days so bye!!!" "My little sister lives with me and i don't have any room so tah tah for now." "Well i live in the clouds seeya." and with that three mares were left staring at eachother sighing they began to discuss what they should do Ray had zoned out forgetting that his i pod was still going looking down he noticed that his ear buds had fallen out about to move them he heard "You'll be staying with me and Fluttershy." looking up he saw AJ and Fluttershy standing next to eachother cocking an eyebrow Ray asked "Why do you live together ?" AJ glared at him and said in a tone that made even Ray shiver "You got ah problem with two girls livin together ?" shaking his head Ray quickly said "Nononon i was just a little curious thats all !!!" AJ ignored him and began to make her way to the house walking up Fluttershy began to push Ray in that direction ever so slightly. Walking on there way to the house Ray looked to Fluttershy and asked "Can you tell me why she lives with you ?" nodding Fluttershy whispered in a voice that only Ray could here "Well she got in an argument with her brother about who he was dating cause apparently she was a no good varment whos been with everyone in Ponyville so it reached a certain point and she lives with me now until she can get a new house." "Thats it ?" "Uh huh she didn't say that much but when a saw Applebloom and Big Mac at the farm when i came to grab her hat Big Mac seemed angry and Applebloom was upset." "Did you meet her ?" "Yes she was rather mean." "Yeah some people don't know who there dating while others do." "What do you mean ?" "Well they could be nice and sweet in the relationship but outside of it there just nasty and sour i've dated someone like that broke up with her when i learned she dislike my friends." "Really ?" "Yep she wasn't even that great only thought about herself through out the entire relationship." "Oooooh well not that many people in Ponyville are like that." "So does she still work at the farm ?" "Yes but in the exact opposite direction of her siblings the only family member she talks to is her grandmother." "That seems a little far just as long as she doesn't use her grandmother as a messenger that would be." turning he saw Fluttershy making the type of face that says 'she does that' eyes opening in shock he said "Really she uses her grandmother as a messenger !?!?" "Uhuh but they'll work it out." "How long has this been going on ?" Ray asked looking at the mare she began to count on her fingers stopping he slouched and thought 'Really she has to count on her fingers for this !!!!' she turned to him and said "Around 6 months 2 weeks and 5 days." Rays jaw slamed into the ground at this walking he mutter incoherent sentences walking up he saw a building that looked like it came out of Lord of the Rings "Wow now just need a couple of hobbits and we can go on a quest." looking around he found that the place was surrounded by animals walking inside he saw AJ and Fluttershy talking about where Ray was gonna sleep walking up to them he said "I'll sleep on the couch i don't like beds that much." nodding the two wished him good night and went off to bed. (Twilights house) Walking through her home Twilight went upstairs opening the door she made her way up and began to read about the theory of different worlds. Reading through the books she found that some worlds could be the exact opposite of others and then some were filled with darkness after reading some of the books she came across one book that held a picture of a tower broken halfway up and leaning over it had tendrils keeping it together so it wouldn't fall over looking at it she mumbled "I wonder what world this belongs to." rreading the caption below it read 'Was taken thirty years ago when scientist opened a window to another world' sighing she put the book up taking off her glasses she went to bed. Tomorrow she needed to talk to Ray about the world he came from and to Spike about Ray cause she couldn't keep anything from her younger brother. (The next day) Walking through the house Ray had just woken up walking up a flight of stairs he stepped into the bathroom ignoring the show pouring himself a glass of water he drank it then went back down stairs. Standing in the shower AJ was washing her mane and tail thinking back to yesterday for some reason she couldn't get Ray out of her head hearing the door open she peeked out about to ask Fluttershy for a towel when Ray walked by mouth agape she watched him get water drink and leave eye twitching she mumbled "he didn't even notice me." Laying back on the couch Ray muttered "AJ has a nice ass." and with that drifted back off to sleep. > Sweet apple acres/Ponyville > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Waking up Ray looked around to see Applejack dressed in what he could guess were work clothes today she wore a white orange flannel shirt, short denim short that left little to the imagination, worn out cowboy boots, and a worn looking hat that looked to be older than her by a good 50 years. Sitting up he crack his back and neck making it audible to everyone around turning Applejack saw Ray a blush coming to her face Ray cocked an eyebrow and said "So where you going ?" "Huh. . . . oh ah'm goin to thah farm to work." "Cool could i join you sitting her doesn't exactly sit well with me." "Okay but you got somethin else tah wear ?" Applejack asked standing up Ray used his powers to change into a black T-shirt, worn out jeans that had holes at the knees, same boots, and he wore a San Jose Sharks hat smiling he said "Good for you ?" Applejack nodded gulping slightly with the short sleeves of Rays shirt she could see the well defined muscles that looked wonderful. Reaching forward Ray snapped his fingers infront of her face shaking her head she said "Yeah but how will you get through town ?" "Figured i would go around." "Look hun there are only two ways to the farm way one is through Ponyville and way two is through the Everfree and ah think you should just go way one with me." "Um okay but how ?" "Can yah change into a pony ?" "Hmmmm i did bump into a couple of ponies on the way here lets play mix and match !!!" Ray said pointing to the ceiling sitting down he closed his eyes feeling like it had been hours since he sat down then he began to change into a earth pony he grew a black coat and a red mane and tail when he opened his eyes they were still the same deep gold as before standing up he asked "So AJ how do i look ?" "You look good but i like yah better as a person." "Thanks anyway lets get going." Ray said walking to the door and opening it for AJ smiling she walked through thanking him for his gentlecoltness. (Halfway through Ponyville) Ray was walking beside AJ the both of them laughing "Anways so when i turn to my buddy i say 'who the hell is Mushy !!!!' and he says 'Your mushy your mushy !!' and thats why i hate pudding." laughing AJ looked to Ray seeing his smile and cheerful look smiling she said "But why were you at the factory in the first place ?" "Rule of the day never mix Tequila, Jack Daniels, Vodka, and stuff call the Green fairy man i still don't know how we got a tank upside down AND ontop of that apartman building." "But your strong maybe you threw it up there ?" "No we learned that alchohol in massive amounts can impare certain aspects of our powers so basically i was like a regular person BUT i could still change into other people." "Ahhh so did you try doin it again ?" "Ha no the only reason i stole that tank was cause the green fairy told me to." "Green fairy ?" "Yep don't ask." "Okay ah won't." AJ said walking through town she swayed her hips slightly causing Ray to look at her ass blinking he shook his head and looked around seeing the different kinds of ponies but for some reason he saw mostly mares and very few stallions most of them glaring at him. Turning he taped AJ on the shoulder turning she looked at him with deep emerald eyes catching his breath sighing he asked "So why are there so many mares compared to stallions ?" looking around she saw the glares he was getting form the stallions sighing she said "Well here and ah mean this country for every 6 fillies born 2 colts are born so basically slim pickings and stallions are pretty aggressive to newcomers to different towns and cities." "Ahh so is polygamy allowed ?" "Yes but up to two or three mares could be in a group with a stallion." "Wow so some stuff must have gone down for them to put a cap on it." "Yep but don't worry they probably won't mess with yah." "Oh i'm not worried about me its them that you should be worried about." "Well don't go picking fights ah don't want you getting hurt." "Okay i won't so how far till the-" walking up a stallion blocked the twos path smiling to Applejack he leaned down this stallion was well built he had a light grey coat and dark chestnut brown mane and tail his eyes were a deep blue he wore a suit and he screamed I'm a lawyer or some reach snob asshole (He is an earthpony). Smiling he looked at AJ and said "So AJ you want to ditch Mr.City trash here and get some dinner ?" cocking an eyebrow Ray looked down at what he was wearing looking up he heard AJ say "Sorry but me and Ray here go some work to do." "Really well maybe you should reconsider i mean my dad is Filthy Rich plus i'm the number one lawyer in Manehatttan and Los Pegasus." "So your rich big deal you only want to be with me cause of my status." "Now Applejack wait a minute i just want some coffee to get to know you better !!" he said catching offense crossing her arms AJ cocked her eyebrow Ray chuckled a little turning the stallion asked "Whats so funny ?" shrugging Ray said "The fact you want her for her status." "Do you know what it is !?!?" "Am i supposed to ?" "Yes everypony knows !!!" "Well mister big shot lawyer i rather be me than everypony." "Your really trying to piss me off aren't you." "Nah if i was i'd comment on your mane color." "About about my mane color ?" the stallion growled smiling Ray motioned for AJ to get behind him just to see what happens she did noticing that ponies were looking to the group with curious looks in their eyes. Still smiling Ray said "Your hair it reminds me of a mushroom i once saw you know the kind you find under trees after a few days of rain." "So my head looks like a mushroom ?" "Huh oh nononono." "Good now if you-" "It looks like play dough you know the stuff kids play with so you wearin a wig ?" as soon as Ray said those words the stallion snapped swinging at Ray catching him across the jaw. Ray didn't even budge looking him in the eye he smiled reaching up he grabbed the stallions wrist pushing him to the ground laning on his ass in a puddle he looked up to Ray as if he were a monster cracking his jaw Ray said "Okay you should run now" turning the stallion scurried off turning Ray raised his hands and yelled "Are you note entertained !!!" (Entrance to Sweet apple acres) Ray was rubbing his eye AJ had punched him after that little encounter pouting he had learned the staillions name Grand Judgment or Judge for short he is son of the richest stallion in Ponyville third richest in the country. Frowning Ray began to cry crocodile tears turning AJ said "That ain't gonna fool me sugar but ah do have this to say, thanks fer that he has been after me and the girls since Discord." "Why ?" "Me and the girls are known as the elements of harmony and we've defeated alot of bad guys and saved three different nations around four different times." "OK don't care about that." "Why not ?" AJ asked giving Ray a look scanning to see if he was lieing looking up he said "Cause that just stuff you've done believe me i've done shit that makes me a hero among my kind and a titan to others." "Like what ?" "I threw a building once." "Really now and why did you do that ?" "Had to break out some friends for Heller to combat BLACK WATCH." "Ok can you explain why." "AJ i can't its just. . . well. . . . I can't its just you wouldn't see me the same after i do all you'd do is pity me and stuff." "But ah wouldn't do that to yah ." "Wish i could believe you." Ray said his gold eyes dulling and making his eyes have a bronze look pulling back AJ hugged the man saying into his ear "Ah won't push any farther but one day you will tell me, but at your own time deal ?" reaching up Ray hugged her saying "Deal." turning the two walked up to the house sitting on the porch was an elderly green mare with light grey man and tail her mane was in a tight bun looking up she greeted the two "Hey huny how are you and who is this young atallion." "Hi my name is Ray its nice to meet AJs grandmother." "Well its good to see you so how do you know my grand daughter." "Well i'm new to tow and i met her at the market asking her if she knew where i could get a job and she said you were lookin for some help." "Ahh well you were right we are out in the fields AJ works-" "AH don't need help !!!" "Oh hush you do need help so Ray go and get started out in the field while i talk tah her." "Ok just hurry." Ray said turning and walking to the field watching him go AJ sighed then felt a cane pull him down eye to eye with her grandmother staring into her eyes her grandmother said "You've got him on the mind ah can tell you better hurry before mares start to make their move." "A-ah don't know w-what y-your t-talkin about!!!" "Yah do AJ so don't push these feelings done its only gonna hurt yah." "O-okay." (West fields 23 minutes later) Ray sat down under one of the many apple orchads waiting on AJ and wondering what she and her grandmother were talking about sighing he began to drift off into a deep slumber. Turning on his side Ray saw a mare walking up to him she had a light purple mane and tail her coat was a light blue she was wearing black jeans dark purple shirt and a black cowboy hat Ray barely knew her and she screamed trouble. Sitting up he crack his back turning to leave he heard the mare say "So your the new farm hand granny mentioned what do you think about him Applebloom." Turning around Ray saw the mare had a small child with her looking at the kid Ray noticed that she had a deep red mane and tail while her coat was a light butter yellow she wore an orange T-shirt and some overalls on her hooves were cowboy boots. Cocking an eye brow Ray simply shook his head sitting back down he stared at the clouds passing by when he heard the girl say "Exuse me mister do yah have a cutiemark ?" turning Ray saw the kid getting close to him thinking quickly he hacked the memories of the girl and women to learn (A cutie mark is located in three places on either side of your ass cheeks, on one shoulder and the forearm of your dominant arm) thinking quickly Ray remmebered his tattoo quickly coping it to these areas (His tattoo looks like the call of duty ghost symbol with two swords crossing infront of a cog in the background) pulling his arm forward he showed the girl his forearm. Looking to him she smiled then jumping up and down she quickly asked "How did you get your cutiemark could yah tell me !?!?" Ray looked at her shaking his head he didn't answer all he did was pull his hat over his eyes and try to get some sleep until he felt a person lightly kick his leg pushing the hat up he sees the mare glaring at him slightly. Standing up Ray toweres over the girl looking down at her in a cold tone he says "Back off this isn't a story she should her." "Why not sweeten it for her then ?" she growled back Applebloom moved behind the mare looking at her Ray began to laugh not one you wish someone to laugh a more sadistic laugh "I got this because of what i did during a small squirmish while i was protecting people it means im a ghost and the story behind it is ONE I wish to keep to myself or to people i trust." Looking at the man the mare huffed turing on her heel she stalked back to the house sitting back down he heard sniffling looking up he saw Applebloom about to cry sighing Ray said "Hey Applebloom was it (She nods) you don't have to cry." "B-b-but the last t-t-time this happened mah sister stopped t-t-talking to us." "Look you just met me doesn't and all you know is my cutie mark (Ray mentally facepalmed at saying this) and thats it." "O-okay well i should go." "Oh no you don't Applebloom your gonna help me and Ray with this field today." turning the two saw AJ walking up to them looking at her Applebloom smiled then looked to the ground losing the smile "Are yah still mad it me AJ ?" "Applebloom you did nothin to make me angry now lets git these fields done." (A work day later) Ray was on the ground laying on his side sweat covered his face Applebloom and AJ were laughing at him turning the two heard the dinner bell "Bye Ray bye AJ. . . . do you think i could stay at Fluttershys house tomorrow ?" "Ah'll ask her tonight honey now git to the house." nodding Applebloom ran off giggling happily turning she saw Ray standing up cracking his shoulder groaning slighly the sweat was gone along with his tired look AJ's jaw hit the ground smiling Ray said "What did you think that affected me i'm an evolved." > Wolf in sheeps clothing > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ray opened his eys three weeks he has been here and or every hour he hated it everything seemed to bright to happy people walked around as if nothing could be wrong. Standing up Ray looked around the his new hous it was a single level Celestia had given it to him for being quote unquote "being a good pony" sighing he looked around in his house he had bed, a wap around black leather couch, and a black leather lounge chair in the living room Ray had a thirty five inch flat screen t.v., D.V.R and an xbox. Walking to the door Ray opened it he was in the middle of a field the day was perfect few clouds in the sky and the sun shining growling he began to walk through Ponyville. The only things he like about this world so far was Twilight, AJ, and Flutter he spent an entire day with each of them and.......from what he could guess fell for them to bad it wouldn't happen looking around he was getting dirty looks from three stallions one of them ran his thumb across his neck when Ray looked his way. Smiling a siniser smile Ray flipped the stallion off and continued on his way hoping he would pick a fight reaching the door to Twilights house he knocked. Waiting for her to show up and open the door sighing he wondered what they would be doing today. Twilight opened the door to see Ray standing there looking around her cheeks went bright red thinking back to when he caught her when she fell. (1 and a half weeks ago) Walking up the later Twilight was on the second floor stacking books and catalouge them sighing she was bored and the princesses were going to announce Rays arrival to there world she felt that he was a good person but he had things he wanted to keep secret. A door bell went off looking down stairs she saw Ray looking around the library "Hey Ray whats-" she slipp and began to fall closing her eyes she braced herself but nothing happend opening her eyes she saw Ray looking down at her smiling "Gotta be careful Twilight or you'll get hurt." "O-okay why are you here ?" "Well yesterday Fluttershy and me were talking and i know next to nothing about this world and she said you knew almost everything." he said putting Twilight on her feet and scratching his chin with his pointer finger cocking an eyebrow she glared at him "Is this a prank ?" "What nonononono i need to know Twilight i like learning new things i guess its in my DNA you could say." "Alright i'll teach you just don't fall asleep." "Oh i won't believe me." (Present) Twilight stared at Ray her face bright red remembering that day "Hey Ray why are you here ?" looking at her he smiled then he began to pull out a scroll and said "The princesses wanted me to come here for some reason." reading the scroll over Twilight said "So they didn't tell you either." "What do you mean ?" "Well they invited eveyone over to my house today for some reason and well..." looking at her Ray saw her hair standing on end a creepy smile on her face and for some reason her eyes were pure white with dark black circles arounc them she began to twich. Backing up Ray put both hands up bracing himself for.....something if anything then he felt a hand on his shoulder turning he saw AJ blushing he quickly turned away calming his nerves. After a few breathes Ray asked "Is she gonna be okay ?" "Ah don't know this happens to her sometimes we just roll with it." "Ahhh okay so no one knows whats going on ?" "Nope just got a letter from the princess saying to come over to Twilight fo something important." "Okay well lets see if anything going on." Ray said turning and walking into the living room to see the other four of the mane six and spike looking to the dragon Ray snorted he disliked the little prick but played nice sitting on the floor in front of the four maes he said "Hows your days going girls ?" (45 minutes later) *BURP* looking to Spike the group excluding........Twilight rushed in grabbing the scroll opening it and reading the contents Ray stared at her then Fluttershy and AJ who were shaking there hands in tandom. Looking up she said "The princesses want us to interview you Ray." his eyes widened a bit saying his words carefully as not to let the fear be shown "What kind of questions ?" "The list is right her Ray and they seem pretty common." "O-okay so whats the first question ?" "Okay how old are you, whats your gender, race and blood type ?" "22 years old, male, evolved, and um I have no idea whichever allows all blood to be safe for me or whatever." "Um okay next question..... (45 minutes later) Ray was relaxed now most of the questions were about the world he was from and not him exactly sitting back he aswered all the questions technology, society, government and ETC. smiling Ray began to drink some coffee that Spike had brought him taking a sip he heard Twilight ask "So how did you get your powers, do you know where your parents are and what did you do in your world." Ray stopped mid sip with that question putting the mug down he said with an icy tone "I think i've answered enough of your questions so ill be goig home." standing up Ray felt someone grab his arm turning he saw Fluttershy staring at him with pleading eyes "R-ray please stay t-t-those were the last questions." "Fluttershy im not going to answer those questions." Ray stated solidly the others stared at him AJ spoke up "Sugar those questions weren't so bad just answer the questions." (Ranbow)"Yeah just answer them don't be a wuss" (Rarity)"Come now it can't be that bad" (Pinkie)"Yeah if you do i'll throw a party." (Twilight)"Come on Ray just these-" "NO !!!!" Ray roared his left arm changing into the claw of a monster spines running up to his elbow and his fingers covered in talons staring at the girls. Fluttershy let go out of surprise not out of fear or hate staring at his arm she reached out to touch it turning around Ray ran outside and off into the darkness. Running outside Fluttershy looked around as far as her eyes would let her turning she saw her friends "We have to look for him !!!" "Fluttershy didn't you see his arm !?!?!" "I did and i dont care !!!" Fluttershy slightly yelled her eyes narrowing the girls back up as she began to tell them off "We pushed a little to hard on those subjects he didn't want to answer and we pushed a little to much now i say we look for Ray and apologize !!!" she finished getting close to using the stare on them the girls nodded quickly and set out to find Ray. What they failed to notice a stallion standing a few feet away he wore torn jeans and a white shirt that had a black jacket over that.smiling he pulled out a cell phone and called two of his friedns "Yeah the girls just left." (Eveer free forest) "RAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!!!!" Ray roared slaming his arm into the ground massive spikes jutted out of the ground like teeth destroying trees before retracting back into the ground "I worked so hard to keep those buried down and with one question RAAAAR !!!" Ray swung into a tree demolishing it falling to the ground it let out a thundering boom. Falling to the ground Ray landed to the tree breathing heavily about to drift off to sleep he heard someone scream shooting up he locked onto the scream. Jumping high into the air he activated his predator vision about 89 yards away were four heat signatures three of which surrounded one which was pinned up to a massive rock. Spreading his arms Ray began to glide over to the group landing a few feet away he heard a voice Fluttershys to be exact "N-n-n-n-no stay away." Ray looked up to see her pinned up against a rock with three stallions surrounding her two were pegasus while the third was Grand judgement walking up he picked Fluttershy up and tore the dress she wore. Fluttershys yellow gold sun dress before being torn it was beautiful the dress itself had no straps and showed over her yellow coated shoulders which were slim and soft looking, her wings would always be folded against her back sofltly the dress itself has frills at the end of the skirt Ray remembered this morning he nearly died by choking on milk (not his proudest moment) when she walked down. Seeing her like this made his blood boil standing up he felt his tail lash out behind him (Okay i have a pic that i think describes what he looks like so i will make it the story cover after i post this chapter so when you see the pic think of the pic tail as his) cutting a tree in half causing it to fall and land next to a grey pegasus with pale gold mane and tail. Turning around the three stallions scanned the forest looking for whoever or whatever thats when they heard growling coming from behind them turning they saw Ray horns on his head slanting straight back a tail waving behind him his arms were armored with spines on them and sharp claws and his mouth was full of triangular teeth. Backing up Grand Judgment said "Get the hell out of here freak she is coming with us." Ray didn't move he just hunched over taking a defesive stance infront of Fluttershy the stallions got ready for fight the first one to attack was a black pegasus who was a mix of muscle and fat running up he threw a punk Ray grabbed his arm and snapped it picking up the stallion by his broken arm he flung him into a tree to the far left he landed with a sickening crack he didnt get up. Grand judgment looked to Silver Lightnening and nodded getting the message he took to the skys Ray looked up running to him Judge kicked him in the gut he didn't budge but blood slid down the sides of his cheeks from the corners of his mouth looking at Judge, Ray pulled his arm back to punch stallion when he was hit in th side of his head losing his grip Ray was flung into a tree his ribs crack a little looking up he saw the pegasus responsible for the hit. Growling Ray leapt into the air surprising both stallions with the speedy recovery he had grabbing the pegasus he spund around and threw him back first into the ground breaking both wings blood seeped out of the wounds that the bones had made when the break crying out the stallion tried to get away only to be knocked out by Ray kicking him in the stomach sending him flying head over hoof into the same tree the black pegasus was they grey one growned. Turning Ray saw Judge running into the forest about to continue his attack he was stopped by a weight on his back and a warm wetness falling onto his shoulders turning he saw Fluttershy crying. Looking up Fluttershy saw Ray staring at her the slitted eyes with mysterious writing back crying a little she pleaded "Ray stop this isn't you please stop." "Why ?" "Because they've been punished enough and we can get Grand Judgment thrown into prison for this." "He would only be there for a few days at the most he needs to pay." "NO Ray he has paied enough his friends are hurt and he has seen how strong you are he won't ever think about bothering us again." "Still that is not enough i need to finish this." "NO RAY STOP." Fluttershy said letting go to stand infront of him spreading her legs, arms, and wings looking him straight in the eye she continued "If you don't stop you'll turn into a monster and i dont want that !!!" "Why ?" "B-b-because-" "See even you don't know why you don't want me on this path i've traveled this path and im not afraid to travel it again now move." "NO you can't travel this path again !!!!" "WHY NOT !!!!" Ray roared fling his arms out and grinding his teeth panting, Fluttershy didn't answer all she did was run up and kiss the man she loved with all she could give him wrapping him in her wings she pulled away and whispered "Because i love you." > 3 months later > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Standing outside a cafe in the middle of Ponyville sighing he walked into the cafe after a 3 and a half months of dating Fluttershy Ray thought deeply into what she had said to him those three months ago. So knowing next to nothing about this world he began reading books on mating/relationship forming of ponies in this world apparently they form herds or a singular relationship with one stallion of there choosing many ponies have done research into the subject and come up with a simple thing that ponies form true love connections with a stallion of their choosing. After reading that book Ray was confused why had Fluttershy chosen him maybe it was the heat of the moment kind of deal like when people form connections with those who saved them or something. Walking into the cafe he made his way over to a table where Fluttershy sat smiling at her Ray looked at his marefriend today she was in a simple green sundress that stopped just above her ankles smiling back at him she said "So how is your day going ?" "Pretty good AJ has me moving the barrels and Silver Night is starting to piss me off bossin me around as if she owns the farm." "Well it can't be that bad." she whispers taking a sip of her drink "I mean we could change the subject if-" "Fluttershy its okay hows your day going ?" "Um well you see..........i may be going into heat soon and some warthogs just came by my house for some food." "Hold up what did you say before that ?" "Huh oh well.............um..............im going into heat soon." "Okay i heard that one a little better one more time." "IM GOING INTO HEAT SOON !!!!" she nearly yelled Ray blushed when doing his research he came across the heat passage of one book and it explained that when they go into heat they're sex drive goes through the roof nodding he said "Ok so should i stay away for a week or-" "I want to spend it with you." "Fluttershy we've only been together for 3 months and i think we should take things slow." "I know but,,,,,,,its just i feel safe with you and i can trust you and it doesn't happen for another three days or so,,,,,,,so please think about it." Fluttershy giving Ray the biggest puppy dog eyes he had every seen in his life reaching forward he placed a hand on her cheek and said "Ok ill think about it, so what are we eating ?" smiling she told him about what she ordered the two of them. (Sweet Apple Acres) Walking through the orhcards making his way to the barn Ray began to whistle to himself of a song he heard back in New York one of the few that brought good thoughts to his mind (The song is Let Her Go by Passenger) finally reaching the barn Ray walked in to see Applejack taking in stock of the cider he had place there yesterday. Walking up to her Ray tapped her shoulder causing the mare to jump high into the air spinning around to see who had pocked her she nearly fell to the ground grabbing her Ray wrapped his arm around he midsection and holding her there. Blushing deeply Applejack thanked Ray and stood up brushing off her shirt and getting some wrinkles out as best as she could looking closley Ray could see that she had put some work into her looks (even though she looked good without trying in his opinion) looking at him she said "What is it do ah got somthin on me ?" chuckling Ray said "Nah just wondering why your all gussied up ?" "Oh that well the mayor said someone is coming to the town and everyone should at least look good somethin about funding for some stuff." "Ahhh i see well all i know is i got work to do and your looking good today." "Thank yah kindly." AJ said pulling her hat down covering her blushing face turning she began to get back to work when Ray said "So can i ask you something ?" "Sure yah can sugar cube." "Ok well yesterday me and Fluttershy were talking and well she asked me somthing." "Ok what did she ask yah ?" "Could you promise not to tell anyone at all ?" Ray said giving AJ a stern look turning to the man she smiled and went through the Pinkie Promise routine sighing Ray went with it "Ok she is going into heat and wants to be with me what does that mean ?" "Well it just means she trust yah to yah know take care of her needs." AJ said winking at Ray whos frown deepemd "I know but why me i mean i'm not even the same species and she's trusting me with this massive thing from the way she worded it she's never been with another stallion." "Thats true the reason being shes to shy and she doesn't trust that the stallions want her for her." "What do you mean ?" "You know shes an element right ?" "Well yeah i do but thats just some junk who cares about that ?" "Good answer anyways you remember Grand Judgment ?" "Yeah if that prick ever shows up i'll-" "Yes we know anyways you answered one question yourself." "Ok but from the wording of what you just said theres more." "Yes if you look she more..." AJ looked around then made an hourglass figure with her hands ".....Developed then the rest of us so some stallions go after he just for that." "Ahhh well thats hard to miss but cause of how i was raised i look for the personality in a woman." "Ding ding ding and thats whah she wants you to make her into a mare during this heat." "What ?" Ray said balling up a fist AJ looked at Ray and from what he saw he could have sworn steam and fire came from her ears Ray did the only thing his brain could do he scream a very unmanly scream taking the pose of a woman who just saw a mouse in her kitchen. (3 and a half hours later) Ray was holding an ice pack to the back of his head sitting on the house steps with AJ after some 'talking' to Ray understood what AJ was trying to get at standing up Ray said "I'm gonna go give my answer to fluttershy !" nodding AJ just sipped her lemonade the said "Maybe you should take it *thump* never mind." looking at the now unconcious evolved sighing she slung him over her shoulder and tossed him onto there couch downstairs. Walking around her house AJ couldn't think of anything to do all the work for that day was done 2 hours ahead of schedule sighing she walked back in the leaving room leaning next to the sound asleep mane smiling she thought 'He is even cuter when he's asleep Fluttershy is one lucky mare maybe i should ask her......nah ah'll wait alittle longer.' leaning forward she tapped heads with the evolved and made her way upstairs to shower and go to bed. (two days later) Walking along the path to Fluttershy's Ray held in his arm's a bob cat that had fallen out of a tree and hurt itself looking down at the feline he muttered "So its not true that cats land on their feet all the time." looking up he saw the small cottage come into view. Walking up to the door Ray knocked the door opened to reveal fluttershy dressed in a green tank top (one size to small) and grey sweatpants looking up at the man she gave him a kiss and asked "So what brings you here ?" smiling Ray motioned to the bob cat in his arms gasping she grabbed the feline and ran inside to check up on him following her and shuting the door behind him Ray caught a book and looked to the rabbit that threw it at him "Nice try maybe next time." placing it on a table he went to the check up room seeing Fluttershy go over the animal sighing with relief "She only strained a muscle and twisted a paw she should be fine by tomorrow." "Thats good hey Fluttershy i've been thinking about what you asked me to do and-" "O-o-oh if you don't want to do it thats fine." "No i just wanted to ask you if you are sure i'm the right one for you ?" "Yes Ray you may think your a monster but to me...." Grabbing his hands in her Fluttershy looked into his eyes ".....your the pony i've been waiting for my entire life you are dating me for me and not some title or this." Fluttershy said letting go of Ray's hands to motion to her body smiling Ray said "Fluttershy there more to you than just your looks and i'll be glad to help you this year and any other year you would need my help with." Sqealin Fluttershy tackled him giving him kisses all over his face chuckling Ray looked up to see the bob cat glaring angerly at the man. Grunting he pushed Fluttershy lightly behind him as the bob cat attacked his face for a third time in his entire life Ray screamed in a very unmanly way. > The day > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ray made his way up to Fluttershy today was the day her heat had started and she had asked Ray the day before to meet her around noon at her cottage. Walking up to the door he knocked as he knocked the door swung open walking inside he saw that the inside of the house was almost pitch black with randomly placed candles peppered the leaving room stepping inside Ray looked around he walked up to the couch. Fluttershy pushed the door closed quietly walking up to Ray she slung her arms around his shoulders nibbling on one of his ears she said "Are ready stud ?" turning Ray looked at Fluttershy who let go of him so he could see her she wore nothing Ray felt a trickle of blood leak down from his nose his mine went blank giggling Fluttershy walked up to him running her hands up and down his chest and stomach leaning forward the twos lips met the tongues fought with eachother for dominance. Fluttershy moaned into the kiss running her tong along Rays incisors feeling the sharp appendages scrape her tongue pulling away she caught her breathe looking into Rays gold eyes she felt safe secure..........and hot she was burning up. Rubbing against Rays leg she felt something starting to stiffen down there looking down she said "Someone is ready to party." licking her lips she started to unbuckle his belt and pull down his pants and boxers. Rays soldier stood at full attention making Fluttersy gawk at the size of it running her hand up and down the length she caused Ray to moan "Thats good Fluttershy." taking off his shirt Ray showed off his muscular upper body looking it over Fluttershy blushed looking back at the member she opened her mother slowling bobbing her head Ray groaned. Looking down Ray had his eyes adjust to the light looking over Fluttershy with his "night vision" he could see Flutteshy's body. Fluttershy's body was something else Ray was in the relationship for more than that but she made it hard to prove her cup size was pushing in the E cups and her ass was round and firm looking it over he saw three pink butterflies on it. Extending his hand out he rubbed the cheek softly the fur that made the cutie mare was stiffer and not as soft as the rest of her coat Fluttershy moaned as Ray started to massge both cheeks she moaned around his cock leaning back Ray picked Fluttershy up "My turn." Flipping her over he sat her so the legs were spread moving up he looked at her body she did her best to cover herself up "Fluttershy its okay you don't have to be afraid." taking a deep breathe she moved her arms. Fluttershy's breast bounce slightly when she did that her nipples were that same color pink as her mane and tail reaching out he gently cupped both her breast running his thumb over her right nipple she shuddered smiling he leant foreward and lightly bit the left while playing with the right Fluttershy began to moan. Since Ray was at it he lifted his mouth to kiss Fluttershy's neck lightly nibbling on it using his free left hand he began to play with her slit widing it and sticking two fingers in he began to slowly move them around, They had been at it for twenty minutes removing his fingers they were soaked looking down he saw that she was drowning smiling he said "You ready ?" Fluttershy nodded. Taking his hand he place both of them under her ass massagin the cheeks quickly Fluttershy moan at that lifting her up he guided his member to her entrance. Slowly he force his way into her until he met resistance looking at her she nodded sighing he pushed foreward passing through the resistance Fluttershy cried out grabbing hold of Ray bringing him into a bone crushing hug he felt tears touch his neck pulling away Ray looked into those blue eyes raising a hand he wiped away some tears "You okay ?" Fluttershy nodded slightly taking deep breathes "Okay if i move ?" she nodded a little slow nodding back at her Ray moved out slightly then back in slowly. Ray built up a rythm Fluttershy had wrapped her tail around his back the sensation of her silk smooth tail rubbing against his back grunting he said "Shy i'm getting pretty close." moaning she wrapped her legs around his back locking him inside "Do it inside i need it !!!" Ray lost control slaming into Fluttershy he finished hard huffing he said "That was great but i need to rest." "Thats okay we still have another six days." she said smiling Ray gulped praying that his evolved powers would help him through the week > ? > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- THUMP THUMP THUMP shaking awake it stood breathing in fresh air of a frozen northern climate looking around it saw nothing but snow and rocks looking down it saw that it was on a cliff with a sheer drop. Cocking its head to the side it stepped off the side landing and creating a small crater looking up it saw a small caravan stepping out the creature was met with the sight of a anthro pony running up it could tell that this pony was 23 years old and female smiling she said "Hello you must be freezing here come with me !!" Looking down it was reminded that it was in a short sleeved black shirt and long blue jeans with white vans looking up it saw the mare with three others waving him over. Smiling it turned the inner part of its hand into a knife walking up it slit two of the ponies throats consuming them and gaining there memories looking at the blue mare it said "Thanks for the food." turning to run she felt a sharp pain run through her lower stomach looking down she saw what looked to be a spear head in her stomach before she was violently yank back being consumed turning her black coat and pants into its own sighing it turned eyeing the other cars smiling it said "Still a bit hungry." Walking forward it took of the mare walking into the first car seeing three ponies sitting around the table and eating shutting the door behind it the ponies invited it to eat. Smiling it walked foreword hands behind its back turning into small swords eyeing the ponies two were young children a girl and boy the other an middle age stallion. The car shook a little with screams of terror and horror after a few seconds it walked out looking around blood dripped down its fingers lifting one arm it licked its fingers humming with delight "These ponies taste oh so good now lets see what this Crystal Empire is like." walking up to a snow mobile hitched to a truck it ripped of the lock and began to set up the machine after a few minutes it started the engine and raced off to its new hunting ground. (Ponyville week and a half later) Walking through the streets Fluttershy felt happier than she had ever felt in her life going up to her friend AJ she smiled saying "Afternoon Aj how are you ?" "Good good hey Fluttershy how are you and Ray doing ?" "Fine we had a good week together." Fluttershy thought remember her week with her colt friend both spent quite a lot of time together enjoying the 'scenery' "Why do you ask ?" "How about we talk about this later today is that okay ?" AJ asked looking around then back at the butter yellow mare smiling she nodded and gave her friend a hug "I think i know what your gonna ask." Backing away Fluttershy went about her business hearing some ponies talk about the crystal empire and the phantom killer and how its death tole had reached 32 ponies the princesses don't know who or what is doing this. Walking around she ran into Ray looking up at him she said "Oh hello Ray how are you ?" "Good how about you honey ?" Ray asked giving her a quick kiss on the lips causing the mare to blush and look around "Let them look Flutters they're just jealous." "I have something to tell you do you mind if we go to Sugar Cube Corner." "Sure." Ray said turning to the direction the cafe was in offering his arm to Fluttershy smiling the two walked away. > Crystal > -------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Three weeks) Ray looked around he was standing in an amazing city It seemed to gleam like crystal walking around Ray noticed the emptiness of this city moving around he began to look around city. Walking fore ward Ray felt the ground underneath his feet change looking down he noticed blood and a lot of it flowing slowly down the pavement jerking up he heard a noise coming from further down the street following the noise he heard. "One two three four, how many more can I cure ?" a voice sang out going around a corner Ray saw the shadow of someone leaning over the bodies over multiple bodies grabbing a piece a body it lifted it up "Now what all my toys are broken." turning the shadow looked to Ray his body going rigid with something he hadn't felt in years..............fear "How about you would you like to play ?" Jolting awake Ray was breathing heavily looking around he saw that he was back in his house looking down he saw Fluttershy sleeping next to him peacefully sighing he laid back down next to her pulling her closer to him hearing her hum in satisfaction. Staring at the ceiling he began to wonder what he just saw all he could think was that the voice of that thing sounded familiar sighing he tried to fall asleep. KNOCK KNOCK Sitting up Ray put on a shirt making his way over to the door he opened the door to see Twilight smiling at him Ray said "Hey Twi whats up ?" "Oh well I just got a letter from my sister in law she wants us to go to the crystal empire to look at a string up murders." "So you came for Fluttershy ?" "Yes and no I came for both you and Fluttershy my sister in law things that you can help and I said you may be able to." "I've never solved a murder but maybe I could give it a shot." "Alright we leave in an hour." "Sounds good we'll meet you guys at the station." Ray said waving to Twilight as she left turning he went to wake up Fluttershy to tell her the news only to see her standing in the door way wearing only an over sized shirt that came down to he mid thigh smiling she said "So we have a adventure coming our way ?" "I guess we do so we should probably pack." "Yes we should get to that." Fluttershy said sultry as she walked over to him swinging her hips smiling Ray walked over to her picking her up and kissing her deeply. (55 minutes later) Ray carried both his and Fluttershy's luggage as they went to the train station to meet their friends walking up to them Ray said "So we ready to go ?" "Yeah we've been ready since like 30 minutes ago !" Rainbow said in an agitated tone crossing her arms chuckling Ray said "Well we made it so lets go." (Crystal empire) Walking through the streets it looked around sniffing the air it smiled "I found a new plaything." walking up to a guard pony it said "Hey their big guy you look pretty lonely whats your name ?" turning the stallion chuckled looking over the body he smiled "The names Flash Sentry whats yours ?" "Just call me Gleaming Crystal big boy." "Haha sure thing cutie." He said leaning onto a post a little for support it and Flash began to have a conversation not realizing where it was going or what it was leading him to after an hour of talking it said "So how about we go back to my place ?" "Sounds fun." "Oh it will be." it said smiling devilishly moving foreward it grabbed his arm and began to guide him to its place of residence smiling about all the 'fun' they would be having. (1 hour later) Looking over the once more it frowned slapping the dead guard it pouted "Ahhhh no fun you didn't last more than an hour." looking down it noticed the blood that had pooled underneath the corpse sighing it stuck its finger into the blood absorbing all it had to offer smiling it said "Ahhhh so the princess called for help............Ray oh what fun it will be having you back !" cackling madly it began to feed off the guards corpse enjoying the test of his flesh as she ripped a piece from his neck. (Train) 'That voice I remember it but from where ?' Ray thought deeply thinking back to his nightmare sighing he looked out the window to see the white landscape of the north moving past with only the flow of the land changing. Feeling someone tap his shoulder he turned to see Fluttershy looking up at him with a worried look "A-are you o-okay ?" "Yeah Flutters I'm fine just wondering what's going on in the empire." "Y-y-yeah but the face you were-" "Don't worry Fluttershy I wouldn't mislead you i'm fine just thinking." "O-okay...........i'm worried to the princess thinks a serial killer is on the loose." "Don't worry i'll protect you girls." "I know but it doesn't stop me from being scared." "I know but i'll be there for you through thick and thin." "Good............now we have a serious discussion." "Hmmmm whats that mean Flutters ?" "Oh you'll find out." Fluttershy said smiling at him as she began explaining the serious discussion.