• Member Since 8th Feb, 2012
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Trollolol


Once I stole forty cakes and I did not give them back!

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Hi this is my fic if you see things that are not kid safe please tell me I try to keep my stuff pretty G Rated but if there's bad stuff I didn't see I will fix it

This is a story about the time an evil guy named Brony made a bad Rainbow Dash clone but don't worry I am sure nice stuff will happen in it too maybe I will add some kittens.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 11 )

is interesting
not is exactly a large comment but continue soon
XD

Username: Trollolol.

:/

You need to be more subtle. As a trollfic it isn't bad enough, the grammar, punctuation, plot and story structure are all pretty bad but there are nowhere near enough spelling mistakes. Also, a trollfic without gore, clop, or both? Ambitious. That said, I like the touch of randomly CAPSLOCKING words for no reason.

6/10, mediocre trollfic.

Thank you for reading my story :yay:

This is truly brilliant! I hope to read more of it soon! I must know if Rainbow Dash manages to escape the evil Brony and defeats her evil clone!

Spitfire said something important, right? ;)

Yay! I want to see this made into an episode so badly. I'll even script it! :rainbowlaugh:

Spit Fire had a lot of nice things happen to her as did everyone ever because SPOILLLLLLLLLLLLLER
the villain was defeated :pinkiesmile:

Sorry if the paragraphs are bad. When I copied it over it ate all my indents :applecry: I tried to fix it though.

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