One day, Applejack happens upon a strange old journal that appears to be written by a master criminal - Black Jack the Outlaw, a mysterious stallion with powers beyond that of any normal earth pony, who terrorized Equestria with his gang of miscreants in days long past. What secrets are hidden in the pages of his old journal?
This, as well as magical mishap at Twilight's place, would trigger a series of events leading to an adventure unlike any the six pony friends have ever encountered before.
Chapters (3)
Is it just me, or are the beginning quotation marks facing the wrong direction?
This story I like it. Continue.
Let us see where this goes.
~Skeeter The Lurker
well pretty good first fimfic hope to see more of it
Looks great for a first story.
Wow your good
what a nice start, I wanna read more :-)
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Seems that way. I've never actually payed attention to wether or not they alternate, though, so I'm not sure why that is. All I can say is that the text was cut and pasted directly from Open Office, which seems to write quotation marks that way by default for some reason. *shrug*
EDIT: Okay, so I'm working on chapter 2 and NOW they are alternating. So, yeah. I officially have no idea. ^_^;
me likey.
Hooray for your first ponyfic
also is black jack some how related to applejack
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Who knows? Hehehe.
Well, you've caught my attention... run wild with it, sir
Well...
I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Outlaw - Motörhead
Seems interesting,so far. Keep doing what you do!
It was a really awesome chapter and I must say that at least I had no problem with too many OC characters, I have read stories with less OCs that were a bit confusing
I say very well written
Hang on... This updated? And I never got the notice? Odd.
Anyway's, nice chapter, give us a good look at the nature of Black Jack. Can't wait to see what happens to AJ.
~Skeeter The Lurker
WHY IS THIS NOT TELLING ME IT UPDATES?
Ah well. Time to read it anyway.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh ho ho ho! NOW it's getting good!
AJ's gonna need a friend indeed!
(That was a bad attempt at a pun...)
~Skeeter TL
Well, it seems the excrement has well and truly collided with the ceiling mounted cooling apparatus.
Yeah, I never got a notification on the updates either.
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Hm, that's a bit worrying. Wonder what's up with that.
OooOOoOoH!
This is now OOON, Im so looking forward to more of the story
Heh heh. Mind crush
made me think of Yu-Gi-Oh abridged
EDIT:the Dread Stallion Roberts! Princess bride FTW!
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Granny Smith: Oh hootenanny, will ya look at this? Black Jack's journal! Ah finally found it! At last, Ah'll hold dominion o'er all livin' things! An' puddin'.
Applejack: Ah found the journal, Granny, 'Sides, that ain't how it...
Granny Smith: Mind Crush, AJ!
Applejack: That ain't how it works!
Granny Smith: Ah am now a sexy outlaw genius. AJ, who'll go on many adventures with her gang!
Applejack: No.
Granny Smith: King of Bandits!
Applejack: Nooo.
Granny Smith: Mind Crush, AJ!
Applejack: Stop that.
Good story so far.
Black Hat now controls AJ's body... Is he going to try and take his diary back? Now I'm afraid for Twi and Spike...
I NEED MOAR!!! This is soooo good!
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Where you been buddy? You haven't died have you?
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Who, me? I've been here all along, writing stuff. (Just not for this story.)
4757905 Well as long as your alive!
I hope you won't lose interest and thus the drive to write and finish this fanfic with time.
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Well, you know, it's pretty old. I mean, it's supposed to be set in the second season, IIRC. It's not a bad story, I just have other priorities these days. We'll just have to wait and see how it goes.
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Just saying, this happened to many fanfics which were very promising.
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'Tis in the nature of fanfiction. It is, after all, just a hobby.
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Sure, it's not an obligation. But when a story looked promising with a very good start, it's still a pity to see it cancelled.
...I hope the Shadow of Black Jack doesn't win...
The image in this chapter is broken.
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Yeah, must have been my old image host that sorta imploded after a while. I should still have the picture stowed away somewhere on my computer since I never delete anything, should probably look for it.
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Good luck with your file hunting!
I DEMAND AN UPDATE!!!