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When Twilight learns that Trixie is asking for a rematch, she frets trying to find something to boost her magical power. Pinkie Pie knows of a prize in a competition that can do the job, but alas, it is a competition only for earth ponies. Or is it...?

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That picture is hilarious. :pinkiehappy:

Nice episode-like story. This really needs a sequel on the contest between Twilight and Trixie.

> Because Pinkie Pie.
> Answer to Life, the Universe, and Everything: Pinkie Pie.
> 2 + 2 = Pinkie Pie.
> The square root of Pinkie Pie is Pinkie Pie squared. Thus Pinkie Pie is Unity.
> Pinkie Pie is made of dark matter.
> It's dangerous to go alone. Take a Pinkie Pie.
> Pinkie Pie > Kumquat Pie.
> I used to be an adventurer like you, then I took a Pinkie Pie to the knee. Now I party all day!
> This story has the full approval of Pinkie Pie. Case closed.

:pinkiehappy:

This was really cute but it seemed in the star of the story Pinkie was repeatedly trying to tell Twilight she had the trophies. To suddenly have her turn around and claim ignorance was really jarring. Really dun story but the ending completely let it down for me.:twilightoops:

2378979 The problem I had with this was that I wrote this more parody (of Pinky and the Brain) than considering characterization. I completely agree that the show characters in this scenario would act a lot different, but that would cancel out much of the plot. Which is why I've avoided parody, or if I do do parody, it will be extremely loose , making the parody work towards the show, not the reverse here.

2379421 *Nods* I had wondered if that was the intent, the tone sort of eased towards it at times but then would go closer to the MLP universe. Looking it over again I can definitely see what you mean with the characterization (to me) almost fighting each other in spots.

Every comment I read from you, my respect and appreciation for you just climbs. Any chance of you starting to do some sort of "How to accept criticism" series on fimfic? :derpytongue2:

I'll never figure out why this story has so few views.

“Yes, always.”

Wow! That’s a deep cut reference right there.

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