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Nyerguds


Editing doesn't stop when something is published; that's only the start of getting reader feedback.

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Wheeeee

I just read this because i read your orignal story,
But i do think fucking a 200 year old roting stallion is a tad odd.

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fucking creepy

"yes" on the first word, "probably not" on the second? :trollestia:

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Im not a clopper, i just read this because i read your original story.
I dont read clop unless its for a larger, non-clop based story.

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Me neither. Honestly, I just wrote this because it's part of the original story :facehoof:

And yet, now I "have officially entered the history books as that creepy ghoul porn guy", according to some people (actually, just volrathxp) on the IRC. Yay :twilightoops:

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So its more of a yes to both of those words now isnt it?

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No, he was joking, because he totally expected me to get exactly the kind of reaction you originally gave.

Even tastefully done, the premise of this thing is decidedly squick.

Reminds me of the line from Fallout: Brotherhood of steel where the one ghoul mentions "Gave the girl quite a scare. Sometimes the meat just... slides off the bone, you know what I mean?"

2482350 Darn it, I thought I could have been the one who breached that milestone. Oh well, there is still other races....

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lol... overall, Lemon is quite... sturdy, for a ghoul. I imagine that overall, Canterlot ghouls, with their freaky self-healing powers, should have less of a tendency to fall apart.

Well okay then. I had hoped to get through life without reading one of these, but devotion to stories means I read all the optional parts too. Take Starlight's Ch. 7.5 for example. That was not pleasant, but I read through it partly because of a weird alicorn fetish and partly because of it being the next chapter that I was on after hitting the next button. I do not judge you for this.

Also, HI! Sweet Celestia I have the FIMFiction! No more just reading things in PFA!

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Well I didn't just put this after the convenient "Next" button :unsuresweetie:

Oh, right. Maybe I should go ahead and mirror this on the others like TDU itself... PFA has its own site for mature stuff though, I think.

Ermm, yes.
explicit.ponyfictionarchive.net I believe. I will admit I saw this while looking at the latest uploads. Because my phone wants to keep my 'View Mature' option set to true.

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What's life without a bit of risk, eh? :trollestia:

Awesome. Good tasting blowjob, eh?

Oh, you did it! :pinkiegasp::twilightsheepish:
Separate story? What wrong with .5 system?
Anyway, I must find a good time to read it. :rainbowkiss:

And I found it! :rainbowlaugh:
Damn, I like it. :twilightsheepish: I like clop, actually, but I read only clop-in-FoE, or from FoE writers. And only M/F ofc. :ajsmug:

I am okay with this. Very okay, actually.

Does this mean Frisk can be used as some sort of water/fluid transport when traveling long distances or through desert? That's a heck of a way to get a drink. Also, does this count as necrophilia? Frisk is technically dead, right?
This raises so many interesting questions.:raritystarry:

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Adding it as chapter forces me to change my story's rating. TDU has always been pretty mellow even in its current 'gore' rating. I didn't want to change the rating to Mature.
As for the chapter name, well, all my chapters are Days. Would be rather strange to call this Day 8.5. That'd just sound like, I dunno, the afternoon of Day 8, while it's really just Night 8 :moustache:

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Necrophilia? Hey now, don't be rude. She moved a little :rainbowwild:
As for the water thing... mention it to him and he may not twist your head off.

Waht was this. I laughed cause it was funny. :trollestia:

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I don't think I've written anything on this site that wasn't riddled with humour :rainbowwild:
(except if you count the original Flitter one-shot. But that's retconned! With humour!)

Hmm. So this is what Regolit's gotten into...

Suggested soundtrack for future stories along this course

Uhn Tiss

The Bad Touch

Right. Since WovenTales is lazy and dumped all his comments on Pastebin, I'll just take the time to reply on 'em here:

>> WovenTales

Heh, it's not just Misty and Lemon in the same room. Have I mentioned I love your chapter pics? I feel that might have come up once or twice. :p

Well I could hardly use the other stable pic! It was a corridor! :pinkiegasp:
(as for the ponies on the composition, well, it looks decidedly silly without the blurring and the CENSORED banner :rainbowlaugh:)

One question, though. What happens if a "Night" chapter winds up taking place in the middle of the day? Well, actually, probably this. The timeline would seem to place it starting in the afternoon. Never mind!

If any more such chapters appear, I'll probably rename this to "The Nightly Unlife" or something. As for what to do with the time and chapter names, I dunno, I'll cross that bridge if I ever get there.

Well, he still seems rather ticklish. I'd imagine other sensations work as well.

True, true :twilightsmile:

Oh, actual horse biology (or close enough, I actually don't know /that/ precisely). THANK YOU!

This would be so much handier if you quoted the stuff you refer to. It's always a bunch of detective work to figure this out, and in this case, I plain can't find it.

Misty...what substance were you thinking, exactly? I actually think I've heard that joke before, but it's still definitely good. (Actually, I think I've read this chapter some time ago. There's a surprising number of full sections I seem to remember. And that might explain the green check on the story hub page before I got to it.)
((EDIT: Or does she actually have a cleaner mind than I do? What happened to me!?))

Here's a hint: she'd send him out in the evening to go drinking with her dad. Good relationship with the father plus happy drunk time in bed! Win-win! :trollestia:

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Heh, it's not just Misty and Lemon in the same room. Have I mentioned I love your chapter pics? I feel that might have come up once or twice. :p

Well I could hardly use the other stable pic! It was a corridor! :pinkiegasp:
(as for the ponies on the composition, well, it looks decidedly silly without the blurring and the CENSORED banner :rainbowlaugh:)

Have to imagine it does. Still, that's the careful use of composition and special effects for you. :rainbowwild:

Oh, actual horse biology (or close enough, I actually don't know /that/ precisely). THANK YOU!

This would be so much handier if you quoted the stuff you refer to. It's always a bunch of detective work to figure this out, and in this case, I plain can't find it.

Yeah, sorry about that. It seemed obvious enough when I was typing it after midnight, but having the line in the middle of the other window probably helped that a bit. In this case, it was more the sheath and the nipples being relatively close to her hind legs. Too many people just try to stick human anatomy onto pony bodies. There's an amazing picture for RandomBlank's Prince of Zebras (which, unfortunately, I don't have a link for), except for the fact that a zebra carved into the side of a gorge (that would be standing on her hind legs if they weren't below the bottom of said gorge) has remarkably human breasts just below the level of her shoulders.

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In this case, it was more the sheath and the nipples being relatively close to her hind legs

Ahh, yes, I do believe in keeping my ponies anatomically correct :twilightsmile:
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Oh... now I get the water joke (didn't see this before reading the latest chapter)... wow Misty just... wow

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Heehee. It goes further. If you carefully read Misty's rant against Apple Twig at the very end, you'll notice she specifically mentioned "and then the two of us will share this nice bottle of apple cider" :rainbowlaugh:

Her "humming happily" before that probably had more to do with the test results than with breaking in her new kitchen :trollestia:

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Oh lord... I didn't need that image... I think I love you :twilightsmile:

Well..... That happened. Good story in all.

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Heehee. Yup. That sure happened! Thanks. :moustache:

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no problem man.

took me a bit to like the idea, but in the end, its a good read for a story.

keep up the good work author.

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took me a bit to like the idea, but in the end, its a good read for a story.

You mean the overall theme of TDU, or this bonus chapter specifically? :rainbowlaugh:

I only wrote Night Eight because it was part of the story, mind you. Of course I could've just not written it, but... yeah, blame Wirepony for that :facehoof:

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the bonus material is what I'm talking about and the whole ghoul X Pony romance.

Also, the special perk the ghoul gets is just hilarious to read. Ah, the side effects of getting laid after 200 years.

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Since I wanted this story to have a perk that had no influence whatsoever on the actual story, and yet was somehow negative / embarrassing to Lemon... well, yeah, I went there :rainbowlaugh:

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No, what? :duck:

Are you commenting on the story, or just on a story entry you never even opened? Because the latter is awfully rude, y'know.

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Sasquatch.

Also I am now probably on some watch list just for have this page in my history. my completely and totally virgin pure internet viewing now sullied because of you <pulls a applejack discorded face> yeeeeeaaaahhhh, its all your fault! I hope you're proud of yourself!

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