I’m a cat loving viking from sweden, who enjoys mlp and everything that is typical for a classic nerd.
While practicing some of her tricks.
Rainbow Dash crashes into the Everfree forest and is saved by a mysterious giant snakelike creature, know as a Naga
What is the purpose of this mysterious creature?
Why did it save Dash in the first place and will she be alright?
What will Rainbow's friends do once they realize she is missing?
Will they save her in time or is Dash going to end as dinner.
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GRAMER GRAMMER GAMMER FUCK
2478024I don't know if you are serious or trolling.
Gramer grammer gammer? (lol)
But anyway I do know I got some grammar problem, since English is not my mother tongue but I'm doing my best.
I would appreciate it if you could be a little more specific. But thanks for commenting.
Why did you do that crap with the fourth wall? It made the story shit, if you are so stumped for ideas don't write loads of random bullshit.
Remember this: Quality over Qauntity!
2481196 I thought some people might find it funny.
But in hindsight I guess it was a a lame idea.
Thanks for the comment though :D
I like it did really make a lot of scene but still like it. And I could understand the story.
More please!
2481511 oh sorry but your GRAMMER
is it good but if you want I can help you
Looove it!!
I wish you wouldent do the narrators foreshadowing at the end of each chapter as I feel its uneeded to keep our interest, but that's just my opinion.
2506607Thanks for the nice comment.
I dunno why I put it there, I simple felt like something was missing and that little foreshadowing satisfied me.
2478024 you didnt even spell grammar right XD
I like the chapter
2698571 Thanks I appreciate that you say it.
More please ! I like this story
2706072 More is one the way. ^^
Do you mind elaborating a little, as to why you like it?
2707179 hmmm kind hard for me to explain since I am a visual leaner. So it's difficult to explain why on anything , to give a reason I like stuff. Hope it makes sense
2707189 Yeah I understand.
Thanks for trying.
cant wait for more!
Except perhaps trying to swallow her alive just a couple of hours ago.
But hey. We all know how bad RD's memory is when she is not flying.
Naga is Acidicus from Ninjago. The Storyteller.