6 Suprise
"Aaaawwww, you broke the chapter naming scheme for little old me!" Came a cheerful voice from just behind me.
I panicked, and crushed the glass of water Rarity had given me after pulling the two kids (fillies?) off of me. In an instant, glass and water where everywhere. In less than an instant, purple-tinted translucent shields formed around everyone just as Twilight's horn began to glow. Off to the side, I saw Rarity's horn glow light blue, and each shard of glass followed suite.
Needless to say, I was impressed.
"Pinkie," sighed Twilight, "What have we said about sneaking up on possibly dangerous beings?"
"That it could end smashed-cupcake bad, so I shouldn't do it, oh hai Nighthawk, I've got a party for you, but Twilight says to wait for the Mayor to meet you, but then I said that meeting at a party was funner, but she said you might scare ponies, and I said that wasn't very fun, and-"
"He gets it, Pinkie." She sighed again before the glass glowed purple and the shields faded away, "And thanks Rarity for thinking quickly."
"Think nothing of it deary."
As I watched, the glass reformed, and the water refilled it. She saw my hesitation, and said, "The water's clean." She held up her right hoof. "Scout's honor."
"But you weren't a scout, silly~"
I turned to the party mare, "That was stupid of you."
The ponies around me dropped their jaws, but I continued, "If I was the least bit less controlled, I might of swung on reflex," I rose my voice, "And taken your damn head off!"
My nostrils flared as I turned back, "You know, I'd hate if someone got hurt. Just... Don't do it again."
I paused as I heard sniffling behind me. I felt bad, but I wasn't going to let it show.
"I'MSOSORRYPLEASEFORGIVEME!!!" I lurched forward as I felt hooves wrap around me. The others must of saw my confusion, because they started to snicker. "I'LLBEGOODTHISTIMEISWEAR!" She was practically yelling in my ear.
I swallowed my pride as I turned, "I should be saying sorry. I didn't mean to yell."
Her tears disappeared and she smiled, "Forgiven~" She said as if singing. Definitely dreaming.
"So, you're a super hero?" she asked, as if she didn't know.
"Super strength, speed, invulnerability, I can briefly levitate, and no. I refuse to sign anything."
She opened her mouth, and I cut her off, "I get this a lot."
The next time I tried to cut her off, she shoved her hoof in my mouth. I might of gagged if it didn't taste like cotton candy.
"I wanted to know what happened to your costume."
Fluttershy spoke up for the first time in awhile, "I had to burn it." She froze up as I turned to her, "I-it was soaked in blood! I wanted to fix it but-" I held up my hand.
"It's okay. It was probably damaged beyond fixing. I'll just make a new one when I get the chance."
"I've been meaning to ask about that." Rarity said, "About your fashion, I mean. I can make a new one for you, easily. Think of it as repayment for helping Applejack. Just tell me what you want." She floated over a small notepad with a pencil. Damn that was cool.
I decided to draw it instead. A nice two piece costume, a belt where the two pieces met. I thought for a moment, before adding a cowl off to the side. I passed it back, and saw their astonished looks.
"So I draw fast? It's no big deal."
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I like this... sounds like you got some Deadpool, Flash, and maybe a bit Hulk? Anyhow, this a nice story. definitely keeping track of this one!
2558485
Those are three of the big ones, but Batman and Superman are another two.
Along with a bit of Saint George (Ex-Heroes).
2558504 Ahh, gotcha, you're good at writing, every time I see someone writing like you, I push myself harder. so *hats* for you good sir.
2558621
That's the nicest thing anyone's every said about this story.
2558747 Really? I'd expect you to get praise, you're good at the style you do. and if this was fleshed out like a true novel I could see it being rather popular with people interested in this kinda thing. I personally really like it.
2558809 People almost never comment, that's why Lady Rarity, my other fic, went so long without an update. I just thought it wasn't any good.
2558980 after reading the first two chapters of it... I like it too.
2559054 Awesome. I actually posted the new chapter yesterday, and earlier submitted it to EQD.
2559063 I hope it get's accepted!
2559073 I hope so too. Getting on EQD is like winding up on the news.
2559123 Yeah, Personally I don't like EQD but the people that do like it usually follow from it with the speed of angry hornets. so I hope many angry hornets find you. I swear I mean this in the nicest way possible
2559136
Thank you. Wait what? 
2561092 YES! YES MY PRETTIES SEEK AND DESTROY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
2563647
RAAN!
MIR!
TAH!
Get'em!
2563777 OHNOES!
2563789
Quick question, have you figured out when in the show the story is right now?
2563797 before season two but after season one?
2563801
During Season 1. The chapter I'm typing in my other tab happens the night Boast Busters (the first Trixie episode) happens.
2563816 Awesome. people need to give Trixie some (mc)lovin.
2563820
I think they punished the wrong pony in that episode. All Trixie did was tell a story, Snips and Snails let the Ursa into town. She's still a jerk though.
2563832 Well she didn't know the correct way to boast. She did it in a "I'm better than everyone, kiss my hooves and worship me as the new queen of your town." where a good boast is "Hey, I did this thing, and it's cool, wanna see something else that's cool? FIREWORKS!" y'know?
2563841
You have me there. I'm glad they didn't make her a one off villain.
2563846 Yeah, and I'm glad they let her grow and learn from her mistakes.
2563854
I had hoped Gilda would get the same treatment, but since she didn't sell well, they canned her. I like to think she went back home.
2563862 Or maybe she is out planning her revenge on those "Dweebs" that made her look like a fool. maybe she'll try to hurt Dash so that her dream is crushed and she won't have any friends anymore? They never really can a character if they're not inexplicably dead and there's no way around it.
2563871
Valid point. Also, they're apparently making either another alicorn, or turning Luna pink. Blue doesn't sell as well.
2563878 I'd prefer just another Alicorn. Making Luna pink means they'd have to re animate NMM and all previous Luna's... so it's probably just new Alicorn. I mean ALicorns are fine, I don't think making new ones is so bad as long as they don't ruin where the show is with them. maybe this one is Princess of Dawn? being that Luna is midnight, Celestia, high noon and Twilight is... well twilight.
2563891
It's possible they'll either handwave it, or hopefully, explain it as some sort of preexisting magic. Maybe delayed side effect of the Rainbow Blaster?
2563937 But... Honestly, Why would they do that when they could make profit off of people still buying Luna figures and then new figures aswell?
2563968
Bronies who buy the toys would pay regardless. Or, at least I would.
2563988 I do love me some Luna, Celestia is awesome too though... Why not share the Sun and the Moon...?
2564043
We could use Twilight as a buffer. After all, Twilight does come between night and day.
2564058 I thought of that just before you posted this... are you an 18th century peasant/commoner? they were well known for thought stealing...
2564067
No, but I am thinking of how that sentence may of inspired a new clop story. That is, if I ever decided to try my hoof at clop.
2564081 Do a co-operate story? you do the story outline I do the down and dirty?
2564099
Story? In clop? What is this, the Neighties?
2564109 You know what I meant.
2564115
I see no reason not to. The only reasons I don't try writing clop are that A) I suck at sex stuff, and B) I fear for my reputation as a writer.
2564126 Reputation? You mean that thing that I found dead and shriveled in my car when I started writing? Who needs that thing?
2564133
Heh, good point. New chapter in 5... 4... 3... Fuck it! Now!
to Michael, the creator of AdBlock who just retired and sold his company(raises wineglass)