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TheBlueRaven


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The mane 6 are teleported to Earth. There the Elements of Harmony meet 6 best friends and their siblings as they try to run away from their dark pasts.

Will new relationships form? Can the Elements help the best friends with their pasts or will they only make matters worse? Will the lives of everyone be changed forever ?

They are going to face new and old enemies. The elements of harmony are going to need help from another team of best friends. Their name? STAR.

Read about their adventure in A STAR story.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

A pretty good first attempt. The first chapter seems vague on a lot of point, though, and seems a bit too detached. For example, there was little description of the scenery. Only read the prologue, though, so it might have improved from there.

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Well thanks for telling me. I'll go back and add more detail.

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