• Member Since 16th Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Nov 24th, 2019

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i like mlp

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My first fic!
When ponies go missing, Pinkie pie is confused. Is the fact that those who went missing were pegasi? Only time will tell. For now, she has to see rainbow dash.

Warning: very dark, some shipping, and im a verry messed up person.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 3 )

Okay then,


1: Spelling. I understand that you're writing on your Iphone, but dude.
2: Moved a bit quickly, could have used some better explanations and a bit more spacing.


Great idea and I hope to read more about this.

Otherwise good job so far, can't wait for the next installment. :raritywink:

Oh no, is this a clash between rainbow factory, AND cupcakes? Well if so, CRAP!!! EVERYPONY RUN!!! :pinkiecrazy:

good story so far! but really, it painz mi too se such grammatical errorz,

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