Immortality sounds nice, doesn't it?
You can live forever, never age, or at least never get really old. Lots of ponies would jump at the chance to be immortal, but immortality comes with a great price.
And nopony in the world could even imagine all that Princess Celestia has gone through. Nopony has experienced as many losses, or endured as much as the Equestrian Princess. In this story, we review Princess Celestia's life before her long, remarkable rule.
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Sweety, two things
1. Lovely story
2. Epilogue is the after story, should be Prologue
Intruiging -- good for getting the reader engaged!
I wondered if "Epilogue" was an artistic choice, since what we see at the start of the written story might chronologically be the end of the story's actions.
I would be careful of the your / you're confusions. Short version:
Your = belonging to or of you. Your bicycle. Your hair color. Your religion.
You're = "you are.". You're driving too fast. You're going to get a icket. If you wanted to get there on time, we shoud have left on time. I told you your hair was fine. I don't know why you're always blaming me every single time... Um, sorry. Examples can get away from me sometimes.
I personally see more I like than dislike here, though! You get a thumbs up.
Mmm... interesting.... ok you have my attention!
2464741 crap. Lol, epic fail on my part.
Always start a new paragraph for a new speaker. No two (or more) characters should have dialogue within the same paragraph. Just a writing for you.
Looking forward to the rest
2525247 I promise it'll be published by Moday. I've had serious writers block forever.
2561815 Yeah I know that feeling. Looking froward to it
2562149 thanks
uh, i thought Luna had a blue coat, not white??
2623624 I simply can't accept the fact that Luna and Celestia look nothing alike. I have a theory for that.
Been enjoying this story quite a bit, hope you find the interest to continue it.