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"You're so vanilla!" "You're like the Fairy Bread of Australia!" Anonpencil - 2019

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Mocha Latte is a unicorn living in Canterlot, she owns and runs the cafe 'The Daily Grind'.

As she's visiting an old friend in the artisan district, she has a chance encounter with the mysterious stallion, Ironshod. Ironshod is an Iniltearian, a massive earth pony from the Frozen North. He is quiet, strong and rather handsome. After assisting Mocha with a little door problem, Ironshod discovers that there is more to the mare than meets the eye. Mocha has a mysterious power of her own and it may just help the shy stallion open up a bit.


This fic is just a little fluff piece I wrote for Ironshod's owner - Ned Arkenstone.

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Comments ( 40 )

WOO!!!:yay:

nice seeing you got permission to post the fic here.
hope you got more fics hidden in the woodworks.:pinkiehappy:

2460025 - Yeah. The owner of Ironshod is really cool. Did you like it so far?

Anything involving Ned Arkenstone is usually amazing.I wasn't surprised to find such an adjective applies to this particular story :ajsmug:

2460123 yea i read it immediately after you replied with the link to my comment about the mocha character:twilightsheepish:
it was a short and nice fic, didn't need to be longer,and a great day in the life of mocha story.

'twas good, 'twas good

"could play and instrument,"
an ?
I only mention this because it's one of the few tiny things that I noticed.....GREAT fic! =D

Okay, where do I have to go to read about Ironshod?

Two things. One, excellent choice for music. I myself have used a couple of hers in my own story.
The first one was a brilliant find, as it was used for the Element Bearers.

And two......WHY IN THE HIGH HILLS OF BUCK DID YOU END IT THERE???? Ahem. Just curious, as this is a brilliant story!

Kind of felt rushed. You made me interested in OC's, which is a feat, but the whole thing felt like it was forced. I totally think love can blossom that fast, but it needs to be subtler.:coolphoto:

Um at one point you wrote "nether the less" and I noticed a few other mistakes. re-read and edit this master-piece for spelling, grammar and...something else I forgot. Also that scene at the end- BWAHAHA! :rainbowlaugh:

2466124 - Lindsey Sterling is awesome. Nuff said.

2466518 - It was a contest piece for Ned Arkenstone on Deviantart, so I had to keep it short. But she liked it so much that she added the fact that Ironshod made a stopover in Canterlot once he arrived in Equestria part of his canon storyline:raritystarry:

2467268 - Yeah... my grammar sucks and MS Words spell-check is just as stupid.

And for more info on Ironshod head Here!!

Also go and read Ned' stuff, she's awesome!!

My brain imploded from the greatness. As always, great fic! I knew you were a good writer when I read "A Pony out of Place"

2546164 You don't need to thank someone for stating a fact.

2547166 - I thank anyone who compliments my writing. I know I'm not half as good as some people on this site but I try my hardest to provide a good story.

2548275 I personally think that you're better even than Blackwing or Rust! I am going to be stabbed to death for that comment...

2548290 - Y'know, it probably sad that I have no idea who they are.

:twilightsmile: - Research time?

Yes Twi, research teim!

:twilightsmile: - Whoo!

2549732 Are you familiar with "Chess Game of the Gods"?

2549755 - Nope. I was just giving some of their stories a quick glance before I head off to work. If you think I'm as good as them, then I'm very flattered. Thanks!

2606691 - Thanks, I really put some heart into this one and I like how it turned out.

2608887
Well, I for one can say,
Ya cannae say ya've done a bad jahb at thisun', laddie.
I like the cut o' its jib.
Got heart in it.

A THUMB AND A FAVE FOR YOU!

2613236 - I seriously need to do a Silvermane story. He is so much fun to write!

2613331 Oooo... Yes more Silvermane. :moustache::moustache::heart: I request more of this trio... if it pleases you.:fluttershysad:

P.s. FIM said that the User "Ned Arkenstone" does not exist... :fluttercry:

3280018 - I will do a Silvermane story eventually. and yeah, it seems Ned's profile disappeared... not sure why.

3280031 More stories, yay!:yay:
Sucks about Ned's profile though.

It seems that Ned Arkenstone doesn't exist anymore.
Sad :pinkiesad2:

3906919 - She does exist, just not on FimFiction. Long story short, things went done and she had to leave, but I'm still hopeful that we can do that collab fic.

3908164 ok thank for informing me.:pinkiesmile:

OK, really good story, is there some oyher story with Ironshod? I found that OC's sheet, bit it was extremely vague. And he seems like kind of character you can mage good story with.

4247470 - You'll find nothing on FimFiction about him. he belongs to a friend of mine Ned Arkenstone

He has a canon storyline, but even I'm not too sure of the details. I simply found a gap in what I could find and inserted this piece there. Turns out that she liked to so much that this story is considered canon now as far as Ironshod's story goes.

I love this! Short but brilliant! Bravo, Bravo! :twilightsmile:

5395513 - Thankyou, I loved writing this.

In all honesty, both the writing & the way the characters act in this piece feel very mechanical to me. From the comments it sounds like it's a good story, and maybe it does get better later, but I had to put it down about a third of the way through because of that.

Great story! Really like your character too! :twilightsmile: :twilightsmile:

8479218 - Thanks! I really loved writing this one!

“Nay lad,” Silver said, picking up his hammer. “You said all the right things, now let’s get back tae work.“

I am Silver in this scene :pinkiecrazy:

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