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Excuse me, my dear sir.
Would you mind if you sent me a copy of said picture?
This story...
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Nope. Just nope.
It needs to be completely redone before it would be readable. There are way too many errors for me to even list them all. And that's just grammar.
Well this new and well if I was him there is only five words to release stress I DON'T GIVE A FUCK.
but good atory
MOAR!!!
Oh my.
DAMMIT CELESTIA WHAT HAVE YOU DONE??!!
I'm sorry... I-I didn't m-m-mean to s-shout at you.
MOAR PLZ.
~~Flutter-Shy~~
2509645 I agree MORE!!!!!!!!!!
I laughed every time I read the word rapped. It just makes me envision Celestia in some crazy wigger outfit getting ready to rap battle. Other than that, yeah. This story is pretty bad, entirely rushed as if you were trying to finish it before your stop on the bus got off. Try again with more slow, deliberate thought put into it and I'm sure you'll do fine. Also, use a spellchecker.
the plot of this story really interest me...
one i like this story i really do i cant wait till i hear the authors theory on how this happened and compare them to my own i really am loving this and two before Danny was 15 everyone knew he was the ghost boy so sneaking back in to class would be redundant because they know he fights ghosts,
This is looking good so far, I think you just need to give us a better idea of the environment.
~~Flutter-Shy~~
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I agee. it will give us an idea of what were looking at through the eyes of the characters and make the chapters longer so they wont seem too rushed. this story isn't bad so it'll work
I would've shot myself.....
I am high enough to enjoy this... good work.
next one maybe its a good story
I like this story, i really do, but for christs sake! get an proofreader.
or at least change some of the "you`re" to "your".
becasue:
you`re = you are
your = your
have a nice day^^
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wuht
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I saw this on the home page
, and I laughed out loud.... quite literally.
who is this Celestia mom?
one, when you making new chapter?. two, equestira girl: rainbow rock is coming in fall
I like it but the main issue I'm having is no one told Tucker.
KO it's been a few months since you update please tell me and every pony that the next chapter will be finish soon.
6367466 Well I'm working mostly on love and slavery for now. I do plan on making more chapters for this story some time.
KO well hope it's soon cause I want to see Danny and Vlad final battle and what will their child's be like when they grow up.
6371065 KO when's the next chapter coming.
No God damn humans this me after being raped by moving on sorry
Hope you finish this store.