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Princess of the night and Nightmare Moon; two names used interchangeably in the Canterlot castle.

There was always a piece missing in Luna's life since her return from banishment; a sense of belonging, of acceptance into the modern society. She could never tell her sister of such feelings, but she aslo couldn't keep them to herself. In a series of letters sent into Oblivion soon after completion, Luna spoke of her true feelings, of her true fears, aspirations and worries. But what if these letters weren't sent into Oblivion? What if they were sent to place where she had a reader?

What if this reader were to write back?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 42 )

Oh jeez. This story has significantly entrapped my jebees.
Take my like, good sir.

Longer chapters please. Other than that, good work. Liked and favorited.

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Oh, I didnt see you there. You're here too?

2451918 I am everywhere. I will sing my names from the rooftops, and you will not soon forget...

REGIDAR!

2451914 Yeah, this is primarily a setup chapter, they should grow in length.
Should.
Won't make promises. :scootangel:

2451867 Sorry about the jebees, but gracias por el pulgar.

Seems pretty interesting. But I wonder, who has access to both sticky notes and Oblivion?

the great and almighty fugly duckling has deemed this story worthy of his time:moustache:

2452599 I-I am honored dear sir!
In other news, I've learned that you can't trust fimfic to format things correctly, which is awesome... If anything seemed odd, that's why.

You sir, have put me in a trance with this story. I will definitely be hoping for more chapters later on. A sad Luna is a...sad Luna?

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They really need a Luna emoticon...

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For real. You're not the first to say that. We need one!

I like Story with so much emotions. And your Story have it. I hope i can read mor in the future.


I will wait for more. :heart:

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History does not forget those who served. To think any less is to sign your death warrant. Fear not for your memory, Regidar

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And with that, I take my leave.
So long and goodnight!

This is great!^_^

Very good fanfic!^_^

I like this!^_^

Hmmm... letters appearing through a rip in space/time now?

Gonna add a bow tie wearing guy in a blue box to show up whenever?

A story like this to really show Luna is desperately needed. Yeah, others have tried, but I just have yet to find many good ones that focus specifically on who Luna is and how she feels instead of just being a clop-fic-run-off. Definitely keep it up cause even with the short chapters (sorry, to me anything under 2,500 words is short, no offense), this is turning out to be an amazing story. You get a like and a favorite from me.

Woah! this story is really interesting... please keep up the good work ^^

A nice chapter. A few errors, but otherwise still beatiful in the story's execution.

2464446 Thank you kindly sir! And the chapters are short, I'm used to churning out 6-9 thousand word long updates. Not sure why they're ending so quickly...

2465415 Yeah, the guy I was going to have preread the chapter works on a huge time difference with me. I probably should have waited for him to get to it:twilightblush:...

I'm really enjoying this type of approach you've taken towards how humans get involved with Equestria. Also, I like the idea of Oblivian sorta serving as Luna's comfidant(e) who I'm assuming is male. But yea, awesome work so far.:ajsmug:

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Maybe... Oh well, I liked your other story as well.

:fluttershyouch: The feels are getting more intense.

3124024 I'm glad you're enjoying it :twilightsmile:

An update is in the works; typing on it as we speak.

This is actually a really really really really really GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD fic :3 :pinkiehappy:

Few typos here and there.

Now that the negatives are out of the way, I bloody LOVE this! Nailed Luna's personality so far as I can tell.
It's infuriating; I can't decide if I want more or if the mystery of Oblivion should be kept hidden.

Bravo anyway.

Lovely, a great chapter, and if it takes months to get out... well then so be it. It's worth it for this quality.

3625054 I agree. The Quality is TOTALLY worth the long waiting.

But please! dont do this again! The Story is really AWESOME! But the long waiting would kill me when I had not other Fictions to read.

Your chapter is great. Luna's etheral style of writing seems to fit quite well, and is completely seperate from the description. VERY well done, sir. I'll wait as long as need be for this next piece of your tale.

I'm ok so long as you don't cancel this. I'll wait as long as you need for more.

keep going
dont give up

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No matter where you are, what you're going through, or who you are, you must never give up. To give up is to say to your opponent, nay, the world, "You've broken me, you win." To keep going shows that you are strong, you will not be put down. Remember that when somebody stands against you, there is surely someone there to stand with you. For there is just as much love and brightness in the world as there is spite and darkness.

This is really good. Hope it will update.

There was a lot of words I did not understand. Also, humans won’t appear physically? That sucks.

You’re not leaving are you?

How did they know that?

The sheer pain coursing throughout the midnight alicorn’s body rivaled even that of the most intense hangovers produced by those foolish enough to challenge one of the royal guards to a drinking contest. She attempted a small pain alleviation spell, though to little effect beyond sending a lancing pain from her horn down to the rest of her sore body. She bit her lip, drawing a small amount of blood as she withheld the scream that was all too happy to leave her body. She allowed her eyes to open a crack, but again, this only proved to add more to the pain wrought across her body.

Hope someone has a healing spell.

Yes, I have received all of your letters, and I truly doubt that they were intended for me. They thoroughly confused me by their random appearance in my study, even more so with the appearance of that violet portal with the fifth letter, but they were beautiful pieces of work that told a story.

What did the fifth letter say?

Ok, I’m a little confused.

Also, is it me or was Shining and Celestia bipolar as sh*t?

And, will this story update?

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I hope so -it has an extensive story outline but I've lost my capability for prose. My other fiction and it's sequel are mapped as well but I just can't get words to stick to paper like I used to.

Your works are remembered, we hope you are well, forever.

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