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Why doesn't Dash call Twilight "Sparkle-kitten"?
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Because she's her little egghead!
Oh god, the thought of spike putting the moves on twilight.
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That's not a bad pet name for Twilight, but Dash has never come across as the most sentimental of herdmates. She wants to make everypony(one) happy but through actions, not words.
Ok, I'm warming up to it.
The whole 'go to Brambletown' seemed ... odd. Tacked on? I don't get it - only thing I can see it doing is ... well, I guess it does show how much Rarity thinks she's in love with monkey-boy. I guess. That was about my only reservation with it and as I think about it, it does have a purpose so ...Love those strike-outs. Anyway, as I said, I'm warming to it. So, uh ... yay! Why didn't Rarity contact Twilight about the situation though?
EDIT: Dang it, my thumb gets rid of that great number.
Well, lets see, pretty much everything that happen its thanks to Twilght spell, Lero is more than in barge of panic, he almost lost it with the hospital, and Twilight just trick him, when he was just begging for answers to all this nightmare only to received more questions, no to mention the spell also somehow affect him with the dream.
Yeah, he will yell at Twilight…hard. And boy did he will be mad, for what she did.
It will be interesting if the spell do more to him than only give him weird dreams, like he will be start to flip flop magic or reverse himself into a more salvage animal. Part of me is thinking that if he at some point lost it, he will spur wings, his head will contorn into the one of a lion, he will grow claws and with all the might he has fly strait to Canterlot begging Celestia to kill him. (Yeah I know WAAAAYYY away of what you have plan but it happen to my mind)
P.S: Did the scene in the chariot is a hint that Lero is starting to see Rarity under a new light?
I'm too tired to say it so...
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Okay, so when I first started reading this story only the prologue and first chapter were out. I had my doubts and voiced such... but now I'm hooked. Good job sir, even if I still think you really really should use something other than CAPS for emphasis. (No seriously, in my mind every time I see one of your emphasized words in caps I can't help but imagine it being yelled at the top of one's lungs by whoever is saying it.)
That aside, I love what you are doing with this story, please keep up the good work. Also... "Sparkle Kitten" ... a nod towards a certain fanfic, or just a coincidence?
Over 25k words?! Good bye any thoughts of sleep!
Great chapter, can' wait for more.
I would like to see panic crazed Twilight grilling FlutterDash. Poor Lero is heartbroken, confused, and still taste the venom in his mouth.
Wonder what is going through Rarity's mind.
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"That's not a bad pet name for Twilight, but Dash has never come across as the most sentimental of herdmates. She wants to make everypony(one) happy but through actions, not words."
--- Still, though, Dashified Rarity is not simply Dash's-soul-in-Rarity's-body. Dashity's soul is something of a hybrid of both mares' souls. In certain respects, the "Dash" side of Dashity's personality dominates; other times, the "Rarity" side comes to the fore.
So while Dash would never have thought up such a cutesy nickname as "Sparkle-Kitten," Rarity would.
"Egghead," on the other hand, would be totally Dash's style!
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"Why didn't Rarity contact Twilight about the situation though?"
Here's the thing: the whole reason Rainbow Dash, (then Rarity, after their memory transplant) flew all the way out towards the Bramblewood area was to put a good, solid distance between themselves and a dangerous, incomplete super-spell; not even Twilight was sure WHAT this spell would actually bring about, only that it'd probably be BIG.
So let's look at the point in the story where Rarity's with Lero in the hospital. For all Rarity knows, Twilight's spell might've caused a zombie outbreak, opened a portal to Cthulhu, or given everypony a severe case of acne. Regardless, there's a fair likelihood Twilight's got her hooves full with something cataclysmic, so Rarity would rather give Twilight a few days to sort whatever-it-is on her own before touching base with her again, and keep her poor wounded stallion out of the way of strange magic.
Besides, it's not like Rarity has a cell phone or Spike to instant-message Twilight. It really helped that those two search party pegasi were able to find them relatively quick.
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Yeah but still ... even a general on the cusp of an invasion is told his wife's in the hospital with a flesh eating bacteria. I'm just adding in my own head that Rarity sent a letter off-screen by courier and it just so happened that letter crossed the pegasi coming to post those flyers.
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P.S: Did the scene in the chariot is a hint that Lero is starting to see Rarity under a new light?
Lero's attitude towards Rarity will not stay stagnant and unchanging, I can tell you that much. At this point in the story, he's already gone from liking her as a casual friend to resenting her as someone who forced himself into his family and ejected his beloved Rainbow Dash.
Will he grow even more embittered towards her? Will he come to like her again? Are there other options he'll choose instead?
Stay tuned to find out.
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That works! I'm certainly not going to say it didn't happen.
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Oh will, this story is interesting, have to tell you the whole power swap an treat him like a weak that have to be rescue and is complete defenseless (witch sadly is) have make me a little skeptical, and uneasy, but I'm willing to give it a chance
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I would like to see panic crazed Twilight grilling FlutterDash.
Erm... well, Warpd... I'll level with you. I actually had no intention of expanding on that scene, where Twilight first crosses paths with Swapped Dash, nothing beyond the summarized version she gave to Lero. Frankly speaking, the idea of fully fleshing out how that heartbreaking conversation must have went leaves me feeling hollow inside, (and I've already GOT lots of heartbreaking conversations planned. This is the one I'd rather gloss over, if it's all the same to you.) If I ever DO go back and pen this scene, it won't be anytime soon.
However, I'll say this: if YOU, or some other writer, feel impatient and would like to tackle that scene for yourself... be my guest! (A recursive fanfic of my recursive fanfic would be most welcome! But please at least show me it first!)
Poor Lero is heartbroken, confused, and still taste the venom in his mouth.
You sure said it.
Wonder what is going through Rarity's mind.
At this point in the story, Rarity's full of good feelings; happy she survived against the spider, happy that Lero's still alive and on the road to recovery, happy that her Sparkle-Kitten's safe and sound -- and nothing disastrous happened with that weird spell -- happy that her friends regard her as a valiant heroine living a fairy tail life... have no doubt that she slept alongside Lero with a big smile on her face.
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"That aside, I love what you are doing with this story, please keep up the good work. Also... "Sparkle Kitten" ... a nod towards a certain fanfic, or just a coincidence?"
It's a nod. That pet name is just too adorable not to use.
Fascinating on all levels.
Oh dear gods this is going to be glorious.
Well, this can't be enjoyable for anyone involved. Except the readers. Definitely looking forward to more.
hm. I'm torn here. I adore Rarity and all her "in love actions", how she acts, pet names and such, yet I know when everything goes back to normal (i'm assuming it does) she'll feel very awkward about the whole situation. Or perhaps it'll be like another story I read where each of the affected Mane 6 still held a bit of their other self after everything got fixed.
So when I started reading this, I couldn't help of think of a certain song by Weird Al. Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KThlYHfIVa8
Watch from 0:50 to 1:32.
Funny, rereading this alongside the update that just posted... and realizing I've heard Anything Goes about a hundred times lately on Diamond City radio. It was the first song to play for me when I turned it on in game. The lyrics felt familiar but I couldn't place when or why I'd heard them. One of the fun perks of rereading... the story might not change, but your perspective does.