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This chapter has given me a new appreciation for Honeydew. Now I know that she's an equal opportunity racist.
Something strange happened: after reading the purple text for so long without taking a break, the black text after it looked dark-green. Funny how the eyes can do weird things like that.
Also, backstory everywhere! I like how you completely redefined 'chick flick', and now we've got 'filly films' and 'stallion shows' to add to the ponys' lingo. I can't imagine how much fun Discord is having with all this.
Is ponird a typo or am I missing something?
Je so he now has his computer with infinite battery and Discord gave him part of his powers? Cool, Oh maybe Discord will offer a position as his associate in chaos, like Celestia and Luna. That could be interesting
Oh, shit. That's a real, romantic connection Twi and weather!Rarity have. Even a successful un-swap is going to have more unpleasant consequences than I suspected.
Heck, if the story hadn't all but told me otherwise, I'd say that Lero's in an AU, and these memories are real. I'm no longer even certain of the ethics of un-swapping everypony. These new ponies have their own memories, traits, and feelings that are more than just a mish-mash of the donors. It might just be a case of killing five ponies to save five ponies, no matter which way it ends up.
I assume we're getting close to the promised Luna scene?
Exquisitely done. I love the bits in the flashback that subtly hint that Rarity subconsciously understands that her memory is a fantasy. And Discord's scene was, as always, fantastic. Though you didn't go where I expected you to with the mariachis.
As for Lyra's return, I suspect that she's just the muse Lero needs to bring at least one other Swapped pony into equilibrium. Really, who better?
Oh, and the movies were fantastic. We need more screenwriters on FiMFiction.
Eagerly looking forward to more. Especially with Harpflank on the scene.
Grammar Nazi
"It’s not quite as bas as that elsewhere"
On the other hand love the update and the llyra intro
Should be "never tell Pinkie"?
'suit', not 'suite'
Whoops!
'bad', not 'bas'
Dangit, now I want to watch all these movies. Sidestory, plz!
I felt like a girl squealing over a boyband as I read this. Everything was great. The return of Lyra, the scene with discord, rarity's origin, rainbows parents, the fight with Honeydew, and especially rarity's courting of Lero.
Only problem I had was that at the time of Rarity's story no pony knew how Lero got to equestria so she couldn't know he was tortured. Good representation of diabetics but I think you forgot to add Pinkie's name in there cause it wasn't there and doesn't make sense as is without adding it.
Must squeal again, rainbow's parents was a great depiction of fanon. Just wow, I'm impressed and move to have the story inducted in as official xenoverse canon. All in favor?
Too bad it doesn't work that way
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Thank you for pointing all the corrections. I think I fixed them all!
As for the side stories... I'm afraid that I'll have to pass that honor to someone else. I just can't WRITE all those scripts! Especially because I'm far more interested in what happens in Divided Rainbow!
But if someone else wants to write them, I won't say no!
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Exquisitely done. I love the bits in the flashback that subtly hint that Rarity subconsciously understands that her memory is a fantasy. And Discord's scene was, as always, fantastic. Though you didn't go where I expected you to with the mariachis.
-- There's actually a very subtle reason why I picked that particular mariachi song. Besides the fact that I liked it!
As for Lyra's return, I suspect that she's just the muse Lero needs to bring at least one other Swapped pony into equilibrium. Really, who better?
-- Lyra has an important part to play in this story.
Oh, and the movies were fantastic. We need more screenwriters on FiMFiction.
--- [BIG GRIN]
Eagerly looking forward to more. Especially with Harpflank on the scene.
-- So am I! The next chapter will be ALL ABOUT Lyra!
you know what! Lero deserves a motorcycle! With all the crap he's had to deal with! Discord should give him one when this is over.
Also what were the letters from Celestia about?
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I really enjoy the Discord and Lero interaction. When he is nice he can be really fun to be around.
I'm surprised that Lero hasn't gotten pissed off at Celestia for instigating this little "test" by sending Twi that damned book which caused the swap. Also surprised that Celly hasn't gotten on his case about him 'adjusting' the ponies to their new roles / cutie marks. Also, too bad that Lero's such a damn wimp when it comes to Honeydew and her sisters. Why the hell doesn't he man up and FIGHT? I'd have put the bitch down by now... Where'd I put my 'walking stick...'
I wonder if there's ever been a story where a human takes a look at Equestria and...
Human: "Magic? Controlled weather? Ponies who raise the sun and the moon? Fuck this shit, man, I'm gonna go live in the Everfree Forest."
Twilight: "But... But why?!"
Human: "Because the Everfree is the only normal place here!"
3045632 Honeydew is an idiot, and consummate racist and bigot, and I doubt that Rarity's promises (well, threats) will do much to change her behavior once she gets over the trauma of repeated freefall. But then that's for Mike to decide. ;)
I appreciate how much work you have put into the story but for god sake please break the chapters down. I had the time today after work to sit down and read all 27k words but most days are not like that.
I really liked delving into Lero and Rarity falling in love. It felt as genuine as Rainbow and Lero while still being unique. Glad to see Lyra finally arriving. I hope her level headed nature will be a boon to the rest of the herd.
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Frightening thing?
This is the broken up chapter.
This and the previous chapter were once a single story.
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As we saw in an earlier chapter, she wasn't dissuaded forever, but she's a bit more low-key about it.
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because he hasn't had the time. You know how long it takes to schedule punching royalty in the face?
Because that doesn't impact her goals in any way.
Probably because he can't imagine a situation where raising a hand in anger against a pony would work out well for him- especially that early in the story. The fear beat into him by the Fae is still there, the terror of Celestia is strong, and the strong desire to fit in and seem harmless controls his action,
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Messing with memories is always tricky: Who are we except our memories? That's sort of a secondary theme of this story: Messing with memories is mortally complex and difficult to find the right answer- if there is one.
Wow! What a rollercoaster ride! And Discord is having SO much fun with this, and the peek at romantic movies was an amazing touch in itself. I'm surprised Lero had to ask about Alternate worlds, he's ON one. All the major constellations sound like they are there in-canon, just that this version of Earth is governed by magic instead of science...
And Hooray! Lyra is HOME! Now those in the know have a rock to brace on for a breather...
Man, Discord is having too much fun with all of this.
And looks like Rarity got Rainbow Dash badassery to add to her own.
Celestia have mercy of the idiot who pisses her off.
3048223 Thanks for the reminder. It's easy to forget details because life.
I enjoyed your work, BTW. Hopefully that's not inappropriate to add here...
Definitely my congrats both to SpinelStride and you for the backstories. That's just a whopper of a brainstorm.
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I don't think it would be, thank you. :)
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Welcome to the club, my friend. Signs marked Celestia is a ______ and markers are to your right, torches and pitchforks are to your left.
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I agree with the entire second half of your post. I have a story in mind where one of the human characters builds a house in the Everfree, despite being offered a rent free apartment, specifically because the pony's need to control everything creeps him out, while his brother loves Ponyville.
I love everything about this chapter!
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... and befriends many of the animals there, because he learns to respect them - he deosn't see them as 'monsters' like the ponies do but as... animals. He must acquire at least one Timberwolf as a pet [or long enough to treat the animal's wounds before release]...
... and then one day the human wakes up to find that his wolf buddy has brought his pack to meet Daddy.
That was WAY too much purple text. My eyes were hurting by the end of this chapter. Totally worth it though.
Best chapter yet.
Although, I must admit, you have developed the Rainbow!Rarity character to the extent that when things are switched back it is going to almost feel like a character death
3050454 I read on the "dark" setting, so I can barely read purple lettering. Whenever the purple was interrupted by white letters, however, they looked green because of the color contrasts.
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That would be interesting. One thing that happens because of it is he finds an old abandoned Earthpony capitol city buried under a mountain. He then finds some magic artifacts, a pair of prosthetic wings and a helmet with a artificial horn. His brother gets the wings but he hides the helmet for himself and tries to learn magic in secret.
Good GRIEF your story is absolutely riveting!!! I just... Ooooh I can't wait to see more :D
3050454 I laughed at this as well among other parts of the story xDD ugh lordy it was hilarious!
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Rarity remembers Lero opening up about this part of his past sooner to her than he actually had with Rainbow Dash.
Sweet Celestia! I didn't think it would end!
I've never read a chapter that long before
I laughed, grinned and sighed while reading this, it was soooo Great
God, How will this all end?!
(Sorry for the late comment, but I read this offline while off the net for a week and just got a chance to come back.)
This story is incredibly good! Here you have the chance to revisit and reimagine the Xenophilia story, and you are doing it so well! And you managed to take Rarity the interloper and make her into a Rarity we deeply care about! I'll be almost sad to see her go. The ending of this is going to be quite the emotional maelstrom. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Once again you write a grade A discord
Am I the only one who desperately want's that T-shirt?
please let there be the one chapter that discord does take lero to the alternate universes
3360325 No sir, you are not.
And someone should really make a meme of Discord riding a Harley Davidson. Much lols will be had.
If they put Honeydew agains't a human with a black belt,them ponies wouldn't be so fucking pitiful for Humans.If we put Lyra agains't Chuck Norris...Chuck would deflect the magicks
That’s so badly out of character for Twilight, it almost makes me wonder if she’s been swapped!
I'm starting to like this whole situation. Perhaps too much.
That romance story was so strong, it makes me cringe at how these two are going to go on after the switch back.
Also, Honey’s a cunt. I just felt the need to say that.
I know you're distressed, Twilight, but don't worry. They seem to manage.