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The Spot

first fic, trying to work on others. definitely not good by any stretch of the means. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

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Rainbow Dash's Inner Turmoil · 7th Feb 2012 · 1,186 words
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Source of the Turmoil · 8th Feb 2012 · 1,007 words
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Why can't I hold all these Emotions · 18th Feb 2012 · 2,068 words
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stupid #1 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · · Rainbow Dash's Inner Turmoil ·

Hmm. its an alright topic for the story, but I don't like the alcohol... is it really necessary to have that in the story? i'm deciding whether this is a story i want to read more of...

The Blu Equine

The Blu Equine #2 · Feb 8th, 2012 · · · Rainbow Dash's Inner Turmoil ·

after re-reading the story, i agree with you about the alcohol. it was kinda forced and rushed after i re-read it a few times. I've been doing all these chapters in class and changing very few when i went to upload it. Thanks for your advice.