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Letting Loose

Scootaloo, bleeding out and unconscious thinks about her life. Was it really worth living? Was there a mistake?

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Malefactor Blue

Malefactor Blue #1 · Apr 18th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Zman537

Zman537 #2 · Apr 18th, 2013 · · ·

interesting concept, but it feels like someone cut the climax out of a good story. If this had more build up, less jumping between scenes, and proper grammar this would make a good story.

arandomdude

arandomdude #3 · Apr 19th, 2013 · · ·

The story started out well, but like Zman said, it lost momentum, and the ending felt anticlimactic and abrupt.

Amanda Dianne

Amanda Dianne #4 · Apr 20th, 2013 · · ·

xD I know it's just a little story I wrote, between my big project.
I needed a break you know?
But thanks for the feedback and likes, I love you all (even the people who dislike :D)
My main story project will be out soon though so, it would be nice if you checked it out.
-Amanda out!

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