• Member Since 13th Sep, 2011
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theworstwriter


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This was written for a contest and authors had to stay anonymous. Now that it's over I can post my contribution. I haven't gone back to change anything. This is as it was for the contest, with ONE fix. I screwed up an italic tag in the original and the bottom half was ALL italicized. I corrected that here. Otherwise, this is as I entered it.

The prompt to follow was One-Way Ticket. So, uh, there's your description.

May eventually revisit and flesh out, but definitely not any time soon.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 23 )

That was way good

You... killed... Rainbow Dash... Just to make her be awesome?

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I'm not sure how to feel about this.

a good story, Rainbow Dash I felt was in the right character.

If you want more views to this fan-fiction you need to hook viewers with an interesting description. I was tempted into not clicking this because I had no idea what it was about. No offense but no one really cares about the details of your 'contest'

:duck:

I was really loving this story, keyword being "was". Not to say it's bad, it's not, and it's very well written. I could tell that Dash had died by about the second paragraph, but still, I really like stories that deal with this sort of material. Honestly, it probably would've been better if Dash had moved on, much more surreal and emotional.

But, as I said, I was really into it... until the end of her race with Death. Really? She kissed him? Death? :rainbowderp: And then the ending... where she's going on a date with Death? What? :rainbowhuh:

Honestly, I'm sorry to say, that's what really killed it for me. If it hadn't had those two parts and had a more poignant ending, I would've liked it a whole lot more.

3.5/5 :twilightoops: Because the emotion and feeling devolved into ridiculosity at the end.

~Rabbidfangirl

I liked this in the competition, and look forward to seeing how you improve it.

I liked it pretty well. You need a better description because I was tempted not to read it...

O_O
oh wow
ME LOVES
XD that was awesome

ummmmm...
uhhhhhhh....
ok?
that was hilarious though XDXD:yay::rainbowlaugh:

*Slow Clap* nicely done... Nicely done...:trixieshiftright:

could you at least tag your story?

definitely glad i read this. 5 star/tracking. i would love to see more

wait...
SPOILER ALERT!!!






does that mean that when she gets revived she has a date with death the next week?
does that mean she has to kill herself...then death lets her go back, and it happens every time they go on a date?
...
oh dear me...

I like this one, it's fun if you don't take to seriously.

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Dash ships with everypony. No exceptions.

Lol kiss of death was the first thing that came into my mind, then I reallised it was more of a kiss of life. :derpytongue2:

That was a very clever story, friend! I like.

Soooo Rainbow Dash x Death? I must say; I can't think of a stranger shipping!

1098526 how about RD+ a kitchen sink?
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand cuethetrollface!

So...Dash...is dating....Death. I'm game. XD

:applejackconfused::derpyderp1::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::facehoof:

I don't get a thing in this story.

My head hurts.

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I can see going back through all the old writeoff entries is gonna be fun. :) Rather enjoyed this the second time round!

The final line made me smile.

Well, that's one way to cheat Death, I suppose.

Just better not cheat ON Death, that would be bad.

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