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Scyphi


A brony of few words who writes many.

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When the Cutie Mark Crusaders work to help Fluttershy when her tail gets caught on their wagon, they discover there is a whole lot more to Fluttershy's tail than what meets the eye...

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This is far too awesome for word; so have a Rainbow Dash instead: :rainbowkiss:

This is pretty good. If this is your first time writing a fanfic, you're gonna go far. Keep up the good work.

Loved it. I wonder if we should explore Pinkie's mane next.

Who need Narnia when you have Flutterland :rainbowlaugh:

OH GOD YES, I CONTRIBUTED~! *dance of glee~!* And I LOVE THE RESULTS :D

A very fun read :pinkiehappy: and makes me want to check out the inspiration.

I thought this was familiar. Some of the items Scoot picked out were from the other story. I like how everyone theorizes where Scoot lives, and they are pretty much all the fanfic standard plot devices.

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It's actually not my first, I've got three others on this site already, and have been writing fanfiction well before that. :pinkiehappy:

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Maybe her mane can be a source of perpetual energy. :rainbowlaugh:

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I actually seriously was thinking of that when writing this. :derpytongue2:

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I aim to please. :ajsmug:

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Yeah, I hadn't wanted to recycle objects like that, but I quickly ran out of ideas for other objects to use (at least none that weren't too 'out there') so I ended up falling back on them in the end.

2445901 I am very pleased ^____^ Hoping you revisit this fic with more tales from Flutterland. *ROFL*

So Fluttershy's tail is a bag of holding? That's incredible.

I was half-hoping they'd come out as mature, war-worn mares who have experienced a lifetime's worth of adventure. All without earning their cutie marks. :pinkiehappy:

This story is exactly what I hoped it would be - who says reusing a premise isn't a bad thing?

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Every writer reuses a premise. They just all do it a little differently from the last writer. :raritywink:

"How can I possibly stay calm when I'm being told a story that defies all logic, reason and known science in one fell swoop?!"

I suddenly believe that Discord left her this as a gift and forgot to tell her about it.

The Lion, The Witch, and Fluttershy's Tail!

I was expecting the land to be shown, this was an interesting take.

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Maybe a possible sequel we'll actually see a bit of Flutterland. Still toying with the idea.:twilightsmile:

This was so weird, it's like the wizard of Oz meets Chronicles of Narnia, in Fluttershy's tail.

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Pretty much. But it's like my second most-popular story at the moment, so apparently I did something right. :derpytongue2:

2441779 we already know what's in there. Candy Land!

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That's actually better than anything I could've come up with. :rainbowlaugh:

4539286 your welcome. hey, if your not writing that, can i?

Finding Candy Land in Pinkie's tail? Yeah sure, go for it. :pinkiehappy:

Um, excuse me... I can't figure out what the problem with an apple orchard in Flutterland would be...

(I shall call it Tail Apple Acres! :rainbowlaugh::scootangel:)

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It was supposed to be a gag at the fact that not only would Fluttershy have a whole mystical land in her tail, it would also be joined by a whole apple orchard, all contained in one impossibly small space. Since I revealed that Flutterland also stretched on for "miles" though, this gag kinda falls flat in retrospect, but oh well.

PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!! I HAD TEARS COMING OUT IT WAS SO FUNNY!! :rainbowlaugh::yay::derpytongue2: HAVE A RARITY X3 :duck:

I would love to see the CMC, Spike and their friends like Snips, Snails, Archer, Rumble, Twist and other fillies and colts go into Fluttershy's tail as an adventure, that would make for an awesome story.

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As a plotline for a sequel never really materialized, I have toyed with the idea of doing instead a sort of "in-between-quel" that retells the story from the CMC's point of view, and tell of their adventure in Flutterland...though it'd be a tale that would probably be less comedy and more action/adventure.

But I admit it's not a high priority right at the moment. This really was a sort of throwaway fanfic idea, and one I didn't expect to seriously explore too much further. Sure, a follow-up of some sort's still on the table, but I don't know when I'll get to it, if I ever do. :rainbowderp:

Another dimension inside Fluttershy's tail? Can't say I saw that coming.

I feared based on the picture it'd be a story depicting her with tail extensions

And not a single dislike. (I was one of the upvotes, naturally)

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