I hate Mondays, especially when I'm unceremoniously ripped from my life, and imprisoned in the body of an Alicorn colt, and dumped into a world of which I only know of because of my sister. Yeah, Mondays suck.
At first, it isn't too bad, I'm a God child, for crying out loud, who saves an entire species from being overthrown. But, I lose my ability to use magic, less than 10 minutes after I first use it, yeah, life sucks.
So here I am.
This is my story, of childhood, and life itself, as I gradually remove the innocence of the children around me, and we venture, (me once more), into adulthood, and responsibility.
See you on the other side.
Book 1 of 'The Game of Life'
Inspired heavily by:
Foal Necromancer - http://www.fimfiction.net/story/61802/foal-necromancer
Oh to be old again - http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35763/oh-to-be-old-again
colt saves country, Send him to the moon!!!!!!!!
Nice! I'd definitely like to see where you take this!
It has a lot of potential.
I usually don't like human into pony stories. But this is a very unique premise with excelent writing. Please continue.
please continue this.
nice. cant wait for the next chapter
Ha, talking about "Book 1" when you don't even get past chapter 1
Discontinued...?
Is this another dead story?
It was really good