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I am an unwanted filly that only knows how to serve my parents. I am nothing more than some object...please listen to my story...help ponies see the evil in this world...maybe one day..I will get the life I deserve. For now I live in my past memories..memories I wish never where made..

Wait..is that the light? Is this the end? No..I see..green..wait..maybe I found somepony that will give me the life I deserve..a single rose may change my life forever..

WARNING: This is a first time writer's story
cover art is made by me

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

i want more chapters

3666304 ok and why did you reply to my comment two times

3666305
sorry about that :twilightblush: I'm still getting used to this whole website

3666346
Alright, thank you :pinkiehappy: I'll be working on the next chapter asap

It's a cute but sad story. Those ponies should be ashamed of themselves. Why should they even have a kid if their gonna treat it like trash.

P.S.What's the name of the filly?

3666597
Well her mother was originally going to kill the foal by drinking alcohol and other horrible things but then her father suggested that when the foal is born they should use it as a slave. Her mother got pregnent by sleeping with her boyfriend which is the foals father. :pinkiesick:

She doesn't have a name in the beginning since her parents just call her slave but later she is named Rosey, her full name is Rosaline Thorn :pinkiehappy:

seems like an interesting story.

3666652 That is a lovely name. I really hope something good happens to her.

3666772
Well many good things will happen to Rosey :pinkiehappy: but you have to wait for that :trollestia:

3666833 people mostly like a chapter that's at least 1000 words or more. just some advice for next time.:twilightsmile:

3666924
I know that :rainbowkiss: anyway I'm in the middle of writing chapter 2 so I thought showing what I have so far as a sneak peek would be nice for the people that want more :pinkiehappy: If you have anymore questions don't e afraid to ask! :twilightsheepish:

3666652
That is dark twisted sick and evil. What kind of messed up ponies would even do that, does the mother have no maternal instincts at all?

3667623
yep she doesn't at all, she only cares about herself and power. She's not really in love with her boyfriend btw

3668229
Wow...like the black widow, only she doesn't kill anyone...:unsuresweetie: That's dark

3670466
that's just what I was going for :twilightsheepish: yeah so I'm experimenting what types of fanfiction I'm good at. Next I'll probably do a comedy :pinkiehappy:

Interesting story so far.

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