Mother's Day

"My name is Rainbow Dash, and I have the coolest family on the entire planet! Mother's Day is the awesomest holiday in the world because it reminds me of that..."

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CanterlotGuardian

CanterlotGuardian #1 · May 10th, 2013 · 4 · ·

Bravo. *slow claps*

Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #2 · May 10th, 2013 · 1 · ·

You sir! Are marvilouse

star1wars3

star1wars3 #3 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

D'awwww, that was great! One small thing though

"I really do with that she could know

is that supposed to be wish?

Kaille

Kaille #4 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

She's going to grow up to me the most beautiful mare on this planet."

Wee typo, along with what 2557824 spotted.

But really, yeah. You done good with this. Very good little snippet of her life as a filly. And having Cardinal tickle her hooves could even adapt into canon; the reason she doesnt seem to like anypony touching her hooves is because she is only comfortable with him doing it.

star1wars3

star1wars3 #5 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

2557987 Heeey, I read one of your stories a while ago. The reason I didn't follow you until now: I have no idea, but that has been fixed anyway lol.

Alpha Scorpii

Alpha Scorpii #6 · May 10th, 2013 · · ·

Very good A nice and interesting interpretation od Dash's infance. Also very sweet.

Good job.

The Invincible

The Invincible #7 · May 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

This was an extremely overly sugary-sweet story, but that's alright; I like sugary stuff like this once in a while. I love how you expressed how a Mother's Day experience can come from anywhere, even without the benefit of having a mother, per se. It really sends the message that every day is important if you spend them with people you love. Dashie's child-like innocence in this story is heartwarming, albeit a little troubling. It really makes you wonder what happened between this Dash, and the Dash we all know and love. But that's for another time. For now, I'll say that this story was short but sweet. Very, very sweet. Good stuff.

Deyeaz