Gamer - Loves games especially the MGS series. Brony - Loves MLP:FIM Tekkie - Fixes PC's
1st person pov from scootaloo about where she got to today.
After 10 years of her life she was forced to move house, this diary/story shows her view on things.
I didn't know what else to use as a cover pic so um yea, Diary of a Wimpy kid.
Please leave your comments below be nice or constructive criticism I don't care but abuse won't be tolerated
Also I came up with this idea tonight so sorry if the title is already in use.
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She got in one little fight and her mom got scared.
What you did there. I see it.
review?
Okay, I want to read this, but I'm a bit wary due to the fact that your chapters are too short... I will read it because I will regret it if I don't... I just recommend that you make your chapters longer... Sorry!
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Sorry, I normally try to aim for about 1200 words a chapter.
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You get it?
2422515 Oh it's okay! I read it and it was really good! I just thought I'd say it because I normally do avoid stories so short which is bad of me... But yeah, I aim for around that too...
Anyway, its a good story and I cannot wait to see more! Really!
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2422696 Yeah xD I always write my chapters at like 3 am... its not the best idea! Anyway I look forward to seeing it! Take your time!
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Thanks :) now time for breakfast
2422727 time for bed for me! it's 4am! xD Enjoy breakfast
2422734 haha yea I will, I am a late riser it's 1pm here. Enjoy ya sleep
Could use some editing, use a comma whenever you change the subject, and proper punctuation when someone is talking.
Other than that, you're good to go!
You don't have to post the chapter just then and there...
I can PM you a fixed up version of both chapters, and I found a cover picture, just ask the creator for permission to use it;
Okay, here it is!
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If you want to edit them that would be great as I am currently without a editor
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sorry it took so long to reply lol
PUNCTUATE DIALOGUE
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Soory please edit?
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Someone else can edit. Theres a group for it some where.