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Daring Do and the Eastern Star

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Incredible Blunderbolt

Incredible Blunderbolt #1 · Feb 6th, 2012 · · · Alt Ending ·

This was good, but it moved way too quickly, particularly inside the temple and especially at the climax with the tour guide. Don't be afraid to expand on your ideas, you're not going to run out of words. Other than that, I enjoyed your story very much; yet I can't help but wonder just how many more Daring Do stories are going to pop up over the next week. This has to be like the fourteenth one I've seen today!