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Korth


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Awesome story is awesome.

Hmmm.....I have an odd feeling that this needs expansion.

Seriously, though, it feels like chapter one of a longer story...

How about a second chapter? Celestia and Futa Luna? Hmmm>? Prease?

2413401 That does seem like an interesting addition, hmmm.. :raritystarry:

2413059 I will have to see what I can come up with.. :pinkiehappy:

2413002 Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

2412533 I'm not sure what kind of face that is! :derpytongue2:

Too many faces? Perhaps, perhaps.. but they're all so CUTE! I just want to use them all.

I bet the first guard is Aegis Shield.

this was a very entertaining read; a bit rushed and a bit of character building at the beginning would be nice, but other than that fantastic job! :twilightsmile:

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It was actually originally intended just to be used to make a comic with, but I chose not to draw it. XD The next chapter I'm working on is muuuch better and longer, it's really turning out quite lovely and surpassing this one I think!

Oni

2413619 it's damn good for a first fic, but you need to work better on the details. with sex, you do more than just say "He Pounded" you put detail into the feel of it, and the reaction of both participants.

2420306 Thank you very much! I am currently working on a second chapter, and it has far more thought and detail put into it c: So hopefully it will far surpass my very first fic.

Oni

2420312 good luck, and i will be watching you

This was fun to picture and well thought out! Oh god i could imagine Luna chain mounting all her guards just to sate this new development xD

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<3 I hope you will read the second chapter, it is what you asked for! I just published it today. :pinkiehappy:

2427690 HIDE YO WOMAN HIDE YO OWN BUNS AS WELL, Luna is on the loose! XD

2437182 I loved this chapter and you now have a watch!

I am quite scared....i hope luna stays as FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR away from me as physically possible *hides my buns*

Mmmm Futa Luna is best Luna. How about both sisters going to town on Twilight?:twilightsmile: Perhaps with some horn play?

Futa celestia on futa Luna. Get some revenge in there

And celestia being bigger then Luna would in that situation be hot

I wouldn't mind Luna raping me. :twilightblush:

MOAR! Need to see how Celestia gets her revenge

It might be interesting for Celestia to find out just who gave Luna all those books. So, some orgasm denial for Luna while watching Twilight get screwed silly?

This second chapter was much better than the first. But maybe it's just my twin loves of princest and futa saying that...

Anyway, Twilight really needs to get in on the fun with the princesses.

Got a whyboner. This is good.

Damn, I hoped Luna'd have sex with Twily now :twilightsheepish:
Enjoyed it anyway. Just imagining Luna raping me somepony is really arousing, at least for me. But on the other hoof, I'm bisexual. :eeyup:

2452729 Don't worry, your Twilight rape will be well worth the wait.. ;D It'll be in the next chapter! :twilightsmile:

Why does this story bring up the worst in me? I'm just kidding! MOAR RAPE!

2716345 Sorry, life has been very hectic! I'm an artist and getting ready for a big convention that I'm selling at, hence my time has been eaten up by all that prep XD I fully intend on more writings and have a few chapters planned out already

I found this worryingly arousing and found it incredibly easy to masturbate too

How come every timee I read these... I'm reminded of cupcakes... call me sick... call me a Stereotypical Russian... call me insane (all true) but I can't shake the memory of this fanfic reminding me of Cupcakes.

3937923 if you are a ruski, move to America.

5035932 I already do. Los Angeles sucks ass.

5036343 LA does suck. Move to Colorado.

6792145 Then I'd leave behind all my friends. I can't do that. Besides I'd have to find a new group for dungeons and dragons

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