well that was... interesting, to say the least
but it was good though, so keep it up. i'd say things are starting to... heat up

Ace out

I love you Shy Shy! (wow there really no lovely shy emote are really sad to look at and the only happy one is wow)

needs more
interesting 1st part though

We need more fluttershy clop, go make more tyrant, NOW

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I'm sorry but that pun was awful

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...tough crowd

We all know where this leads but let's play gladly oblivious and wonder what happens next!

Welp, I have the weirdest boner right now. Human-on-pony action is always a little weird (I'm sure Captain Kirk would say otherwise)

As fluttershy would say, "....oh my...."

Way to short! More! More! More!

Whoa I think I'm going into heat too damn Flutters

Excellent first chapter, though I have one mane/main problem with most fluttershy clop, but this story is neither of those problems (in case anypony's wondering, it's fluttercord and fluttercord raep scenarios)

"I'll put on those stripped socks you like."

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great start man

this is weird......yet i am so compelled to read more ..........

That's a really asinine way to write, I'm out.