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It was Only a Matter of Time.

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The story of how a young struggling unicorn mage named Starswirl made his mark on modern thaumaturgy.

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TrevorLaneRay

TrevorLaneRay #1 · Apr 11th, 2013 · · ·

Eloquently written, and made me lulz.

As he moved passed it the soft glow of his magic fastened around the yardstick

acerbicCatharsis

acerbicCatharsis #2 · Apr 11th, 2013 · · ·

2412565 Thanks.and good catch. i'm actually dyslexic so homonyms slip 'passed' me some times.

Effigy

Effigy #3 · Apr 12th, 2013 · · ·

The plot is a bit unoriginal, but that's hard to avoid. More pressing are a plethora of run-on sentences and typos. You should look into tips on correct usage of commas and other such punctuation marks. Considering your dyslexia, it might also be a good idea to ask a friend to read through and mark errors.

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