There was never a place for Snowdrop. Not in Vault 01, and certainly not in the desecrated lands of Equestria. Once rolling green hills full of life and harmony, this land is now known simply as 'the Wasteland.' There is no way Snowdrop will survive. Not without help.
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Warning: Does not take place in Kkat's universe.
May not coincide with original Snowdrop story by Silly Filly Studios
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This is an excellent Premise. Snowdrop x Fallout? Staying tuned.
This is Australia...
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SO.
MANY.
PEOPLE.
DO.
THIS.
Your writing style is miles better than mine, and as usual that's depressing as fuck. But that little end bit worries me, becaaaauuussseeeee...
So yea... expect a shit storm coming your way when more and more people learn about this story, and how it ain´t set in the world of Fo:E, because if there is something that we Fo:E fans are is it stubborn. And as Doug Walker said as the Nostalgia Critic "Fanboys don´t like changes."
So all in all, a hard route that you are going on.
One thing you should think on is this exposition dump that you have here, because it is rather boring. We don´t really get any flavour of the world, we do just hear that the world went to shit, that the ponies now have tech and that they hide under the ground.
Not who they fought, why they fought, when they fought or something like that. Exposition dumps is one of the most hated things ever, and a sign of bad story telling. Instead of taking this back of exposition should you maybe throw us directly into the story, or at least give us some more details so we can see the picture that you are trying to paint, because right now do I just know that there have been bombs, but nothing else as such.
Maybe am I a little bit harsh, I know that I can sound that, but your first chapter, your first 500 words, even the first sentence, is some of the most important ones in all of your story. At the period of the first segment have people already thought on how serious they should look at this, and at the end have they already determined if they want to read the next chapter or not.
One of my best advices to you is to see this little video clip, it is only 5 min long, but uses it time well and will give you good tools to work with. And if you like their teller style, well then see the rest of what they say, focus especially on their story centred stories, because they are actually a game show, something that you also will learn rather quickly.
Oh and one thing...
Why call it stables? It is a human term for where you house many ponies, and not something they would say themselves, or I can not see them doing so. Why not call it vaults or bunkers instead?
i dont see why everyone is being so hard on this, i thought it was good.
Gonna bide my time until this is released again! The letters look superb, and I likr that it is set in a different universe to kkat's. I would like for Cadey, Luna and Twi to survive...
Snowdrop feeling snow for the first time gave me so many feels.
So... An hour after I post that I will wait until this fic comes out with great patience, you post the first chapter?
I think I love you. You have made my night, guy.
3874314 Imma lady. You're welcome! I've been working on that chapter for a while. Super busy at school right now.
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Imma sorry. ;;
And thank you for the chapter! I know dat school feel, my term just started.
It lives!
So... Total reset. Kk.
This is Australia...
Being a huge fan of FoE, I can't wait to see how this fic turns out! As specially whne it's set in a different Equestrian Wasteland compared to Khat's. Nicely done!
nice!
Is this still being worked on?
So... is this fic dead? Kinda a dissapointment if it is. I was really wanting to see how a blind character would fare in the harsh wasteland. Such a story is so very unique, and not many people have written such a story, until you came along. It would be a real shame for this fanfic to end up in the story grave, unfinished.
Hello, are you still active ?