I gotta say, when I first read the description, I wasn't sure whether or not I would like this story. However, having taken time to read the first chapter...it's actually rather entertatining. I'm curious to see where it goes.
Also, love Barb. She sounds just too precious!

Rule 34 rude version of the love life of Dusk Shine.

Were you inspired by Artemis Fowl?

Dusk is only gonna be paired with mares, correct?

I find this quite entertaining i do say this looks like it will be a graaaaaaaaaaaand doozy :D

Always up for some snark.

I love a good dose of snark!

2407500 Nope, gryphons, diamond dogs, dragons, a giant sea serpent, zebras, and ponies. Maybe a few other things as well.

Eh, not sure I'm interested, sorry. I know it's likely to come later, but you haven't really given a reason or explanation for why Dusk is so OOC to Twilight. Add in it being Anthro for no APPARENT reason, and it just doesn't hold my interest. What's the point in making it anthro?

Yeah, okay, so I'm being harsh when it's 'just beginning'. But if it doesn't capture my interest AT the beginning, then what's the point in my reading it? Sorry, this just isn't my cup of tea. (Won't dislike it, though. The writing itself isn't bad, just my opinion of characterization and lack of explanation for actions so far.)

Soldier would tear dusk a new one for the way he's acting, and then shove grenades in it for the hell of it. And before you question me on how fucked up that sounds, remember the 'meet the' video for him. Severed heads, he was talking to severed heads, have a nice day mate.

2407379 No.

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Okay

2408325 Are said creatures gonna be females?

I just noticed a problem:

The lavender stallion managed to click his fingers

Since when do ponies have fingers?

2410703 since it's an anthro story.

2411112 Ah.

2409991 Not up to me. Why? Which side do you want him to get?

I'm following this to see how it goes... But I really would like to see only Dusk shine being a guy out of the Mane 6... M/M shipping is not my thing.

2412025 Female

2412254 Same, although I'm not sure which mare.

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All the mares.

2412857 Correction. All the females.

Anthro Ponies.

Why?
...
Seriously why?

2416013 Why not?

Reminds me of Ulysses from FNV Lonesome Road

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wow this is a really good story with a lot of potential, just make It like 'The Unexpected Love Life Of Dusk Shine'.
But this is a great start

ANTHROS?! Oh! Mah! Gawd! WAI~~ THEY SHOULD ONLY BE PONIES! PONIES! PONIES~~~~

.....ugh, doesn't anyone get tired of reading that over and over? What's wrong with Anthros? Honestly now, there's no difference. As George Lopez eloquently puts it... "IT'S THE SAME THING!" so get over it peeps.

Seriously though, this is a great start. Reminds me of a Anthrofied version of The Unexpected Love Life of Dusk Shine. And seeing as how there are so few of these out there, I say well done. You've caught my interest. Especially with Gleaming Shield and Barb. That's an interesting notion I've never seen put before in writing. This is a first for me. (If there are any, I would love to see pics or fan art on these characters for more detailed visualization.) Insta Faved!

Just don't make this a Yaoi fic please!~

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(If there are any, I would love to see pics or fan art on these characters for more detailed visualization.)

You and me both.

reminds me of that Disgruntled Friendship Student fic. Only better.

This looks very promising! Can't wait to see how his female friends change his jerky attitude. Also, I hope that the author doesn't have in mind to Ship Dusk with all 5 mares. It's kinda too rendundant of an idea. Maybe with Pinkie... or Rainbow Dash... or both... the other three aren't that interesting to me. Personal opinion is all.

PS: I hope the mares are well endowed! LOL

Hmm. I am intrigued. You have changed not one, not two, but three elements of the story. Ergo, rather than simply a change in personality, and a change in biology, you have OTHER characters have been R63'd as well. By doing so, you not only change some interactions between characters, but there is an increased sum of the harem pool. And for that, you get a pat on the back. Well done.

The Pic in this chapter is not working right or showing up at all.

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Fixed.

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Thanks.