• Member Since 21st Oct, 2012
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MrPockets


Hey there. I'm a brony and I'm trying out this whole "fanfiction" thing. Hope you like reading my stuff as much as I like writing it.

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A Bioshock crossover starring the mane six.
Years after the events of FiM, the six former Elements of Harmony have moved on with their own lives and rarely see each other anymore. Pinkie invites the group to Manehattan for a reunion, but things spiral wildly out of control, and they end up in the decaying, underwater city of Rapture. The old friends square off against everything it's leader, Summer Rain can throw at them, including crazed splicers, the fearsome Big Stags and the Little Fillies they protect.
Will they be able to pull together to save the sunken wonder, and their strained friendship?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 155 )

interesting, bioshock has always been about the dark decent humans go through when they choose to no longer abide by state/religions/moral laws; thus it'll be interesting to see what you do with this story. Hope to see more soon, after all, 'there's always a lighthouse...'

Come on, Pockets,you should give Rapture a ponified name or something different at least.
You should add sea ponies.

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Like what? Raptrot? Clopture?
Those names are crap-ture. :rainbowlaugh:

IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME THEY PUT IT UP. YEESH

Professionally written sir.

...sea ponies would be a really funny thing for the end. Just saying.

So, going with the two days update schedule?

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I may put in some sort of sea pony reference in there somewhere :)
And i may actually add the next chapter today.

Well my friend!
Welcome to....

BIOSHOCK EQUESTRIA

Do you mind if I do a reading of this?

Somewhere... beyond the sea, somewhere watin' for me~

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Like on youtube? That would be pretty cool actually, go right ahead!
Just send me a link when it's done (and, ya know, give me credit and whatever) :pinkiehappy:

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Ha, it was actually because I downloaded the soundtrack that I started playing the game again, and then this all happened.

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One day, this *will* be featured*

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Maybe once Bioshock stuff actually comes into play...

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Eh, it isn't them not reading it it's folks not clicking man, gotta get that first feature to bring in the faves. You could've had it, you just got fucked out of it.

So far this story is impressive. The scene is set up well and you give a good background to what's happened in the intervening time.
Now to see what happens.

Tell me, are you not entitled to the sweat of your own brow?

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"No," says the man in Washington, "it belongs to the poor."
"No," says the man in the Vatican, "it belongs to God."
"No," says the man in Moscow, "it belongs to everyone."

2407707 I'm interested in seeing how that could be incorporated in this story. also...

"And what name will you choose?"

"He's ***** ******* "

"He's Jerry the house ghost"

"No... I'm both..."

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Thank a lot man, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Stay away from the light house... (I decided it's time for me to be crazy in this comment) It whispers, and sings, but always lies! It always murmurs with the ocean, "Make us whole..." Repeating and repeating, time and time again, until forever after happens. :pinkiecrazy:

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Hey, cool man! I guess you're planning on doing all the chapters?

As soon as I read "100% safe" I knew it was the titanic. Anyways, this fic has been golden so far so have a fav.

Sweet story Mr. P :twilightsmile::yay:

I eagerly wait for more. And by 'wait' I mean demand :pinkiecrazy:

More Please!!!

And... Que Lights!

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I've played the game 5 times over. I know everything by heart

:pinkiehappy:
Angels are coming :pinkiecrazy:

Hmm, while this game does take place in rapture,w ill we be seeing any Bioshock: Infinite references? Or perhaps a certain pair of twins? they could certainly help with guiding the five to twilight. Anyway, great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^

There seem to be a few Bioshock crossovers floating around. This one seems to be shaping up reasonably well. The only thing I dislike is that some of the characters seem just a bit off. I get that that they are supposed to have grown apart and that their personalities have changed but some small points just don't quite ring true. For example, most of them showed no inclination to pull together during the crisis of the sinking ship. And despite being older Rainbow Dash acts even less mature than she does in the show.

These are small things though and I massively enjoyed reading what you have written. Please keep it up.

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Wow, thanks for the in depth critique!
I do agree with your note about characterization, I think the problem is that I'm writing them as they would be normally. I'll try to be more aware of this in future chapters.
Thanks for reading and commenting!

I thought Spike would ride in with Twilight on his back and be shooting flames off in the sky and stuff.

Okay, so I was wondering if there were going to be any reference to Infinite, than I started wondering "geez, what would that be like?". Mlp happy shiny is pretty honest, and any setup attempt to do something with that would just be a genetic evil Celestia fic. "Evil Celestia, alternate universe". Bioshock Infinite: Lunaverse. Any of yous can use that idea. Its on the house.

Any way, good story so far.

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Thanks man! I came up with this idea before Infinite came out, so I wasn't originally planning on it, but I'm sure I will be slotting in a reference or two where I can.

A gentle reminder: "it's" = "it is", and "its" is the possessive form. Pardon my pickiness. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. I'm terrified at the mere idea of Pinkamena armed with, say, a fire plasmid!

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I tell him that all the time! :raritydespair:

I'm really loving these stories. :pinkiehappy:
The only complaint (which is really a compliment) I have is that after every chapter, I cry a little. :raritycry:
The way you handle the girls' crumbling friendship really hits me. I await for more!

Well well well, looks to me like Twilight is playing the role Atlas/Fontaine? Intersting.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::twilightsheepish:

I am now incredibly interested in Twilight's role in all this. All I can think is that actually Twi speaking or someone else?
2486847 That picture is just amazing.

And here I thought Twilight would be playing the part of Brigid Tenenbaum...

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HE KNOWS TOO MUCH, KILL HIM!

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lol, you stole my picture.

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Fact: I once tried to photoshop that jenga tower into a bucket of chicken. Mostly cause I'm a bad person and I gt bored.

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Fact: Did you know black people prefer McDonalds over KFC?

2487290 But I don't wanna die! :raritycry:

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You should go to Rapture then, it's perfectly safe there! :pinkiecrazy:

I can't believe it took 5 chapters to get to rapture...

Where's Spike? He must be here!

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