• Member Since 9th Dec, 2012
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Sinful Pickle


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Sometimes you can fix broken ponies. Sometimes you can't. The question is, how can you tell if it's too late?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 2 )

I see nothing wrong with this. Maybe a slight change could be made with fancier language, but it's already an improvement over your first story.

this story is very original, i like original. i have never heard of a story that puts these three ponies together, Vinyl, Lyra, and Colgate. and i havent heard much of a Turner Colgate relationship... of course i dont really look that kind of thing up... usualy its Dr. Derpy stuff. whatever. this was a good fic, i liked it. thumbs up and a fav.:pinkiehappy:

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