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Lyaksandra


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One day, the Princess of the Sun finds herself confounded by the mail mare. She decides to have some fun through this peculiar Pegasus, her unexpected appearance and at the expense of her castle's staff.

When she realizes the joke has gone too far, and regrets her actions, the Princess of the Sun is surprised yet again.

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That made me smile as well... :twilightsmile:

Very nice and sweet. I do agree that the word "fable" describes this. Perhaps it might have been a little more, um, consistent if no actual dialogue had been used. The buildup of tension was nice, although there didn't seem to be much of a climax. 4/5 :pinkiesmile:

..... :heart: :derpytongue2: :heart:
I rest my case.
Muffin rating? Twelve out of ten muffins :derpytongue2:
~SoDF

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