"Everything that you think was created, everything that you thought never existed, was a lie. Nothing is ever created, only Discovered."
We have seen them before. We had thought we had created them. But, nothing is created. When Brandon Pierce finds himself of the recieving end of a science test gone wrong, he is taken to a far away world, very different from his own. The experiences he has there not only change him mentally, but physically as well.
This is his story.
Authors Note: The First four chapters are the buildup to how Brandon is thrown into the new world. Those few chapters do not have much to do with MLP.
Authors Note 2: Yeah, Yeah, the "Human in Equestria" Thing has been over done, I get it. This is just a story that I have had on my mind.
http://www.livestream.com/writingbrandonpierce
"The large man sat at his desk, overlooking the files that had been on his desk for quite a while. The files showed schematics, drawings, part lists. All of which shown a large circular device, what you and me would call a portal."
Masterfully vague descriptions. Ambrose Bierce approves.
All me, except I play electric and watch YouTube videos.
I am now clicking the favorite button.
My reactions:
I can't wait for Brandon to tell them that he already knows them from the show.
It will happen, right?
Lol.
Nuff said.
If you can come up with a part 8 ASAP (As Soon As Possible)
well it would technecly be part 9 from the Part 8 at the top of this but in the list of chapters it would be part 8
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Yeah. I put two chapters together because they were too short IMO.
There might be some confusion there.
Also. Chapter 8 should be up within a few days.
2453419 need any help?
It would be unlikely he would have been allowed to go missing, but I'll accept that little plot hole. ;)
This should be dub. ;)
Keep going! ;)
Tons of lowercase "I" and "I'm" Some other stuff I remember but I can't find. This is the partial and probably not edited that much, so there's a few things to look out for and edit.
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totally right! I could use some editing skills
BTW sorry for the long waited release, ive been swamped with work/school.
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Oops, I saw an update and was like, woohoo! But then it was short... ;p
I can certainly sympathize, we just had finals this week. Glad to see you still have interest in your story!
Keep going! ;)
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nice to see that people are excited about my posts!
Just a question (because I want the next part to come out soon hopefully) when is the next part coming out?
Quick Update:
Sorry that I have not been posting as of late. Getting ready to head for college, finding a summer job, etc. Lots of stuff.
Anyway, I am proud to announce that I will be starting a weekly livestream event called "Lets Write 'Brandon Pierce'". This is supposed to be something that will encourage me to keep writing this fan fiction. I still have several ideas for it, I just have not had the will or the time to do so. Hopefully, this will help it out.
The streaming will be every Friday starting at 8:00 MST. Be sure to check it out!
http://www.livestream.com/ashmanfiction
There's not enough context in the story. Not enough words to explain what the character is doing, or what's around him. Other than that, I don't see anything too bad about it.