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Crossing street + Hit by an 18 wheeler, should not equal being alive in a dungun, let alone with the bug out bag you had created for a zombie attack. Rick Rogers is in the strangest place, and after hearing the guards about executing the prisoner, an escape was never easier that with the things in side that bug out bag. After his escape he finds the world he is in, is not his own and what looks like what use to be a peaceful place is now in a civil war. The Solar Empire VS The New Lunar Republic.
(this story is a human version of every character that means human mane 6 human Luna etc.)

Chapters (6)
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Comment posted by naimsosa deleted Apr 12th, 2013

2413792 I just finished fixing some things in both chapters
I suggest you go back and reread them:fluttershysad:if that's ok

2413777 awesome story but don't say it's your first story because people generally stay away from them and also don't like it as much

it was good and I really enjoyed it so keep righting and I cant what until the next part :twilightsmile:

2413824 I re read it and wow I really can't wait for the next part to come out

2425484 Thanks for the specifics.. cant wait for more.:pinkiehappy: and why no luna emotes!!

If someone could make me some cover art of Rick being back to back with the human Luna from this picture that would be great. Or some cool pose for both of them. I would do it but I suck at drawing both by hand and computer.:moustache:
Send to naimsosa116@gmail.com

I suck at drawing but maybe a scene from the fight when rick is jumping at luna with his machete raised behind him, luna's hand raised towards him with tendrils of her auric powers reaching towards him with her blade calmly resting against her side. :rainbowdetermined2:

2427789
send it to me and that might be the new cover art and ill give you a shout out:rainbowkiss:

Sorry this was due on Sunday but count on a new chapter every week but don't hold your breath for a certain day.:pinkiehappy:

Ah, good ol' C4 plastic explosives

Warning Chapter 3 is a bit slow.
working on 4 now.

If someone could make me some cover art of Rick being back to back with the human Luna from this picture that would be great. Or some cool pose for both of them. I would do it but I suck at drawing both by hand and computer.:moustache:

Send to naimsosa116@gmail.com

When in doubt... C4!!!

Sorry i did not get a chance to workon 4 but my ps vita will let me work from anywhere now:moustache: Still need cover art

Bon Bon, Lyra noo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:applecry::fluttercry::applecry::fluttercry::raritydespair:

2537968sorry just not a bigg fan of them.
:derpytongue2:

2540549
But did you have to kill them.:applecry: I mean come on what did they ever do to you.:fluttercry: you could have just beat the crap out of them and left them knocked out.:raritydespair: Why did they need to die.:unsuresweetie:

2541280l
look i have the sorty planned out.
Spoiler Alert. Lyra is not dead all the way.:rainbowderp:

I am looking for a ghost writer.
I would send you a hand writen/picture version and you would type it.
Non paid but you would get to see the chapter before anypony else and i would give you credit were do.:raritystarry::twistnerd::pinkiesad2::pinkiesick::twilightoops::rainbowwild::raritywink::twilightsheepish::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::fluttershbad::pinkiesick:
pic spam.

Didn't see that coming

oh now this is odd. :rainbowhuh: but AWESOME. :rainbowwild:

oh and about the story art.. i cant draw but i'm great at ideas. :pinkiesad2:

2666853ok thx anyway

I am looking for a ghost writer.

I would send you a hand writen/picture version and you would type it.

Non paid but you would get to see the chapter before anypony else and i would give you credit were do.

pic spam

i have an ODST story that was i worked on before i publised the End with a Start, and it has been untouched sence the password to see it is ODST if yoy guys want to see it.

So when next chapter ol` chap?

For those of yo who are wondering I have the next chapter complete, just that the chick I hired to type it has not done f***ing anything so ya.

I'll type it up my self so that will wake at least a week.
maybe.
if I type fast.
so hope I do.
but who knows.

2749147 3.8 weeks later.....

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

2749147 six months later... Man! Get this story going! Or hire a new bleeping editor!!!:pinkiesick::raritydespair::flutterrage::fluttercry::applecry::raritydespair::raritycry: The story must go on fellow!

more, you need to get word out that you're doing this story again, people might have abandoned it. :twilightoops:

Welcome to "Murica" Bon Bon

Okay, I'll be honest with you. I couldn't finish the first chapter. That's a problem. As such, I must ask, do you have an editor? If not, it would be a good idea to get one. The story was going way too fast and there are too many run on sentences.

Five years earlier a fight was happening between sisters.

And yet it only took one minute to read. It's an argument that started a civil war and I could read the whole thing before I'm done brushing my teeth.

"My loyal soldiers, I have something to say to all of you, we are feared by my subjects, but I swear, with all of you as my witnesses, that will not only give them a reason to fear us but a reason for everyone, our allies our foes and our families, to respect us, and show them that the night is where the fighting spirit is, and we will rule Equestria! We will Destroy this corrupt society, and establish a new, more use full government and be the ruling power of this world! We will destroy every foe that faces us, for we will no longer be under Celestia's reign in the Solar Empire, NO! We will rule as The New Lunar Republic!"

This entire "speech" is four sentences. Four. That's not even a standard paragraph.

Not one hesitated to agree with this idea, The were so moved by this speech, that they all started cheering.

Really? Not one of them thought that this was a bad idea? Bulls :yay: t.

Sorry if I'm getting increasingly aggressive over this. It's just something that happens from time to time.

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