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Gamma Deekay



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Welcome to the Fo:E heard :twilightsmile:

Special thanks to my pre-reader and all around letter E hater Bad Pun.
You're welcome! Although it's not *my* fault that you've been haveing troubles removeing the letter "E" when you add "ing" to everything! :ajsmug:

enjoyed the start gonna start readin now.

Oh, damn, another one... It's no another way to skip clop scene than fuckin overused alcohol blackout? Just seeng it in 54262564 time in FoE fiction make me :facehoof:
Good story :pinkiehappy: Too much years before LP for my taste, but still good.
Keep it up.:twilightsmile:

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Yeah, Honestly I rewrote that part two other times and it was the only way that sounded good to me :pinkiesad2: But thank you for the feedback at least! Oh, and I"ll try to keep the cliche blackout moments to a few that make sense. :heart:

2472712 Thanks! I look forward to reading all the other entries here soon! :pinkiesmile:

MoM weapons are best. Good chapter.

Damn good chapter! :pinkiehappy: Longbow are nice. :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Bad Pun deleted May 4th, 2013

Most certainly my favorite chapter, not only because of how many times I had to go over Gamma's work (Four!) but with how many story arches it has available and where it could go! So many possibilities!

Ghost Alicorn! YaY! Damn, I want more of her! :twilightsheepish:

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Well I'm glad you like her! :pinkiecrazy: Also, thanks for reading! :heart:

Hah, acid blood? That's a good news! :pinkiehappy:
Two lesbian AI? :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Look, I am used to this shit in FoE ofcourse. But.. It's.. I can't take seriously that only straight character in party is Longbow. :facehoof: I understand Comedy tag and all that. But.. Look, I likes real bisexual characters when authors use them to create intresting situations. Like love triangles and stuff like that. But pure lesbian mares.. In this amount.. In wasteland.. I said It thousand times from moment I start reading FoE, It's not FiM ponyville, where is no death and everyone can just fuckin do whatever they want. Even Kkat understood that. If wasteland would be filled with bisexual mares, I would be okay with it, but wasteland filled with "pure lesbian" mares. :facehoof:. And Carlotta. Griffins for fuck's sake! Race that lost they home to enclave. Mercenaries without home. Tough folk on verge of existence. You ever saw in FoE ficks, how they sustain their numbers? Fuck, really. How you think this happen if most of them work as individual mercenaries? They work, until somehow met another griffin? Or what?
Yes if you start to bring logic in FoE, and especially in worst post apocalyptic setting of all times Fallout. Everything will fall apart.
Awesome chapter actually. Great amount of ch.dev.. Keep it up.:twilightsheepish:
And yes, 10k words chapters are good idea.:ajsmug:

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Once again Regolit, thank you for your feed back! :pinkiegasp: :heart:

I know what you're saying, and I would think that BIT and PINK are kind of exempt, being genderless. Yes, they are presented as mares, but the idea is they were created with their respective Ministry Chief's in mind. Oh, and with Carlotta? That's all part of that super amazing backstory she has yet to divulge to anyone! (and I have really yet to hammer out the final details of, but it's a work in progress!) :pinkiecrazy:

Also, I'll start to write each chapter at the 9k - 10k size. The others I asked seem to think it's the way to go as well.

Your story is awesome then again this author is awesome.OMG too much awesomeness.

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Thank you so much for the kind words! :pinkiecrazy: I'm super glad you are enjoying it!

2799722. I know sometimes authors need some encouraging words to cheer them up. Brony on!

Haha! Really! Remove damned table! Genious. :rainbowlaugh:
Awesome chapters! AI's melodrama and sea adventure! :rainbowkiss:
Damn, WTF is Project Horizons? I want to know! :raritycry:

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Project Horizons? :pinkiecrazy: Bad pun and I had this crazy idea that the tokomare would somehow propell the giant disk of starmetal Hoofington sits on, at the moon. we both thought it was interesting that Blackjack and King Awesome talked about just that possibility!

But I'm really glad you are liking the story! I'm still working hard to get chapter 12 done right, so you can expect an update on it by monday!

This is by far the the best Fallout Equestria story that I have read so far, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you so much for your kind words! :pinkiehappy: I'm really glad you like it!

Good chapter! I like when authors separate protagonist from party for some time.
Also. Have you whole plot planned already?

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I'm glad you are liking it! :pinkiehappy: I've got 90% of it figured out, but I'm still trying to keep it semi-open just in case I get an amazing idea I think would fit in great.

Like I had mentioned in the authors notes, I really do appreciate your feedback. It means a ton to me. :heart:

Awww..... Awesome chapter! :pinkiehappy: Dunno about second chances, but this 'half-slavers' looks quite intresting. Keep it up, :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks Regolit! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you find them interesting! I hope you like what happens next!

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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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So, adorable -foal-[[Midget!]] with a frying pan? Okay, that's great! I have a whole new story to read now.

Hey! I am not best FOE fan! Best FOE fan is Deathpony. :ajsmug:
And Awesome chapter! Backlash here rolling like a boss. :twilightsheepish:

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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! :pinkiehappy:

And you may think Deathpony is best, but I don't see it yet. He's got potential, but also a lot of catching up to do if he's going to have anything on you! :pinkiecrazy:

42... Is that a Hitchikers guide to the Galaxy refference?

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That it is! :pinkiehappy: I've got lots of references throughout the story, it's something I love to hide and love when people find!

Again with the 42??!! I fucking love you man... (No homo)

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Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying the story! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by regolit deleted Aug 29th, 2013

Well, 42 is really cartoonish willian.
Keep it up. 220k words now..... Celestia's sweet clit juice.. :twilightsmile:

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Of course she is cartoony! She has to have the feeling of Pinkie behind her! :pinkiecrazy:

OMG! Fuuuuuck! :pinkiegasp: Well... It's your MOST FUCKIN AWESOME CHAPTER at this moment. :pinkiehappy:
Damn... From time to time every author can write shit, and can write greate. This is best of this story that I had read. :ajsmug:
It's hard to write good psychodelic stuff, and here, after 42 shot, I have feeling that you doing it right. :rainbowkiss:

Solemn, the author?...... ahahahahah! I personally not see why it's bad to write that you readers suggest. If it suggested through PM and other readers do not know who's idea is it. Why not? It's better than hiatus :derpytongue2: Fuck, everything better than hiatus. :ajsmug:

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I'm SUPER glad you enjoyed the chapter! Having a 'pinkamena' version of Backlash has been something that I've wanted to do, and poured myself completely into while writing this chapter. It took quite a bit of tweaking to get it to sound right, but I made sure to leave clues to what was really going on throughout it.

The whole Solemn scene was a play on a fallout 2 special encounter Unwashed Villagers fighting a spammer. It was mostly spawned from a number of times Somber (author of Project Horizons) appeared on the IRC with the same complaints as in the chapter.

So far it's looking good. The one flaw I'm seeing is things seem rushed. We're introduced to two party members at fast speed while just getting to figure them out. And so much happened in this one chapter that it seems a bit disorganized. Hopefully things will be a bit slower with some more description to cushion the story as I go. Otherwise the humour is nice and Backlash and Sky seem pretty balanced character with a nice best buds thing going on.

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Yes, to be honest, when I sat down and wrote the Preface, and chapter one and two, I had little idea of where I was going with the story. I believe that I corrected that fairly quickly, but please let me know if that is still the case! I'm glad you enjoy at least part of it so far!

Thank you for your feedback! I don't get enough, and every bit helps me understand how to make the story better! :pinkiesad2::heart:

So basically my thoughts when reading this chapter boil down to "Yay, Pinkie's back! Best FoE fic EVA! Now Pinkie and Fluttershy can get together and party after the war to catch up all that lost time!" And "Yay, sillytagonist! And a Steel Ranger. Shiny metal armorflanks!" And "yay half-dead purgatory spirit guides and computer-y things!"

And then I got to this chapter and was like. "Oh. She's the antagonist. OOPS."

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""Well, how about you and I go somewhere quiet and... what did carlotta say it like?" I leaned up to his ear as he threatened to change his whole coat to red. "spend some 'quality time' together?" I whispered soflty into it his ear, giving the tip a little lick as I drew away slowly. Brass seemed to shudder before flopping over with a deep sigh, seemingly in shock on the floor."

Hot.

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" Sky eyed him curiously before gazing back at me.
"Wow, you finally snapped and murdered him. I applaud you on lasting this long. Hey Carlotta! I owe you 50 caps!" "
Lawl.

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I'm glad you're liking it so far! :pinkiehappy::heart:

I love the ref at the end to the first three fallouts! That made my day

I'm glad you are liking the story! :pinkiehappy::heart:

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