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Gamma Deekay


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Welcome to the Fo:E heard :twilightsmile:

Special thanks to my pre-reader and all around letter E hater Bad Pun.
You're welcome! Although it's not *my* fault that you've been haveing troubles removeing the letter "E" when you add "ing" to everything! :ajsmug:

enjoyed the start gonna start readin now.

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Yeah, Honestly I rewrote that part two other times and it was the only way that sounded good to me :pinkiesad2: But thank you for the feedback at least! Oh, and I"ll try to keep the cliche blackout moments to a few that make sense. :heart:

2472712 Thanks! I look forward to reading all the other entries here soon! :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Bad Pun deleted May 4th, 2013

Most certainly my favorite chapter, not only because of how many times I had to go over Gamma's work (Four!) but with how many story arches it has available and where it could go! So many possibilities!

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Well I'm glad you like her! :pinkiecrazy: Also, thanks for reading! :heart:

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Once again Regolit, thank you for your feed back! :pinkiegasp: :heart:

I know what you're saying, and I would think that BIT and PINK are kind of exempt, being genderless. Yes, they are presented as mares, but the idea is they were created with their respective Ministry Chief's in mind. Oh, and with Carlotta? That's all part of that super amazing backstory she has yet to divulge to anyone! (and I have really yet to hammer out the final details of, but it's a work in progress!) :pinkiecrazy:

Also, I'll start to write each chapter at the 9k - 10k size. The others I asked seem to think it's the way to go as well.

Your story is awesome then again this author is awesome.OMG too much awesomeness.

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Thank you so much for the kind words! :pinkiecrazy: I'm super glad you are enjoying it!

2799722. I know sometimes authors need some encouraging words to cheer them up. Brony on!

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Project Horizons? :pinkiecrazy: Bad pun and I had this crazy idea that the tokomare would somehow propell the giant disk of starmetal Hoofington sits on, at the moon. we both thought it was interesting that Blackjack and King Awesome talked about just that possibility!

But I'm really glad you are liking the story! I'm still working hard to get chapter 12 done right, so you can expect an update on it by monday!

This is by far the the best Fallout Equestria story that I have read so far, keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you so much for your kind words! :pinkiehappy: I'm really glad you like it!

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I'm glad you are liking it! :pinkiehappy: I've got 90% of it figured out, but I'm still trying to keep it semi-open just in case I get an amazing idea I think would fit in great.

Like I had mentioned in the authors notes, I really do appreciate your feedback. It means a ton to me. :heart:

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Thanks Regolit! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you find them interesting! I hope you like what happens next!

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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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So, adorable -foal-[[Midget!]] with a frying pan? Okay, that's great! I have a whole new story to read now.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! :pinkiehappy:

And you may think Deathpony is best, but I don't see it yet. He's got potential, but also a lot of catching up to do if he's going to have anything on you! :pinkiecrazy:

42... Is that a Hitchikers guide to the Galaxy refference?

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That it is! :pinkiehappy: I've got lots of references throughout the story, it's something I love to hide and love when people find!

Again with the 42??!! I fucking love you man... (No homo)

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Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying the story! :pinkiehappy:

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Of course she is cartoony! She has to have the feeling of Pinkie behind her! :pinkiecrazy:

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I'm SUPER glad you enjoyed the chapter! Having a 'pinkamena' version of Backlash has been something that I've wanted to do, and poured myself completely into while writing this chapter. It took quite a bit of tweaking to get it to sound right, but I made sure to leave clues to what was really going on throughout it.

The whole Solemn scene was a play on a fallout 2 special encounter Unwashed Villagers fighting a spammer. It was mostly spawned from a number of times Somber (author of Project Horizons) appeared on the IRC with the same complaints as in the chapter.

So far it's looking good. The one flaw I'm seeing is things seem rushed. We're introduced to two party members at fast speed while just getting to figure them out. And so much happened in this one chapter that it seems a bit disorganized. Hopefully things will be a bit slower with some more description to cushion the story as I go. Otherwise the humour is nice and Backlash and Sky seem pretty balanced character with a nice best buds thing going on.

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Yes, to be honest, when I sat down and wrote the Preface, and chapter one and two, I had little idea of where I was going with the story. I believe that I corrected that fairly quickly, but please let me know if that is still the case! I'm glad you enjoy at least part of it so far!

Thank you for your feedback! I don't get enough, and every bit helps me understand how to make the story better! :pinkiesad2::heart:

So basically my thoughts when reading this chapter boil down to "Yay, Pinkie's back! Best FoE fic EVA! Now Pinkie and Fluttershy can get together and party after the war to catch up all that lost time!" And "Yay, sillytagonist! And a Steel Ranger. Shiny metal armorflanks!" And "yay half-dead purgatory spirit guides and computer-y things!"

And then I got to this chapter and was like. "Oh. She's the antagonist. OOPS."

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""Well, how about you and I go somewhere quiet and... what did carlotta say it like?" I leaned up to his ear as he threatened to change his whole coat to red. "spend some 'quality time' together?" I whispered soflty into it his ear, giving the tip a little lick as I drew away slowly. Brass seemed to shudder before flopping over with a deep sigh, seemingly in shock on the floor."

Hot.

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" Sky eyed him curiously before gazing back at me.
"Wow, you finally snapped and murdered him. I applaud you on lasting this long. Hey Carlotta! I owe you 50 caps!" "
Lawl.

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I'm glad you're liking it so far! :pinkiehappy::heart:

I love the ref at the end to the first three fallouts! That made my day

I'm glad you are liking the story! :pinkiehappy::heart:

The whole "Behold the wondrous balefire egg!" was good fun. XD

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Well I'm super glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

I like Isaac. He fits firmly into the categories of neat weird flashy tech/magic type things that I like, and sorta kinda plays with the idea of immortality, or the question of what mortality means to alternate beings. I also remember one or two things made me chuckle this chapter, but I can't remember off of the top of my head what they were.

3292686 :D

I predict his ability to cascade will later be used as a dramatic sacrifice to blow up [insert emergency dangerous thing here] when nopony else could destroy it and when he had no chance of getting powered in time. I dunno. Seems wastelandy, anyway.

Also, I attempted to fill out a Retlcessment form thingy. I still haven't quite figured out how to save the thing into an appropriate form after filling it out. https://docs.google.com/file/d/1-Vf2pGVsWbk-HJGBv_6irkVeA0MAjmbcL_-NYZy2SzlJiCWkIlrt4uBUNosn5kLbto36nqCWVE7N3uyC/edit?usp=sharing

Yay, Mind-read-y silly PINK funs! She entertains me.

Yay! More silly talky computery thingies and explosions! And Backlash finally realized that totally giving in every time whats her face shows up pretty much does him no favors! Yay, learnypone!

I was more amused by the slamming of the merc around than I probably should have been. XD

Anywho, neat. Pretty much all of my initial fondness for 42 is dead a number of times over at this point, but I imagine she probably still has pretty flanks anyway. Of course quality that got one in trouble to begin with would stay pristine! 8D Because the Wasteland is wonky like that. (Probably not really. Maybe.)

Ooh, a first time combatant. Here's to hoping firsttimer didn't die horribly. LOAD DEM CANNON!Z


BTW, thanks for the credit bit in the notes. ^.^

Also, kind of a neat perk, and PurgatoryPink is still as sillycute as ever.

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So, you pretty much just tore straight through 10 chapters, Huzzah! And yeah, 42 isn't supposed to be loved! She's pretty messed up inside, and as you can see, getting progressively worse! But yes, Carlotta beating up on Twain was fun to write!

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I'm glad you enjoy reading fillypie! I wanted Pinkie to be a recurring character, but I kind of got sick of of seeing everyone write super depressed or drugged out Pinkie. So this make more sense, AND it's been fun to think up all of the dialogue. And why wouldn't I think you? You've given me a lot of feedback on things, and I appreciate that!

You made me cry over a character

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I am glad that you felt connected to Brass. :pinkiesad2: He was a great character, and as I said, it took a lot of effort to hit the publish button when it came down to it. Thank you for your comment, as it is exactly the thing that makes me glad I actually decided to post my writing. :heart:

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