Special thanks to my pre-reader and all around letter E hater Bad Pun.
You're welcome! Although it's not *my* fault that you've been haveing troubles removeing the letter "E" when you add "ing" to everything!

42... Is that a Hitchikers guide to the Galaxy refference?

WELL, that first chapter was loaded with convenience...

HOWEVER, I figure it gets better, what with 28 chapters out...

So! Recommend a bit of an overhaul, maybe some fleshing out of in between times. Like when he was driving. Would have been awesome to learn that oh god, he's awful at driving at first and maybe takes out a few walls on accident. Also, stalling would be funny as well.

"She's stubborn, just like you. Just needs a good buck every now and again."

You know, there's two different ways you could take that ...

it seems there may have been a few of them that had a bit more "fun" then I would have wanted,

Meanwhile in a Mature fic, the all-Pinkie-orgy!

Ah darn, someone beat me to the Chrysalis car idea. Not that it's that hard to come up with by looking at the name "Chryslus Motors" from Fallout 2.

...I'm still using it.

Wait so hitting his face in the cement and getting kicked in the ass kills him?! How? Am I missing something?

4929355 well, a powered steel boot to the head, I'd say that would do some skull cracking and brain swelling, both can be fatal

Is it worth reading the prologue or just reading the other 26 chapters?

She cut me off, "Oh it's simple silly! Back before the war, I once accidentally made more me's than were useful, but during the war, I was under so much stress there just needed to be more me's! So I went and got them back! But, there may have been a few of them that had a bit more "fun" then I would have wanted, but it doesn't matter because YOU'RE HERE!"

What in the FUCK is going on in this story :|