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No-one will leave

Soon after Twilight's ascension to Alicorn-hood, her friends followed and took control of the Elements - and when Fluttershy took control of the Earth, no-pony, not even Celestia, would realize what power they'd given her before she changed them all into stone and hid herself away in the Everfree forest.
Ponyville is deserted. Canterlot is in a continual state of crisis. Her friends have abandoned her.
But that doesn't matter. All that matters is that no-one leaves.

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Impress Me #1 · Apr 8th, 2013 · 1 · ·

This was a refreshing change of pace from the Bioshock crossovers and the HiE fics!All I can say is that I've never seen a fic that turned out quite like this. I'm a little confused about the Elements and the powers they have AND I noticed something a little odd in the dialogue. You put an action, which was a sigh, in the middle of a sentence as though it was a part of the dialogue. I think you should go over it again. Maybe put an ALT tag and look over the fic for grammatical errors?

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