• Member Since 28th Apr, 2012
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Lance Skyes


Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...

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"To the East of Ponyville lies the Everfree Forest, to the South, Sweet Apple Acres, and the North, Canterlot. However, no matter what map you read, nothing seems to exist in the West. Many ponies have tried to map this area, but few ever returned, and those who have returned were never the same as when they left."

This just screams "Cutie Mark Crusaders Adventure" doesn't it? (Since there's no "horror" category, I'm telling you right now that this [might] fit under that category if it existed.)

First of three stories.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 26 )

Don't worry, there have been plenty of Slender stories,(I've read quite a few) so I wouldn't worry about copying anything...because I'm sure someone beat you to it.:raritywink:

Oh yeah, according to the map of Equestria there is something to the west...
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This might help with future stories.:applejackunsure:

“I know where that book is, and while it’s technically my obligation to let you borrow the book, I need to warn you that it’s a very dangerous topic and suggest that you don’t borrow it.”

Spike musta been rockin' the stash if he was talking as out of character as this.:moustache:

2365716 He wasn't high if that's what you're saying. It was just the topic. It makes just about all the characters flip out. I can't wait to show Time Turner's reaction when Silph comes to Ponyville.

Oops, I may or may not have just given a spoiler. :derpytongue2:

2365716 One other thing: I wasn't working off of that map. I was working off of Granny Smith's map from "Family Appreciation Day." :eeyup:

Shit got real:rainbowdetermined2:

I think this is the most feels chapter in the story... which means this story is beginning to suck. :|

Actually it's starting to feel more interesting and it actually got me. Apple Bloom just lost her two best friends and that's pretty sad.:fluttercry::fluttershysad::raritycry: But into more confusing matters.... WHY THE HELL ARE THERE MORE SLENDER FELLOWS!!!!!! Slenderman, Slendermane, Silph, Slenderhawk and Slenderwolf? WHY ARE THERE SO MANY? YOU COULDN'T STICK TO ONE?!:flutterrage::twilightangry2: You could've stuck to Slendermane considering this is Equestria not Normal Earth and or the other places where these other slender characters came from. But this still good but if you want to make story with a slender character stick the Slender character to it's PROPER WORLD!

2527266 *sighs* I was really trying to avoid giving this ultimate spoiler, but there's so many Slender because there will be a Slender-Pony war later in the series. There, I said it. :rainbowderp:

Now that we're doing this, I might as well tell you that at the end of the first story, Silph makes a promise to Applebloom that he'll prevent the war. He won't be able to keep the promise. :facehoof:

Are you happy now?

2533358 Sort of... But what's this about a war?

2533676 You have had enough spoilers! No more! :flutterrage:

2548463 Looks someone's got the case of the Flutterrages.. Pffff ha ha ha ha ha ha.:rainbowlaugh:

2548615 No. I meant to do a Seinfeld reference. "No spoiler for you! :flutterrage: "

2548712 And I thought my refrences were bad. And chill out.

I think that, instead of them "talking" they should use a form of telepathic communication, since they don't have mouths. Also, they should have actual names, instead of slender(rest of name here), make it to were the name "slender" is just a part of folklore.

I don't think that scoots should have been killed, I think that she should have instead been turned into one of slender's proxys, like maskey.

2690807 The names, I'm not going to do. Scoots getting killed, I don't even know what you're talking about. Do you mean turning her into one of the Slender's minions like that chick from the mine in Slender: The Arrival?

2864411 Harmony and Darkness. It's cancelled, though.

The little sister of the element of honesty just lied...go figure.:ajbemused:

2911206 Ya know, I never noticed that... :eeyup:

Really? If Big Mac, BIG MAC, Is scared why are the fillies still going in. They are so ignorant and stupid :applecry: in this story. Maybe ther cutie marks should be in stupidity:derpytongue2:. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WORK!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

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