Tails finishes work on a teleporter that can take Team Sonic to any specific point in the universe, when Sonic clashes with a certain pegasus mare who claims to be the fastest thing alive, can he resist the challenge?
Sonic's character will be slightly more based on the one featured in Sonic Colours
The Sonic characters will NOT be pony-fied, purely because there a so many to be able to describe them all as ponies would take up at least one whole chapter!
As always enjoy reading and comment on on things you think I should improve upon, and most importantly ENJOY
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Chapters (4)
haven't read this yet but I will say this, If your going to downvote guys at least say why!
There are some run-on sentences, capitalization mistakes, punctuation errors, and broken sentences you might want to fix. I would put them all in this comment, but there are just too many. Other than the mistakes made in the actual text, this is a pretty good story. There aren't that many decent sonic crossovers.
Man did I love that Youtube video!! Still, loving the idea you've got goin' here! Only issue I can see is a need for some editing. You know, spell check, some grammar errors, that sorta thing. If ya need help, PM me your e-mail and I'll send ya mine. I can give them the once over for the obvious ones, or just look up some groups on site that'll help ya. Either way, it can only make the story even better!
Best of luck!
I accidentally disliked
A red what?
You might want to get an editor, I saw a lot of grammatical and capitlisations mistakes. But other than that, the pacing is good and the fic seems interesting
2956877 yeah me too.......by accident