Twilight's an alicorn. She's busy with her own royal duties. Her friends are happy for her. But when Rarity and Applejack get drinking Rainbow Dash feels the repercussions. She gets angry. Confused. Even a little insane.
Rated Teen for sexual themes, violence, mild profanity and pop-culture references. You've been warned.
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What kind of person can EVEN think this up. This doesn't even seem like a trollfic, so that's just kind of saddening.
Wow..
I love it can't wait till next chapter
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Yeah that says it all.
Awww so cute. The ending was kind of sudden though.
Rainbow makes a great psyco.
2672232 "Cute"... interesting choice of words.
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hehe
yeah not the best choice of words.
Not as in cute cute but like Rainbow going psycho over her friends leaving her. Also the reason Aj and rare had for not going out.
This is an
interesting concept for a story
beuttiful
Yeah, I can't really follow this. There's little insight to Rainbows madness, where is been triggered before, if she had to be in a mental Ward, if she really was trying to kill her friends or delusional. You have her apologize in the end, so apparently she was aware of her actions. I expected her to kill herself out of grief of the person she became. It just seems to... unfinished.
I hope you'll maybe write a prequel to this where Rainbow losses her sanity. Maybe the other girls too. This just feels unfinished, and too many details are missing. No buildup at all, and AJ's and rarity's make out session seemed more a catalyst than an actual cause of Rainbows mental state. Just find it hard to Up-vote this, so I'll leave it be and see what you do with the story later.