Toby "Tobuscus" Turner is transported to Equestria when he presses a rainbow colored button, will he make friends or will he be evil. Neither, he shall be Tobuscus. And if It's Tobuscus it means stuff.
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Another LP??? ARE YOU SERIOUS???
this had better be GOLDen.
what in the name of monkey jesus?
188240 HAHAHAHAHAHA, This is wonderful
Tobyponcus is best pony
i lol'd
I didn't read anything yet.
But the combination of MLP plus Tobuscus =
Tracked.
also, you need to start a new line once a different character starts talking, otherwise it gets REALLY confusing
188252 i also Lol'd
velociraptor im looking forward to more ^^
I have no idea what just happened but I'M LAUGHING. So you did something amazing.
This had me laughing the whole way
OH MY GAWD, SOMEBODY TWEET THIS TO TOBY, NOW!!!
I wonder if he will meet gabuscus
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Are you for fucking real? This stupid, unoriginal, retarded piece of literal literature crap is nothing short of..
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Genius.
What the royal boggering fuck is this?
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188307 thanks for the idea
One of my best friends loves Tobuscus. This story sure cracked me up so hopefully she'll get a kick out of it as well.
I shit myself with laughter when I saw Tobusucs, I love him! MUST READ!!!
this is really good i want to point out on the last paragraph first line it has tje not the
Holy shit I just read it AND I AM IMPRESSED, please go on... *Rape Face Activated*
Oh btw (Sorry for spamming with comments) DO DO DO DO DO DO DO WRITE MORE.
Haven't read yet, but I'm tracking already
What the?!
Ok, this is new. Don't think anyone has tried this yet. What's next? Are we going to have Ian and Anthony from smosh go to Equestria? Or freddiew? ... nobody do that! That's my idea!
188520 Too late, I'm doing it already so HA!
INSTATRACKED! This ought to be good Audience. WHEEEOUW!
TOBUSCUS FTW!!!!!
You could really get something goin on here lol. You should have tried to doin one of his famous literal improv songs on the situation.
I'm a pony pony. She's a pony pony. We are pony ponies. Dragons arent pony ponies. He's a phony phony. Cuz he's not a pony pony! etc etc
That's using the song of his diamond sword in minecraft... I should really go outside
188346ok just to make sure you know he is the buff one that uses logic right
Leap of faith
Fricken awesome *preforms the leap of faith from the top of clouds dale smacks into hay bale* "OwwwWww"
He saw Rarity didn't he.
SWEET MONKEY! THIS IS ÓSOM!
I can't remember the last time I laughed this hard
This....This is beautiful man *sheds manly tear*...5 stars and tracking the fuck outta this.
that made me laugh so hard when tobuscus said as sure as i will never beat skyrim. it's funny cause it's true lol
lopve it
love it*
plz keep this going its so funny
fricken amazing
You need to fix the spacing with the speech. Here's an example I thought up based on the story:
"AAAHHHHHH!" Twilight screamed as they tumbled down the hill. Toby, however, was not phased.
"WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW! THIS IS SO AWESOME!" He slammed into a rock "GAH! GOD DANGIT!"
Hope this helped!
....Not exactly what he would do but still funny as the living daylights of high pitch girl screaming!
I love Frieckin random people like toby. Keep the work up Gurrrrl
189765
Or Twilight
190105
You know you can edit your messages, right?
paragraph breaks, USE THEM!
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The lack of paragraph breaks makes this more absolutely nuts.
I think that's the goal.
Nuts.
And bacon.
lol I love how Toby is jealous of Pinkie
...You should totally have him sing his sugar cane song in an oncoming chapter
Just a suggestion
Gabeuscus! whhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwww
oh yeah! time for gabuscus to come and double the fun!
gabuscus lol is it sad i can read there voices as i read what they talk
195091 nah, i do the exact same thing