i'm surprised you didn't go for Lesson Zero first...

Eh...Twilight's not exactly blameless here. I hope you acknowledge that...

Damn... I think this is the second story where Twilight turns dark because of what happens during Canterlot Wedding (and if I'm wrong please correct me). I know I don't like Chrysalis but what Nightmare Twilight put her through then throwing her into a never ending hell... Damn.

and everyone who witnessed what happened...I don't even know what is going on through their minds. At the very least I can't put it in words. This is going to be even worse then last chapter with Rainbow Dash.

“I brought my suspicions to Celestia, Shining, and those five girls up there upon the stage, but they disbelieved me. More than that, they cast me out. My own brother disowned me, stating he wanted nothing more to do with me, that I was banned from this ceremony. The five girls who I’d long thought were my friends joined him in turning their backs on me, betraying me, hating me. And Celestia, whom I have devoted most of my life to, joined them in shunning me, casting me out, severing our relationship as student and teacher.”

Celestia’s eyes widened. She had never said that! She was disappointed in Twilight, but she would never have…

Ah, but Celestia forgets, actions can speak louder than words.

I just really think Twilight should've been the main villain of this episode.

What is this!? "Loyalty, Joy, Kindness, Honesty, and Generosity" you do know its laughter right?

2435496 Twilight may have issues, but face it. the others completely mishandled the situation.

Now… allow me to show you… the full strength of my hatred…”

This reminded me of this

While this

“W-What are you?”

Reminded me of this

specifically 8:23 seconds into it.

Ouch. Remind me to never piss off Twilight.

What is it about stories like this that really entertain me?

Nice very nice, now this what happened when they didn't listen to Twilight Sparkle.

This will teach the mane five, Celestia and Shining Armor a lesson for not listen to Twilight.

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Id say because Hasbro has to make the show kid friendly. On fanfics, they can do stuff like this for the people that were pissed at the infamous 7

You know, think about what would happened if Chrysalis managed to escape from Twilight Sparkle.

Imaging if Twilight in her nightmare form kill not only the ones that betray her but also the wedding guests, luckily Luna and the real Princess Cadance prevent that and calm her down.

Chrysalis laughed. “I have been feeding off of your brother’s love for the true Cadence for over a week now. Consequently, I have gained a massive boost in power. Even before that, I was only slightly weaker than Cadence or Luna; now, I could go one-on-one with Celestia herself and I’d stand a chance of winning! What makes you think that you, a single dark mage unicorn, could defeat me?”

Unicorn?! Did you not see the wings Chrysalis?!

All that aside, jeez that was graphic. I just got a callback to the MLP fanfic, Truth Be Told!

Well that was gory sadistic psychotic and down right horrible. AND I LOVED IT 😈

Rainbow Dash… The braggart, the bully, the insensitive bitch of the group…

Suddenly, the mare in question replied with "BUCK YOU, TWILIGHT! You know, or SHOULD know, at the very least, exactly why I didn't trust you! Does Mare Do Well ring any bells, you insensitive BITCH!?" She said, before glowing with a prismatic light. When the light faded, everyone around her gasped. Where Rainbow Dash once stood, a veritable army of the mare stood. "We are Rainbow Dash. We are your DEMISE, Twilight Sparkle. Resistance is futile."
Before the corrupted Twilight Sparkle could do anything, she felt the impact of 10,000 Sonic Rainbooms hitting her all at once. After the dust settled, all that was left of Twilight Sparkle was her horn.
"Aw yeah! That's what I'm talking about!" Rainbow Dash said as she merged back into one pony. "That'll teach you to make me feel worthless, you insecure bitch!" She said, talking to Twilight's horn.

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oh my god, i only read part of that but once i got to this, "we are rainbow dash..." i just couldn't help but burst into laughter since rainbow is my fav.

I actually like Chrissy thank you very much

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The Infamous what?

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you sir have good taste

Hello, hello.
I came across the "There was no friendship." part of your story originally from KingSombraTheTyrantRuler's story The rise of an Empire. And I asked them if I could use it. They said that they got that part from you and it would be a good idea to ask you.
To be honest, I like how you made Twilight have a self-reflection about the whole situation.
It was inspiring, would you mind if I used it to a start my own fic? I don't want to use it word for word, so no need to worry about me stealing anything. Just wanting to make sure before I start the possible fic.

DAYUM....TWILIGHT IS A REAL BADASS !!!!!!!