• Member Since 25th Aug, 2011
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This is a random story, I really had nothing else to do, I did this just for fun. You may rate it and comment it as you please just nothing too negative please. If you want to make a request on which pony I should tickle next, say in the comments or message me, If I have time I would be happy to fill out your request. (I will tickle Orignal Characters if you want me too, just make sure the owner of the charecter says yes)


Chapters (7)
Comments ( 106 )

Its so funny and cute! (':heart:');

can it be one of the princeses(I cant spell)

oh god this is so awesome! :pinkiehappy:

7863 Alright, I'll tickle Fluttershy

7838 Glad you like it! :twilightsheepish:

7822 maybe after or before I tickle Fluttershy, I have a princess Luna Tickling story on paper, just needs to be edited, and then I'll type it, and post it

7863 I have carried out your request. :twilightsmile:

I have to say this princess luna

8065 I think I can manage to do that

:trixieshiftright: This is certainly an...interesting...piece of literature.

I really have no idea what to make of this...

But for some reason, I want Trixie to get tickled next.

Cute stories, though I'd recommend building up more towards the tickling and making it more descriptive. For example, you're tickling a back hoof but need to put in details like how it is done (what kind of stroke, what direction, what part of the hoof, etc).

8065 I have carried out your request :twilightsheepish:

I dont see twilight yet(or spike or derpy it go's on and on)

9382 I need some ideas to jump start me, this is a just for fun story you know, but I will try to get to those characters when I have time

Pinkie would be impervious, she's always laughing.

Sorry guys, I'm begining school again :fluttercry:, and it will take me longer to write the stories :fluttercry:, but don't worry i'm still writing the stories :fluttershysad:, its just gona take me longer to post them on the site, cause of school, so be paitent.

I thought you were going to do Trixie :trixieshiftright:

12302 sorry but, my ideas for her were short, but I did have an idea for Derpy, tell ya what if I get an idea for her, i'll write it down, also I'm in school so everythings a bit mixed up :derpyderp1:

Hmm, okay then. In that case, I'm putting in a new request for Zecora (hopefully that'll provide a bit of a challenge).

12319 By the Allspark this is going to take a really long time, not to mention I have another story, called transformers equestria, I have lots of school work, but If you've read my bio, I'VE GOT TIME, so I'll what I can do

hey Unicron do you have any ideas for Spitfire or Trixie.:trixieshiftright:

17801 First of all its UNICRON and second of all I'm trying to write something about Trixie yes, I can do Spitfire, sorry it's taking me a long time though.

18027 I can't do that I only do ponies, but maybe I can make the Companion cube tickle a pony....

I can understand that your busy with school.:ajsmug:

18740 Thank you it's taking me a long time with these School projects thanks for being patient. :twilightsmile:

Hey I might put in a request for Spitfire.:rainbowwild:

Hello there, the last of the Lords of Chaos. May I humbly request that you do a story with the Cutie Mark Crusaders?

24473 yes I can do that, but I am working on the Trixie story first.

I just got an account and I don't know how to put in a picture lol:rainbowlaugh:.

I bet your Trixie story is going to be awsome.Or I hope.:trixieshiftright:

I hope so to, I'm writing now. It should be here by this monday or this tusday

Well, that was...interesting :rainbowhuh::trixieshiftleft:

And I still wanna see one for Zecora (I know she's not technically a pony, but she's close enough, dammit!)

I'll try....but i'll need an idea....

I'm now putting in a request for Spitfire.

26865 yes I am trying to write somthing about spitfire at the moment.

27477 Thank you very much :twilightsmile:

I am trying to write the Spitfire one.
and I have to do Zecora as well, haven't started on that one, need a good idea. my mind is scrambled :derpyderp1:

I wanted to do "Incendia" from PK's Antipodes I asked PK and he said no. Too bad, I think Incendia from Antipodes is the hottest oc pony and pony ever, but I guess you have to respect people's wishes...

Sometimes when my mind is scrambled I go crazy.:derpytongue2:

I like these stories so far. Although I have to suggest having a little buildup to the tickling and being more descriptive outside of just describing where they're being tickled. Like adding how fast the tickling is, the direction of the stroke, ect. Outside of that, I think you're getting better at these.

And if I may suggest a pony to tickle, Cheerilee.

The premise? Well, the CMC all receive bad grades on their tests, perhaps some...convincing can boost their grades to an A.

29377 thanks for the critizism I'll try to.

and that sounds like a great idea, I'm gona use it


um, this was just good, but i can really sypathise with scratch, I HATE being tickled

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