• Member Since 6th Mar, 2012
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Just a critic who happens to write about pastel colored magical talking ponies


A blank filly with no attention span whatsoever, tries to discover her talent while dealing with the misunderstood advances of a sweet young colt who had the best of intentions.

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Bad grammar. :raritycry:

What bad grammer. i have perfikt gramer. :pinkiehappy:

The story is mostly a joke. I have a friend who never capitalizes his eyes, and another friend who gets really irritated when this happens. Also, the date is April 1st, and I did leave a note at the end of the story. I'd hoped to get the point across without completely spoiling the joke.:twilightsheepish:

Mkay. Phew. I was kind of worried there for a sec...
But man, you didn't capitalize the title, that's like... overdoing it. :unsuresweetie:

I suppose I could capitalize two of the title words, but it would certainly look strange :pinkieshrug:

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