Quiet Storm is a pony that stands out no matter where he goes.
Dead Bass is a pegasus who can be friends with anypony, but he'd rather scare them.
Shard was always bullied, until she became the meanest pony in town.
Though, when fate brings these three are together, they become friendly, daring, and even competent. After one incident starts a domino effect, these three are sent through Equestria, facing one challenge after the next.
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This story needs a helluva lot more love, i really like it so far. However, you have some grammar errors as well as tense errors. For instance, you wrote
See how it goes from stops to commented? Try to keep it consistent-has it happened already or is it happening right now?
Anyways, like i said, i really like it :)
2366471 Thank you, it's always great to hear encouragement like that. And don't hesitate to point out grammar issues, I tend to make a lot of them, especially with this keyboard.
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I love to give out encouragement, and i especially love OC stories. They're just so much more realistic than ones with the mane six or other large characters, ya know? More relatable. Anyways, as a bit of a grammar nazi, i dont hesitate to proofread, so if you need a proofreader, shoot me a message.
2366592 Will do!