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Hopefully this story will go better than my first one did. I learned alot from it though, I continue to hope that some of you will bother to leave a comment and help me by giving me some criticism.
Good start. Some minor spelling errors and you should consider having a editor if you don't already have. Besides that, this story looks like a favourite
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
It looks like it could be a good story. But I recommend getting an editor if you haven't already. I think I am going to favorite this so I can see how it goes.
Rating: 6.3/10
I like where this is going. You do need an editor though. If you need one I'd be more than happy to help. Still, great job.
You have my attention. Give it back, I need it. Seriously!
This is really good!
Keep up the great work
Hmmmmmm...
2358214 Thanks, if that's an offer then I will gladly accept. Although I have no idea how to let you be able to edit my stories though...
I can see a lot of feature potential here...
My day has been made better by the updating of this story
Thank you
2390988 Thanks! It's great to know that you enjoy the story!
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Your welcome. Scootaloo is my favorite Crusader, and this has portrayed her well. I can't stand stories that portray violence against any of the CMC, Scootaloo especially. Thank you for writing this story.
Need Moar!
Oh, come on
.. Stop these cliffhangers 
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Very great story, can't wait for more
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Damnit, the cliffhangers!
Good story, will follow.
What the.. Whyyy
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Nice Chapter. But so sad
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No! I thought AB would die in this, not Rainbow...
annnnnnddd you made me cry DAMNITTTTTTTTTTTttttttttttttttttttt aw whatever ill wallow in my tears for a while now
Really nice story, well done :')