Dinky Doo goes to school with the CMC and class, what will become of the unicorn filly? why are the two rich ponies so mean to her? find out in Dinky goes to school
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wow, 73 views, thanks for actually readin my first fanfic...working hard on the newest chapter, as well as a story about twilight's fillyhood
You have a few capitalization errors here and there, and at least one spelling mistake I caught; Scooldaloo. And it seems kind of rushed, this however could just be because i read fast.
This has the potential to be a good story, you just need to poke your editor some more and get them working.
That said, I still enjoyed this.
Thanks for the help! I knew I was doing something wrong while writing Scoodaloo!
2384810 My editor is my older sister so...yeah.
Ah.....tribalism. Must be his way of compensating for being a merchant........
2385386 no i'm currently in middle school, my LA teacher would just laugh at my fanfiction! but I do get your joke.
For a second I thought that she would accidentally injured those little brats.
Your wish is my command
An interesting turn of events. But I do have one thing to be picky about.
Romponians = Romans and Colthage = Carthage, yes?
The Romans actually beat the Carthaginians in the Punic Wars, and not the other way around as depicted here.
Sorry, but I like to study history as a hobby.
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as do I, I just made equestrian history what would have been better for earth, aka the Carthaginians winning vs. the Romans. The Carthaginians produced incredible feats of engineering and the world would be better off if they won the Punic wars.
her name is spelled ditzy not ditsy
Space out your paragraphs on all of the chapters so they aren't gigantic walls of text. How you're setting up the story is good, just make it look presentable.
This is an awesome story I
it so much
2408254 Same, and I was hoping for it lol
MORE STORY!