• Member Since 31st Mar, 2013
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Lumpfish


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Fifteen years after the day of Sunshine and Rainbows, the New Equestrian Republic continues to fight against the harshness of the wasteland. Though radiation and taint are no longer threats, a war is being waged against ponies that refuse to give up their savage ways.

A courier heads west on a high-priority mission to the fabled city of New Pegasus. But all is not as it seems when he meets an enigmatic stranger that may hold the key to his mission's success. Under the harsh sun of the Palomino desert he will learn that things aren't as simple as his orders have led him to believe.

Comments, criticism and feedback are greatly appreciated.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

I think it is safe to say you are the god of photoshop

No, seriously. How did a story with a description this short even get accepted?

The "long" description is shorter than the "short" description. What the actual fuck?

And a picture like that?!

Comment posted by Lumpfish deleted Apr 2nd, 2013

Thumbed up for the cover art.

good it is good. Keep on writing.:yay:

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Thanks for the feedback.

Wow... That was a "nice" cover you have here

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Thanks! It's almost as 'nice' as your avatar drawing, don't you think?

Note: Some revision was done to all previous chapters as of chapter 5.

Ya'll need a better cover. (But I've seen worse, so I'm still going to read this.)

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