• Member Since 4th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 5th, 2012

TheRedBronyGuy


A random fanfic writing brony.

T

-NOTE: CHAPTER 2 HAS A SMALL REFERENCE TO A NIGHTMARE IN PONYVILLE-

A parody of "Cupcakes".

Pinkie Pie is ready to get the next victims: Twilight Sparkle AND Apple Bloom. But will someone (eventually) rescue them from Pinkie's more dark side? And what the heck will Pinkie make out of them?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

I have no idea what I just read :rainbowhuh:

186880 - Thank you for being constructive.

Also, i just started writing fanfiction, so right now, everypony somehow does not get the point.

187409 Look. This Fan fiction at least needs to be more than 860 words, and it needs to make sense.
check out some other fan fics to get an idea. just don't copy them.:unsuresweetie:

Yeah umm i really don't get this. I saw "cupcakes" on youtube and it was really f'd up truthfully. But if this is what you enjoy writing... then okay then. I know that of course this is obviously not meant to be canon, but why do "bronies" write this? You have a totally wonderful and chill show for everyone, so we can escape the sad, violent reality of humanity, but you write this, scar us forever, and ruin Pinkie's character really. :fluttercry:

You make things happen to quickly. Its just like, This, That and DONE.

You need to explain more in detail like in actual cupcakes.

Ok. Who else noticed that there's no chapter two? (Goes from 1 to 3) :rainbowhuh:

Login or register to comment