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While feeding her animals supper, Fluttershy notices that her pet chicken, Elizabeak, has gone missing again. She tries her best to find her pet, but she follows the chicken tracks into the Everfree Forest. And now she must conquer her fears and get through the Everfree's scary dangers without giving up and breaking down. Will she be able to get through the Everfree without giving up? Or will she fail in finding her pet?
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Oooo, interesting. How long is this story gonna go on for? It's good so far, and I am looking forward for more. Fluttershy is best adventurer.
2349581 Thank you! The story will probably end in two more chapters, but I've been busy with other fics and I won't update as fast as I usually do with my other stories. Anyway, I will get around to updating! Thank you for the comment.
2352486 That's okay, no need to rush. I learnt the hard way to not rush. And you're welcome.
I really like the beginning. I think that you're off to a good start. I also like the details of the sky. Try to put even more into the Everfree Forest, like how the trees and plants look.
I really like how Fluttershy's personality is so timid too. You got this thing down. I hope that she finds Elizabeak soon!! Oh, I see that you plan on ending the story after two or three more chapters. Darn, I was hoping for more excitement. But that's okay. You said that you were busy. But if you happen to get any really good ideas, use them! The more adventure, the better!
If you need some inspiration, you can see my stories. I actually haven't been here for even a year yet, and I feel like I've blossomed. 
I hope you do though, for I could use some critique as well. Good luck on your story! And take your time. If it's one thing that you don't wanna do, it's rush. That would be bad. Just go at your own pace. 
Hmm, this sort of fic would probably be better if you waited until you finished writing the entire story, then posted it as a one-shot. It's just kinda hard to say much about a story when it's only 1000 words into it. Still, I'll wait to see where this is going.
About the only thing I can come up with to comment on is that it's a little intriguing how the entire night seemed to pass by in like ten minutes. Something odd going on, presumably.
2377282 The ten-minute night thing is coming soon ;) And this was originally gonna be a one-shot story, but I decided not to for... Well, I don't know why. But thank you for the comment
Have you given up on this story???
That makes me sad.
I was really hoping that you would continue...
3697388 Yeah, sadly. I don't really go on this website much anymore.
Which reminds me, my stories are pretty old. How are people still finding them?
That's too bad... I actually had some good ideas. But if you're not going to continue, that's fine. I still wish that you would post more though.
If you decide to come back, I'll be waiting for part 2!!! 
